| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 21:35 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG you updated. i thought that was it for this story. Bith with Trunks and vegeta very powerful. I love the last lines. Thank you for not leting this great story go. Now i wonder whats going to happen next with both Vegeta and Trunks. please updat soon.
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Title: What??
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What???!! That's horrible!! I thought the story was going to end and everything was going to end up all right and then this happens and theres not a new chapter. Omg this is rele scary, I hope Trunks is going to be ok and seriously i would have killed Epeon too. I hate her!!!!!! Ok now i'm going to anxiously await your updates!! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: la_la_saturn
Reviewed By: la_la_saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 11:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I read all 67 chapters! I love this story!!! It's damn near amazing how you wrote the characters! I hope you continue with story it would be shame to just leave off here on this cliffhanger!
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Reviewed By: Sakura Damio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I hevent really reviewed, but OMFG! I truly love how you portraied Vegeta. He seems real. (Yes I do know that he's an anime char) But he seems as though ... I don't know ... he's the way he is for a reason. I mean their's a reason Vegeta is well- an ass at times. And their's a reason he doesn't show affection in front of people. I love how deep these characters are and how you've described their memories and life events. I would have to say my favorite would have to be when Vegeta "killed" the last Saiyan. I highly believe that it was Freiza and Zarbon's fault. I would love to see her side of the story on how she, herself died. Anyway, UPDATE!!!!! I'm going insaine here, Bra has got to get better. No offence to Trunks fans, but I don't really care for him, especially since he isn't seeing Nesa's side of the story and is totally being an ass about it. Anyway, continue the magnificiant writing. -Sakura Damio
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 03:11 CST
Comment/Review:
still waiting. Do you realize that it's been over a month since you've updated??? Do you have any idea how many fans you have on this fic? You have a fan from Denmark! That's me..
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Title: O.0
Reviewed By: Female_typhoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, i did not just read 67 chapters in one week just to be left with such a KILLER clifhanger!!!! its cruel and unusual!! on a more positive spin, this is an amazing story!!! very well thought out and extreamly well written!!! there are a few errors here and there with spelling (not that mine is perfect or anything) in a few of the earlier chapters the word 'Scent' was always put as 'Scant' which looks to me like an evil spellcheck mistake. other than they there was very little wrong. some. the timing of the story could have been made a little more easy to unerstand. i had difficulty realising just how much time had passed between sections. to me it sometimes felt like absolutly everything was happening in the space of about a month!!! i will be very eagerly awaiting an update or 10 soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Daughter of the Forest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honeslty enjoyed this fic, i was waiting for you to update for a while now. i like the story line and the way you portray certain characters.It is a great fic and i hope you continue to update. Thank You.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 05:59 CST
Comment/Review:
niiiice. I'm waaaaiting for the next chapter. Love this story. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: lovememissme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dis is by far the best ff i have ever read. wat the hell is wrong with trunks! pleeeeease update soon!!!! i really wanna find out wat happens!! dis fanfic is sooo good. it is my favourite by far. i have been hooked from the first chapter. please upddate soon!
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, a lot has certainly happened in the last few chapters!! I was definitely surprised to see at the end that Trunks was indeed hurt... I thought that part was written very well. Glad to see Epeon got hers though it would have been nice to see her suffer a little ;) I've evil, aren't I?
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know i'm getting a nervous condition here. i don't know if i can take anymore of this. please don't let trunks die :( update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark ki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 04:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
when will the evilness of your storyline stop! your tortures are . . . torturing. but, i'm glad she's now dead. Trunks shouldn't feel bad.
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Reviewed By: NJNlolo On: October 03, 2005 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How much crap are you planning to do to these people?
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Reviewed By: LunaticPandora On: September 30, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You whoremuffin! What an evil cliffhanger! You must update soon! I love your story, in case you couldnt tell ;)
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.....You must update ASAP!!!! Please don't let anyone die. I don't think my poor little heart could take it. New chappie, now!!!!!
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