| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: March 14, 2005 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...I'm on pins and needles waiting for this outcome! I love the way you make them sound almost normal (I don't think Vegita could ever really be very normal...). You done wonderful justice for all the characters involved and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 22:41 CST
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I guess it's the week for argueing with the spouses. sometimes i feel theres no escape for my life and to read that bulma just wants to have sometime for herself it's not wrong. why can't they meet us half way. is it so damn hard for them to just let us have sometime for us.. oh and then try to do what they like forget it.. i loved this cahpter because i'm in a vile mood and this story helped..maria
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 05, 2005 19:25 CST
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Wow, this pair is too much sometimes. Are they ever really going to be able to find their peace, or would that really be Bulma and Vegeta
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 05, 2005 16:14 CST
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um........ remind me again why vegeta is in such a bad mood?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 21, 2005 16:47 CST
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Chapter 45 is the same as chapter 44.
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: February 20, 2005 18:41 CST
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ppst ::taps shoulder:: you uploaded the same chapter as before or it might just be my computer it does that i love this story! please keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter!!! I just hope that bulma and vegeta can work every thing out. I also hope that vegeta can some day let his past rest in peace. you are a great writer keep up the good work!!! until next chapter ttif ^-^
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: April (fyrechylde) On: February 17, 2005 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your style of writing, it's creative with an almost poetic flair to the story. You add richness and depth to your characters that is not always seen in fanfiction. The spelling and grammar do have many flaws, but not to the point that it ruins the reading experience. It's just a bit of criticism, since at times during the story, you would lose me due to a grammatical or spelling error. The originality of this story is overwhelming. As far as I can tell, no one has even dared to so deeply enter into the mind and past of Vegita. I could love your story purely on that fact alone. When you gave the flashback of the Saiyan female (not to mention some of the other flashbacks), I was totally in shock. You made me nervous and scared when the lump was found. I have to admit that your story is addictive. And I like all of those factors because you just can't find that in any story. You have extreme potentional as a writer and I would love to see that talent grow in spades. I look extremely forward to the next chapter and any other writings you come out with.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OH PLEASE OH PLEASE JUST UPDATE AND SOON...
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Reviewed By: Kat8125(not signed in) On: February 09, 2005 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, I almost cried when Vegeta removed her bandana. I just pulled at my heart strings, ya know? Anywho, great chapter. I hope there is a happy ending for everyone.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i just love this story.as i write this with tears in my eyes. you can feel the love that they have for each other, and the things that she does for him is wonderful. and i'm glad to read that trunks is happy as well and that he's going to take care of his resposiblities. WONDERFUL CHAPTER and i can't wait for more...maria
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Reviewed By: aubergine_queen On: February 09, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update this? i love it and check every day! its been too long update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Clary_rox On: January 25, 2005 03:15 CST
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i am loving this story sooo much. I also check every day to see if its updated. Youra great writer. Please update soon i am just dieing to see what happens. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Vegetazgurl On: January 17, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story so very much. Everyday I check to see if it as been updated. Vegeta is very much a tortured soul, and Bulma has really been the only one to help him survive this long. Please don't make this a sad ending. I know it can't be fluff and sunshine, but I think the Vegeta-Briefs family can make it through this and come out much closer in the end!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 12:02 CST
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great chapter, i just wish that trunks had a chance to tell his father how sorry he was...and i loved the interactions of bulma and vegeta...i really love this story..please update soon...maria
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