| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: March 14, 2005 20:49 CST
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::blinks:: ::rechecks to make sure she's in the right story:: i'll write that one off as a dream sequence until the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: um ok On: March 14, 2005 20:01 CST
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thinking maybe you posted the wrong chapter...
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Reviewed By: Sk8turgurl On: March 14, 2005 19:59 CST
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Okay, I am officially confused. Your chapter summary and the story don't match. Did I miss something? Up until now, I have been breathlessly waiting for each chapter to be posted.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 14, 2005 19:51 CST
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Wow, what a chapter although I am a little confused. Was this a dream or what? What happened to Bulma, how did she die? Where was Nesa. Is this kind of like a what-could-have-been type thing? As violent as Trunks was in this chpater, I have to say that I think it was the most expressive and caring Vegeta has ever been towards his son. I really liked it, please update soon so we can find out what's going on
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Reviewed By: Mallie On: March 14, 2005 19:12 CST
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Ummm i am alittle confused...you see this seems like the one of the chapters from your story 'Only One' ....and this chapter has nothing to do with ..Bulma spending time with another man...maybe you made a mistake just fix it and let us see the real chappie!! :)
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: March 14, 2005 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...I'm on pins and needles waiting for this outcome! I love the way you make them sound almost normal (I don't think Vegita could ever really be very normal...). You done wonderful justice for all the characters involved and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 22:41 CST
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I guess it's the week for argueing with the spouses. sometimes i feel theres no escape for my life and to read that bulma just wants to have sometime for herself it's not wrong. why can't they meet us half way. is it so damn hard for them to just let us have sometime for us.. oh and then try to do what they like forget it.. i loved this cahpter because i'm in a vile mood and this story helped..maria
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 05, 2005 19:25 CST
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Wow, this pair is too much sometimes. Are they ever really going to be able to find their peace, or would that really be Bulma and Vegeta
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: March 05, 2005 16:14 CST
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um........ remind me again why vegeta is in such a bad mood?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 21, 2005 16:47 CST
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Chapter 45 is the same as chapter 44.
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Reviewed By: theshakeyone On: February 20, 2005 18:41 CST
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ppst ::taps shoulder:: you uploaded the same chapter as before or it might just be my computer it does that i love this story! please keep going!!!
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter!!! I just hope that bulma and vegeta can work every thing out. I also hope that vegeta can some day let his past rest in peace. you are a great writer keep up the good work!!! until next chapter ttif ^-^
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: April (fyrechylde) On: February 17, 2005 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your style of writing, it's creative with an almost poetic flair to the story. You add richness and depth to your characters that is not always seen in fanfiction. The spelling and grammar do have many flaws, but not to the point that it ruins the reading experience. It's just a bit of criticism, since at times during the story, you would lose me due to a grammatical or spelling error. The originality of this story is overwhelming. As far as I can tell, no one has even dared to so deeply enter into the mind and past of Vegita. I could love your story purely on that fact alone. When you gave the flashback of the Saiyan female (not to mention some of the other flashbacks), I was totally in shock. You made me nervous and scared when the lump was found. I have to admit that your story is addictive. And I like all of those factors because you just can't find that in any story. You have extreme potentional as a writer and I would love to see that talent grow in spades. I look extremely forward to the next chapter and any other writings you come out with.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OH PLEASE OH PLEASE JUST UPDATE AND SOON...
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Reviewed By: Kat8125(not signed in) On: February 09, 2005 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, I almost cried when Vegeta removed her bandana. I just pulled at my heart strings, ya know? Anywho, great chapter. I hope there is a happy ending for everyone.
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