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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 28, 2004 21:48 CST
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*gasp* what bra saw is very disturbing, seeing mommy and daddy like that. thank god she didnt' know what was really going on. enjoyed that vegeta went to talk to the doctor without bulma knowing. hope you skip through bulma's surgery but not the ordeal afterwards. update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 28, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness that was ssooooo great.i need a VERY COLD shower..you know my son use to do the same damn thing.so i know he they felt...oh this story gets better and better everytime i read it...please update soon...maria
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Title: up to chapter 27 of Finding Peace
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 16:54 CST
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Oh my Gosh Vegeta nearly cheated on Bulma I can't wait to find out what Bulma does to Epeon, for 'hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.' I am finding it a little hard to take in that Vegeta made out with a woman apart from Bulma eight years ago as up untill recently Vegeta has always been aware of his surroundings as soon as Epeon stepped in the room he would have known it wasn't Bulma because of the Ki and if that failed he would of noticed the different sent. I'm not sure whether it's more the fact that he was lonely and depressed and mistook her for Bulma in his dream or that he knew for a fact that it wasn't Bulma but wished deep down that it was,which could explain why he didn't open his eyes so as not to prove his fantasy wrong. But then again he did say he wasn't attracted to Epeon which still leads me feeling confused as to why he would do it. I'm on to the next chapter can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 11:16 CST
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This story is great it seems that it will be a while before the Breifs Find Peace in their lives let alone the saiyan especially now that Bulma might have Breast cancer.
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Reviewed By: hurrah On: November 24, 2004 10:51 CST
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This story is really cool but it would be even better if the chapters were longer and you wouldn't make these giant gaps between lines. Thank you! :)
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 23, 2004 21:08 CST
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yes vegeta will look sexy with an eye patch but still better with both. very deep chapter with the interaction between vegeta and trunks. update soon.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 23, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know that we all have our demons to deal with just like vegeta but he has a valid point about why he feels this way.he killed alot of people and now he's living on earth and doing what he destroyed...but there has to be a way to put all his demons to rest without drugs..thats just me i guess.and i wish tha the had a better realationship with his son..maybe someday he will..i'm glad for bulma we woman nkow what to stay at the right time don't we...anyway great chapter update soon...maria
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Title: Finding Peace up to chapter 5 and loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad i followed the suggestion from Tempestt's forum to read this fic because it is brilliant. The way you portray how Vegetas past is still effecting him allows me to be transported with vegeta to his flashbacks experiencing the pain and the hurt with him. I felt like i'd been hit with a sledge hammer after vegetas first flashback where he was taken back to his first rape victim, the last female saiyan! The way you portray the relationships within his family is very captivating, i was filled with laughter when Bra kept mimicking everything Vegeta was saying like a typical 4yr old. I am especially entranced by the relationship between Bulma and Vegeta and how well you've depicted Bulmas frustration and helplessness at not being able to do more to destroy the demons of Vegetas past. And the beautiful way she tries to comfort him humming a melodious tune while caressing vegetas skin hoping that her lullabye will soothe the agonising screams that echo throughout his tormented soul. Oh my gosh and the extract from the lyrics to Crawling by Linkin Park fits very well with the story i've listened to it about two times whilst reading this.
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 20, 2004 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sweet...claps to trunks and his mom...ans a BIG HAPPY BIRTHDAY to you...but don't ever think your free because your not...lol update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 19, 2004 01:42 CST
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well first off... happy birthday! yes the chapter was short and no vegeta *pouts* but it was still good. at least you got rid of that slut. to bad vegeta didnt' get to meet her haha. update soon!
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Reviewed By: cLaRyRoX On: November 18, 2004 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loving this story sooo much, plz update soon. Poor Bulma, my mum had breast cancer and i know what Trunks is feeling. I luv Vegeta sooo much too. Please update
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Title: reali good
Reviewed By: Daughter of the Forest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:46 CST
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hey i realli like your story. its so kool to see vegeta as such a vunerable character to such things as going to a therapist and having nightmares that cause him pain. i like the way you write this story so please update soon..thanxs
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Title: reali good
Reviewed By: Daughter of the Forest [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 21:45 CST
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hey i realli like your story. its so kool to see vegeta as such a vunerable character to such things as going to a therapist and having nightmares that cause him pain. i like the way you write this tory so please update soon..thanxs
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: November 11, 2004 21:34 CST
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awww... poor vegeta can't even enjoy some lovin'. what will happen with trunks and his ex? update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 09, 2004 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was lmao when they where in the doctors office.i feel so sorry for trunks .i really hope that something is done about that..and yes medication can effect your sex life.(not that i take them just know).i really am falling more in love with this story.and can wait for more...maria
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