| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Keep on Writing!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please keep on writing! I love it when Vegeta does whatever Bra wants! And OMG! Epeon got her butt kicked by Bulma! The homerecker goes down!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 11:40 CDT
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OMG i love the fight scene.. it's about time bulma whiped her ASS!!!!!!.. I hope that they can work out whats going etween them soon... Of corse people are still reading your story it's a great story. can't wait for more...
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: July 27, 2005 01:04 CDT
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bra=cute! never expected that you would have brought epeon back to the story which was very surprising. though i would of wished to see more of what vegeta and bulma are going through in their minds during this "abstinance" stage. update soon!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: July 22, 2005 14:32 CDT
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ahk, she's bleeding!!.... way to go trunks! and bra how sweet she is, bad manners though
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 22:46 CDT
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Good for Trunks! I'm so glad he gave her the boot, and the fact that he kept his cool was great. I thought that scene was very well-done. As for B/V... poor Vegeta & poor Bulma. I was glad to see, though, that at least Vegeta didn't just take off. He seemed to show a spark of humanity in telling her it wasn't her fault. Still has a way to go in the compassion area, but you've shown that his character is evolving. Excellent.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 08:29 CDT
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Argh! How can you… I just… Aaargh! If things aren't getting better in the next chapter, I can't say what I might do… Oh, btw, love the way Trunks treated Nesa, that bitch, she deserves it. I don't know if I want them to end together, and I don't know if they are gonna end together, all I know is, I can't picture Trunks raising a 100 % human boy… Just doesn't fit…
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Title: I LOVE THIS FANFICTION!!!!
Reviewed By: Dbzbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take this time to tell you that I ADORE this vegetaxbulma fanfiction ^__^ It's one of the BESTS ones I've read in a while. Last week I went on vacation and I printed HALF of this fanfiction and read it while driving out of state. I CANT seem to stop reading it!! Please continue this WONDERFUL story. I am currently drawing a mini comic on the "did I ever make it to second base" scene LOL I will post it on my site www.dbzbabe.deviantart.com ^.^ I hope it is all right if I make this little comic I might cut some dialogue otherwise it would take FOREVER to get it done, I am finished with the sketches already a total of 5 pages. Keep up the amazing work my friend, KEEP THE LEMON SCENES COMING!!!! VEGETA X BULMA FOREVER!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 04:30 CDT
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Wow i'm glad he finally told her how he felt. I feel bad for even though she did what she did to him. I hope in the future that they can work things out. I was lmao when i read that vegeta was watching "everybody loves Raymond" funny show. but i knew they still had problems, wondeful as always update soon..
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: July 17, 2005 04:08 CDT
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yes the response in trunks that i wanted, but i would have thought he would have completely left her. can't get vegeta aroused liek that without any anger especially refusing him after. i liked this chapter and hopefully it will be completed soon. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark reality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like how you get to see the softer side of vegeta in this story, i also enjoyed how the you show us the memories that vegeta has. this seems like a great novel, you seemed to really get into it because you wrote over forty chapters. i have only read through the second chapter and plan on reading it to the end because i was really drawn in and want to see how it turns out.
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Reviewed By: Harlequinrose On: July 10, 2005 18:35 CDT
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i think your story is very well written and very intriging..i like the story line so far and i enjoy reading the next chapter when you get around to posting it....good luck in all ur writing....
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Title: Great as always
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 22:13 CDT
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Finally caught up to your latest chapter. Great writing as always. Loved, loved, loved the whole thing with Radditz. I thought it was a nice touch to show Vegeta how different life would have been (what an a**hole! LOL) Good cliffhanger -- I'm wondering who is in that elevator, is it Nesa?? Which reminds me... still waiting for Epeon to get hers!! That will be a good one I am sure :) Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: dark ki not login in so there. :p On: July 07, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cute and so sad. what could happen next? will there even have a happy ending? and will Vegeta ever get . . . i not going to go there. i love it, i love it, i love it and i guess i love it.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 07, 2005 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Trunks, so trusting! I'm really enjoying reading this story.
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Reviewed By: Mely On: July 07, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is incredible! You write very well. I just have one question, when did Vegeta cheat on Bulma? I don't remember that happening anywhere in this story, am I wrong?
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