| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man i just love this story.as i write this with tears in my eyes. you can feel the love that they have for each other, and the things that she does for him is wonderful. and i'm glad to read that trunks is happy as well and that he's going to take care of his resposiblities. WONDERFUL CHAPTER and i can't wait for more...maria
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Reviewed By: aubergine_queen On: February 09, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update this? i love it and check every day! its been too long update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Clary_rox On: January 25, 2005 03:15 CST
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i am loving this story sooo much. I also check every day to see if its updated. Youra great writer. Please update soon i am just dieing to see what happens. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Vegetazgurl On: January 17, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story so very much. Everyday I check to see if it as been updated. Vegeta is very much a tortured soul, and Bulma has really been the only one to help him survive this long. Please don't make this a sad ending. I know it can't be fluff and sunshine, but I think the Vegeta-Briefs family can make it through this and come out much closer in the end!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 12:02 CST
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great chapter, i just wish that trunks had a chance to tell his father how sorry he was...and i loved the interactions of bulma and vegeta...i really love this story..please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya!! a new chapter!!!! can't wait for the next one!!!!! you have really brought this story to life for me. I have really enjoyed reading this story! ^-^
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 09, 2005 16:37 CST
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I hope after this therapy session, the doctor will speak privately to Trunks and tell him to not demand more of his father than he is able to give, and make him read his notes from previous sessions to give Trunks an idea of what his father had to endure until he became a father.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: sun_raye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story! Everything so well written and it really sounds like you know what you're talking about. I Especially like Vegeta's sessions they seem so real (not that I would know or anything :) So great job and keep up the good work!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how much more does this family have to go though before they are alright...god this was a very sad chapter really.it pains me to read about the thinks that happened to him..and i know that this does happen in really life but DAMN...i just want them to be happy..please update soon...maria
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to agree with bulma with whats happening and how she said it to her son..but i can also understand why trunks feels the why he does..i just feel sorry for all of the really i do..and poor bra she has no clue as to what's going on in her fanily lives. thank you giving us this gift of a chapter before christmas...and i hope you have a wonderful holiday with you family unlike vegeta's family...maria
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Title: "Finding Peace"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story loved it.i feel sorry for all of them right now...almost sounds like my family lo=ife...lol...update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: December 10, 2004 22:57 CST
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damn trunks making vegeta go back to the GR. glad you skipped through bulma's surgery quickly and bulmas fine! too bad you didn't post what bulma was talking to bra and explaining to her what she witnessed. update soon!!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 10, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad the he was there for her.but he also needs to there for his kids as well.i just love the way you go inside of them and bring them to life..wonderful chapter again and i can't wait to read more..please update soon...so is vegeta going to last four days and NO SEX...lol
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY! YOU REALLY BRING IT TO LIFE! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW YOU END IT! PLEASE A HAPPY ENDING! FROM A NEW FAN!! ^-^
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: Venus L On: November 29, 2004 05:53 CST
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oh my gosh how can Epeon just turn the tables like that. I was just cheering for Bulma to punch her . Oh and the website I got the link from was http://www.geocities.com/tempestrose12/ and the review was in the Forum under Recommended Fics List by Purple Rose.
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