| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: hahaha im insane
Reviewed By: your number 27th fan On: June 22, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice ass chapter this fic is going to take number 1 soon.
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:27 CDT
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I must say thqat i really love this fic and that i'm on chap.Its a great idea and i just love it..one thing that i thought was really funny was when u wrote: Trunks ran from the room holding his eyes in his hands. Vegeta crossed his arms, smug and proud. More like he ran from the room with his hands covering his eyes..not the other was around..but anyway i thought that it was really funny and hope that u update soon!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 09:19 CDT
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wow... an interesting idea of what vegeta would have been.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell - not signed in On: June 20, 2005 19:31 CDT
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WOW That's all I can say - WOW I think I cried when Radditz died, er ... left, or whatever
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit, not logged in On: June 20, 2005 11:33 CDT
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Im so excited I don't even know what the *** I'm gonan write! Aaaaaawsome! Please, update soon!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: Maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 06:40 CDT
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You are right by far the best chapter you have written. wondefully written. Now i can't wait to read what happens next..*HUGS*...Maria
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Reviewed By: dark ki a.k.a. lee On: June 20, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooooooooo awsome. i love this story
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: June 20, 2005 00:05 CDT
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great chapter and loved how vegeta's life would be if he didn't go with freiza. update soon i wanna see how vegeta's interatcing with his family goes after this chapter.
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Reviewed By: stryderf#0 On: June 16, 2005 20:03 CDT
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ahhhh finally i can the end of a long journey.keep them coming
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Reviewed By: vegeta3 On: June 15, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter and can't wait for the next. Keep up the good work
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Title: ::excited::
Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in. AGAIN) On: June 15, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was a very interesting chapter and it keeps getting better n better. cant wait 4 ur nxt update. ive always wondered what vegetas life wouldve been like if vegetasei was never destroyed, and if he never met bulma, you know like having different mate and children. ive never read a fic that deals with that, but you're about to and im excited. i hope this well help him heal, and stop his suffering. c yah on the next update!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: June 15, 2005 19:07 CDT
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i love this chapter. its one of the best for seeing through vegeta's mind. radditz seems to be a great character with the reassurance that vegeta shouldn't punish himself and make himself feel guilty anymore. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: June 15, 2005 17:09 CDT
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Wow, what a great build-up chapter. I can't wait to see what Radditz has to show Vegeta. Update soon and good job!
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Reviewed By: design4life On: June 15, 2005 12:51 CDT
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This story is one of the best I have ever read. And I've read a LOT! The way that you have interpreted Vegeta and his past are amazing and wery well thought out. This characterization of him is very easy to believe and understand with the way he delivers himself to others (the anger, the solitude, etc.) I am a huge Bulma/Vegeta fan and your portrayal of their family life, struggles, highs and lows deserve encouragement and praise. Everyday I look for updates and stop what I am doing to read the next "installment" to this story. Thank you for writing an unbelieveably great story in the midst of all the duds out there.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 06:46 CDT
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Cliffhangers (hate them) WOW great chapter. So much hurt and confussion. poor vegeta. I hope that RADITZ can help him fanilly. one of the best so far please update soon...Maria
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