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 Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf  On: October 12, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really really liked this chapter so much. oh how i would do the same thing if i was bulma...and the way vegeta and trunks where together was percious.please update soon..maria
 Reviewed By: PTL  On: October 11, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is amazing, I'm always looking for good B/V fics, especially when Bulla is a little girl. It's always fun to have her there. Anyways, I just wanted to say that I'm so happy that I'm reading this story. It is extremely well written, and has never made me want to stop reading it. I accually stayed up all night, on a schoolnight, and read all of the story. I was even almost late for my bus. I cannot wait until the next story comes out. Keep up the great fiction!!! *Thumbs up* :D
 Title: needed
Reviewed By: mlf  On: October 09, 2004 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was hard to read.i'm sure it must have been hard to write.i've been married for 21 years i could easily feel the same way that bulma does.my head is shaking as i write this...i really love this story and i can't not wait untill you up date...great chapter...i want more...maria
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: October 09, 2004 00:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was sooo sad. what is bulma going through now? will she forgive vegeta or have a resentment against him for now on. what happened during her doctors appointment, is something wrong? please update soon this is getting sooooooo GOOD!
 Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 08, 2004 21:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwww. Poor Bulma. She's going through so much right now. Can't wait to see the next chappy.
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 29, 2004 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
vegeta's life is so horrible. who wouldn't be a littel parnoid and closed with that kind of past. vegeta's parents did seem to love eachother, another one of those love stuggles that ends in death. he finally told bulma a bit of his past and how he cared for his mother. maybe soon he can tell her everything. heres hoping. update soon!!!!
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 29, 2004 00:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehehe vegeta is ticklish! who would of thought that would occur. bra is still cute as ever and vegeta is still stubborn, but we know he;ll open up soon for bulma.
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 29, 2004 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
so thats why vegeta doesn't want anymore kids. awww.. just worrying about bulma. no way should bra and goten get together that is just wrong i totally agree with bulma. chi chi doesn't know what she's talking about. thanks for the update with 3 chapters!
 Reviewed By: neko-ch@n  On: September 28, 2004 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta he had a horrible life,seeing his father killing his mother...it's just terrible. I think it would be wonderful for Bulma to get pregnant with another child.Raising a child wanted from both parents would help this couple to grow a lot.think about a mini-Vegeta:that would be just tooo cute...a little vegeta-chan free to grow happy and loved!!!And thanks to the dragonball Buma's healt would be safe.
 Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf  On: September 27, 2004 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok my poor vegeta.i can only imagine how that must of felt to see your mother die at the hands of your father how terrible for him...and i know that bulma is trying to help him why can't he just let her.and what about her lump and the baby that she wants are this going to be answered soon...maria
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 22, 2004 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww.. bra is cute again in this story! too bad vegeta still can't talk about is mother. the way the doctor threatens vegeta in the room seems to be very stupid because vegeta can easily kill hime when the doctor leaves the room. update soon!
 Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf  On: September 22, 2004 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was a good chapter..to see them interact with each other is a nice change...please keep it coming..maria
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 13, 2004 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww.. poor vegeta, stupid yamcha look what he did got bulma and vegeta into a argument. where did the baby idea came from, does it have to do with the fact bulma is scared of that "lump" in her breast. are you gonna adress that soon and will vegeta find out what a lump means? update soon!!
 Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf  On: September 13, 2004 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i'm lmao heer....i loved this chapter..omg this was great.do you hear me GREAT...:).i can't stop laughing...i want more.it was a good change from what we keep reading...can't wait for more...maria
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 08, 2004 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
yow sah... that was some outfit bulma had and no wonder why vegeta bought it! aww... bra is soooo cute in those chapters and hopefully vegeta will open up more soon at his sessions. update soon!
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