| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 23, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still feel that she needs to get that check out...breast cancer is not to play with and i don't know why she hasn't. if she's so smart then tell me why she won't....i love the fact that vegeta's is opening up to the doctor's but some how i want more of his story to come out.and i know that there is some much to tell..please update soon ...maria
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Reviewed By: NF206 On: August 19, 2004 10:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
That last chapter was awesome. You're getting better. :)
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Reviewed By: animelovera On: August 16, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the best story that I have every readed. I be looking forward to the updateds of this story everyday. This is that only thing that make my day before and after I go to work. It's a very creative story, it makes you believe that this could have happen if the story line of DBZ continue. Eveytime that I read it I have picture of the story of how it would be. It goes into detail about Vegeta's life. IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: NF206 On: August 15, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your best story, from far. It describes Vegeta's character in a way only a few fanfics are able to: it just seems to fit exactly with the way Toriyama imagined it. Many thanks for your Work. :)
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 13, 2004 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter.i hope that you are ok where you live.please be safe.can't wait to hear from you soon..maria
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: im lovin it On: August 10, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAD talent! Awesome, incredible, lovely
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Reviewed By: Lexyyyyyyyyyyy On: August 10, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 08, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm ssssssssssssssooooooooooo glad to hear that this is going to be a long saga...i want more out of this story then any other..no onw has ever done this before so i respect your writing...i can;t wait to read more of it...maria
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: August 08, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that I never took the time to review your story before. But your fanfic is really amazing. It's very refreshing and I look forward to your updates.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 07, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man.i knew that things where going to get worse.i wait pease for them but it just dosen't look like that it will happen...i hope that if bulma has breast cancer that it's curable...i don't know how much it can take from this story.please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 05, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good. all your chapters give the readers a suspense ending which makes everyone come back for the next one. also you also update quickly so readers don't have to wait long to see what new and creative lit you are writing. keep going!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 04, 2004 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter.how you got vegeta to talk to those doctor's and the feeling that he's going though well written..can't wait to read more so update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:46 CDT
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aH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so good!! omg im like tottaly n competaly in love w/ this fic... sry i cant spell ne more 2 excited n hyper!! please please please please write more soon ah its so good i cant wait to here bout vegets torture n evehthing god i love this fic sry im rabmlin now buit write more soon!!!!!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 03, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter.such detail.now i really can't wait for the next chapter...i really feel for vegeta.in our lives we all go though stuff.so why should this be any different..very good job with this so far...can't wait for more...maria
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 03, 2004 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great story.i just started to read it i love it..i feel sorry for the hole family.but i know at least he's going to get so help.please update soon..maria
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