| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 07, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow it's nice to know that your still around.i hope that you and your family are ok.and that there is no more hurricanes in your future..as for the story i still love it.the way he feel for her not saying it but showing it. sometimes words are not enough., but actions are. i always wondered why did they wish for there wives to live as long as they did.if they loved them so much..as the question never the answer...please stay dry...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 31, 2004 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
these were excellent chapters. poor bra surprising vegeta liek that and getting hurt and poor vegeta for hurting bra. update soon please!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 30, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow these chapters was great.i'm glad that you didn't delate them.there wasa nothing wrong with them.your just going into detail with your syory so please keep up with it ok...i can't wait to read more of it,,what does vegeta have in store for bulma...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 30, 2004 03:30 CDT
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sorry that i didn't review the other chapters but one. i really enjoy this fic, its very descriptive and gets into vegeta's mind and with the twist of bulma maybe having breast cancer is very intense. keep going cause there are still a lot of unanswered questions to us readers!
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Reviewed By: ardanxela On: August 28, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great, love the phycological parts. update soon, Please!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 23, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still feel that she needs to get that check out...breast cancer is not to play with and i don't know why she hasn't. if she's so smart then tell me why she won't....i love the fact that vegeta's is opening up to the doctor's but some how i want more of his story to come out.and i know that there is some much to tell..please update soon ...maria
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Reviewed By: NF206 On: August 19, 2004 10:48 CDT
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That last chapter was awesome. You're getting better. :)
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Reviewed By: animelovera On: August 16, 2004 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is the best story that I have every readed. I be looking forward to the updateds of this story everyday. This is that only thing that make my day before and after I go to work. It's a very creative story, it makes you believe that this could have happen if the story line of DBZ continue. Eveytime that I read it I have picture of the story of how it would be. It goes into detail about Vegeta's life. IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: NF206 On: August 15, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your best story, from far. It describes Vegeta's character in a way only a few fanfics are able to: it just seems to fit exactly with the way Toriyama imagined it. Many thanks for your Work. :)
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 13, 2004 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter.i hope that you are ok where you live.please be safe.can't wait to hear from you soon..maria
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: im lovin it On: August 10, 2004 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAD talent! Awesome, incredible, lovely
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Reviewed By: Lexyyyyyyyyyyy On: August 10, 2004 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT
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Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 08, 2004 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm ssssssssssssssooooooooooo glad to hear that this is going to be a long saga...i want more out of this story then any other..no onw has ever done this before so i respect your writing...i can;t wait to read more of it...maria
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: August 08, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry that I never took the time to review your story before. But your fanfic is really amazing. It's very refreshing and I look forward to your updates.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 07, 2004 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man.i knew that things where going to get worse.i wait pease for them but it just dosen't look like that it will happen...i hope that if bulma has breast cancer that it's curable...i don't know how much it can take from this story.please update soon...maria
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