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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 › » ] | Title: chapter39
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, another one ^^, ~ lol, i loved the scene with Trunks and Goten, that was really funny XD ~ and Vegeta's going to grow his tail back? WOOT! ^_^ ~ keep on going! ^-^
| Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: June 18, 2006 04:18 PDT
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Sorry to be remiss in reviewing lately, it is definitely not because I have lost interest, that would never happen. I've been concentrating on a few of my own stories, and they kept me busy. So I Just wanted to catch up and say I'm still here and I still want more of this! Love the scenes between Goten and Trunks.
| Title: Chapter 36-38
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! ~ sorry for not reviewing the last couple of chapters, i really wanted to but, i couldn't think of a good review to give you... i'd basically say something along the lines of, 'this was cool', 'i liked this chapter' and 'i hope you update soon'.. don't get me wrong, everyone fanfic writer loves hearing that, even short reviews are fine but, i just hate repeating myself over and over you know? ~ but i did love those chapter, i've never actually read anything like that, and the concept of Vegeta actually knowing and willing that bulma would become pregnant was pretty new to me. i have rad fics that are sort of like that but, all of them were with Vegeta being OOC, and you definitely (in my eyes) kept him in character. ~ and the birth of Trunks was VERY different. he actually came and (sort of) helped Bulma through it *again, Vegeta is still in character so, banzai! ^-^
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 06:06 PDT
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I'm worries for the both of them. I love how you give us some insight into their love for each other without saying it. thanks for the update, can't wait to read more!!!!
| Title: chap 38
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged in) On: June 12, 2006 01:41 PDT
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Trunks' Ahmek dan was very eventful indeed, even having Vegeta aid in his entrance into the world. This line cracked me up, when Yamucha was looking for a doctor, 'I just knew if I brought back a man, Vegeta would kill me on the spot for letting some 'pathetic, weakling human' look at his woman." More laughter filled the room, and Vegeta scowled. "And I knew that if I brought a woman, Vegeta would kill me on the spot for bringing some 'silly female' to deliver his child." "So what did you do?" Trunks asked him. Goten leaned his arm on Trunks' thigh, and he grinned at the story teller. "So you got Piccolo, right?"' lol
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in ) On: June 12, 2006 00:23 PDT
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Wonderful. The history of Trunks was described well. I liked it! Vegeta helped Bulma when she needed him most. Looks like Goku/Kakarott has his thoughts already affected by the pregnancy. ;) I know that both of them love their human wives dearly, but saiyan biology might (for lack of a better word) 'tweak' it a little, especially with the tail talk. Oh before I forget, what did Goten give Trunks, that horrified Chichi?
| Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 15:34 PDT
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I would like to think that vegeta had some part when bulma went into labor. Labor is a painful experience but the outcome is the greatest thing. i love vegeta's reaction after trunks was born. this was a excellent chapter, and i can't wait to read more with goku and vegeta. please update soo. Maccam
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: June 08, 2006 10:15 PDT
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I always enjoy your stories. Looks like Goku was after Vegeta for a long time, subconciously, and did not know it. It also looks like his moods will be changing soon from the pregnancy. The story of Trunks is a nice look into the Bulma and Vegeta's past and how he came to be. I look forward to the next part. :)
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: June 06, 2006 21:20 PDT
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I loved this chapter! Flashbacks were excellent. A great new perspective on the conception of Trunks. The only thing I'm worried about is Goku's jealousy and so it seems, so is he. Thanks for this chapter (especially because it was such a long one). I look forward to the next installment.
| Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What a great chapter! I loved this side of Vegeta you showed!! and *in a sing song voice* Goku's a little jealous. Keep the chapters coming please, you're doing great!
| Title: chapter 37
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy (not logged in) On: June 05, 2006 10:50 PDT
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Awww that was so beautiful, I enjoyed your interpretation of how Trunks was conceived, it was sweet, especially the way Vegeta was with Bulma and his humourous comments, I was like oh my gosh Vegeta just cracked a joke...more than once. It's quite refreshing to see his humourous and funny side, you see it in the dbz series but then it is more a bitter mocking humour (still funny)reserved for enemies. I enjoyed seeing the more lighter side of his humour, with his adorable cockiness, especially when he said 'now, now'to Bulma, and when he said 'you were..' indicating to Bulma to resume bathing him lol. I felt sorry for Goku as he seems to be feeling a tinge of jealousy towards Bulma and Vegeta's relationship, and I also worry about what story Vegeta and Goku's child will be told on its birthday. Will the tradition continue?
| Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 07:45 PDT
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I loved everything about this chapter. I think i understand Goku's reaction to tell you the truth i would be jealous myself. he looks up to vegeta and i feel in small smal way wants his approval. that was a nice touch. can't wait to read more!!!!
| Reviewed By: VenusLegacy(not logged in) On: May 28, 2006 05:03 PDT
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I'm really enjoying this story so much I always look forward to every single update. To be honest this is the first mpreg story I have ever read, before I use to stear well clear of them, I probably would never have read this story if I knew it was going to be an mpreg but my god I am so glad I did read it, your brilliant charcterisations and skillful story telling got me hooked and I just could not deny myself the treat of this story, I love how you portray every single character, especially the interactions between Goku and Vegeta. My excitement increases just reading this story I particularly enjoy the intimate familial scenarios you depict, they feel so genuine. I hope you feel better too and that you have a smooth recovery, take it easy, as much as I want you to update soon, you should relax and take time to recover :)
| Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 19:23 PDT
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What a great chapter! I loved the part where Marron gave Goku the teddy bear. That was so cute!! Hope you update soon. Can't wait.
| Title: Truely Awesome!
Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 18:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been keeping up with this story for a while and I can honestly say that every chaper is better then the last. I'm never bored with it and the longer I read, the more I realize this story has something for everyone. The storyline may not be original, but it's certianly the most well written. It's a true joy to read and I can't wait to see how eveything turns out...hell, I can't wait to hear the story of how Trunks [and even Bulla] was concieved. Continue the excellent work! ~Kenya
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