| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 04:42 CDT
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well i did write more but i'm not sure what happened. Love the story and the way you write...please update soon ok...
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 04:40 CDT
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Pain thats all they have is pain. *cries* what's wrong with bulma o please don't let it be her cancer >.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: June 30, 2005 03:08 CDT
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is this family gonna get away from pain and anxiety. it seems when one problem is resolved another one pops right up, and that makes great reading. UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: whoa
Reviewed By: Dark ki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what's with Bulma. she missed him sure but, i don't t hink that's it. i sooo love this story.
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Title: Intriguing
Reviewed By: Trisha_ On: June 29, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter. I wonder what is up with Bulma..is the cancer back? Did she cheat on him or something? Ill be waiting for an update! Later.
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Title: hahaha im insane
Reviewed By: your number 27th fan On: June 22, 2005 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice ass chapter this fic is going to take number 1 soon.
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 13:27 CDT
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I must say thqat i really love this fic and that i'm on chap.Its a great idea and i just love it..one thing that i thought was really funny was when u wrote: Trunks ran from the room holding his eyes in his hands. Vegeta crossed his arms, smug and proud. More like he ran from the room with his hands covering his eyes..not the other was around..but anyway i thought that it was really funny and hope that u update soon!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 09:19 CDT
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wow... an interesting idea of what vegeta would have been.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell - not signed in On: June 20, 2005 19:31 CDT
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WOW That's all I can say - WOW I think I cried when Radditz died, er ... left, or whatever
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit, not logged in On: June 20, 2005 11:33 CDT
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Im so excited I don't even know what the *** I'm gonan write! Aaaaaawsome! Please, update soon!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: Maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 06:40 CDT
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You are right by far the best chapter you have written. wondefully written. Now i can't wait to read what happens next..*HUGS*...Maria
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Reviewed By: dark ki a.k.a. lee On: June 20, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooooooooo awsome. i love this story
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: June 20, 2005 00:05 CDT
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great chapter and loved how vegeta's life would be if he didn't go with freiza. update soon i wanna see how vegeta's interatcing with his family goes after this chapter.
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Reviewed By: stryderf#0 On: June 16, 2005 20:03 CDT
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ahhhh finally i can the end of a long journey.keep them coming
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Reviewed By: vegeta3 On: June 15, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter and can't wait for the next. Keep up the good work
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