| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: November 09, 2004 19:18 CST
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Poor Vegeta, maybe they can find a med combo that doesn't leave him so blah. I thought it was hilarious when he went with Bulma to her pre-op. I could just picture the facial expressions he was making while she explained things to him. How is he going to react to her surgery? Bulma's gonna crash and burn soon if she doesn't accept any help. I love the story, thanks for the updates.
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: November 03, 2004 22:05 CST
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that bitch, dont worry trunks i'll kill her for you!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 03, 2004 21:08 CST
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so glad that u skipped the trial and everything about that so no lagging on with the story. poor trunks hes really taking this hard and who wouldn't! please update soon want to know more.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 01, 2004 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter is on of the best i've read so far..i talk to my son all the time like that and when he hurts i feel it and want to beat the crap out of the girls but i know that he has to handle his problems and grow up..wonderfully writen,,,claps to you...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 28, 2004 22:24 CDT
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yay at least we know now that bulma will be okay she won't die or anything. grr... damn why couldn't trunks just raise his ki a little more, she deserves to get her ass beaten but a little shattered hand would also be good. damn.... vegeta's past getting darker and darker now. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: cLaRyRoX On: October 28, 2004 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GrEaT GrEaT GrEaT!!!! LoVinG It!! Plz update. Really wana see the next chappy. U write Vegeta really well. Good on u. Keep up the good work =P
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 28, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so much to say about this chapter.fist i'm glad that vegeta is dealing with his pain and his past.he needs to put it behind him so he can heal.oh and i hope that bulma will kick that B^%^*$@#@ ass and soon...and i'm glad that she told him about the breast cancer.it's good that you put a human sickness in this story for them to deal with.it's a serious subject and i applaud you for that...please updat soon...maria
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 23:23 CDT
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I have to agree with Bulma, that went better than I expected. How are the kids gonna react? Please tell me someone beats the sh*t out of this slut that keeps screwing around with them.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 19:54 CDT
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Holy crap, what a great freaking story. Please update soon. I want to see how he reacts to this
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 22, 2004 08:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i want to cry..all that time trunks knew but never said nothing.and now bulma with the CANCER how much more is vegeta and his family will go through to be happy and at peace..great chapter..can't wait for more..maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 22, 2004 00:48 CDT
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thats quite disturbing with what trunks saw when he was 9, i think anyone would seeing a parent like that especially with someone not your mother. finally we know whats wrong with bulma... dragging it out like that making us guess. damn... bulma and vegeta got it on haha and trunks was soo cute but... hes still 16, pretty old. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:17 CDT
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Heh, I knew Vegeta...frustrated. Guess I didn't realize how much. Anywho nice chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 19, 2004 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad the he see's his blessings in front of him..he's always been a great dad because he stayed with them unlike goku..and i can't wait to read on how that woman will try to sue bulma..please update soon..maria great chapter again!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 18, 2004 21:34 CDT
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once again bra is sooo cute!! damn... someones horny haha. wow vegeta has emotions now and yet its feels weird to know that. wow bulma sure did a number on that bitch, yeah right vegetawould sleep with her. update soon!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: October 12, 2004 17:41 CDT
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good that bitch got fired!!! hahah pretty interesting with the converstation vegeta and trunks had. are we gonna find out more about bulma's doctor appointments? bulma seemed to forgive vegeta toooooo quickly, hopefully there'll be a scene that will give a huge suspense about vegeta and bulma. update soon!!!
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