| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 03:01 PDT
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you little evil bitchie!! kinda having a cliffhanger here don't you..-_- I wanna know what's gonna happen...so please...forget your evil side for a moment and update soon!! pretty please!? well...see you next chappie! kissies EV
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Reviewed By: Skyaaes On: April 07, 2007 00:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh your killing me (T-T). Oh man I can't for the next chapter!!!(^_^) THIs is one the best stories I ever read.
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Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 21:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gaaaaaah! You are killing me! *evil cliffhangers* Now I'm even more desperate to read Trunks and Goten's "talk." As usual, another excellent chapter and I shall continue to eagerly await the next.
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Reviewed By: Star-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 15:54 PDT
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And my inner TrunksxGoten fangirl squees with delight. n__n This new arc of the story seems interesting. I'm definitely waiting for new chapters!
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Reviewed By: Kurochan21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 11:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I. LOVE. YOU.
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Title: excellent work~
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: March 25, 2007 17:51 PDT
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This continues to be great, Bdie! Trunks and Goten make a great couple, imho. Poor vegeta being 'clanless' got me a bit choked up. But perhaps now that he will live with Goku's 'clan' he won't feel so left out!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 08:34 PDT
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waaaaaaaaaaaaah update update update!! I just loooooved the kissing vbetween Trunks and Goten!! It was so hot!! I'm dying to know what will happen...thank you so much for writing this story...I love you for it...I swear!!so I beg you..on my knees...UPDATE!! kissies EV
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Title: Chapter 60 review
Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: March 24, 2007 22:21 PDT
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I'm back from my mini-trip. Vegeta is becoming quite the family man. :-p I wonder how he and the Briefs Family will handle the Son Family, under the same roof. Wow. Goten and Trunks actually took another step forward in their relationship. And Trunks had *thought* about it beforehand! I know the characters well enough, through your writing, to know that there was as subtle desperation on Goten's part in clinging to Trunks since the incident; perhaps the reverse is true also. That aside, the daily events of their lives built upon the connection they had already. The looks on their faces will be priceless when the find out about their parents arrangement. I like how you chose the full names Vejita and Ninji now have. I anticipate the next chapter.
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Title: Chapter 60
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: March 24, 2007 09:50 PDT
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Wah! Nice, NICE! I liked this a lot. :) Trunks and Goten work so well together. This had me drooling a bit. *cleans it off keybored* No matter how long you make this story, I'll keep on reading. Even the next story you make. Your just too good. :)
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Reviewed By: Vegeta_whirl_girl On: March 24, 2007 08:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this fic is so much fun. Let the story be as long as you want, we'll keep reading...
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Title: Best Chapter EVER!
Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yessssssss! TRUNKS AND GOTEN!!! Seriously, that was the best chapter yet. The entire thing was deadly to my inner fangirl, but the kiss Trunks and Goten shared was just beautiful. I always figured that intimacy between them would go something like that so I'm glad to know other writers share, and have validated my theories. Every chapter there is more and more for me to look forward too and for that I'm greatful. You are truly a great storyteller and great storytellers are rare breeds in fanfiction. To convey such complex emotions and keep everyone in character is a talent a lot of people lack, but for some reason I'm not worried about you. I know I'm going to get a quality chapter every time and is never disappointed. Thank You for being for giving me something to look forward to every week. I can't wait to see future chapters. ~Kenya
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Title: Who says it needs to end?
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't care if it doesn't end just as long as you keep writing. Really looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: March 22, 2007 17:25 PDT
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If I have not said it before, I'll say it again: You are such a tease. The closeness between Goten and Trunks looks like it's getting more intense, and the contact between them seems to be getting more intimate. This chapter was well thought out and really showed the inner feelings beneath the surface of the characters. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter. I have been gone for a bit so it was good to see an update. :) Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 23:37 PDT
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This is the best chapter I have ever read! I love the way you write. You totally ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: Ebonystar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 19:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to first admit that I've never been a fan of anything Vegeta/Goku but it's okay because I love your fic anyway. The biggest thing I enjoy in fanfiction is when the author stays true to the character and you stick to that like crazyglue. Corny, I know, but I can't find another way to explain it. I've been following this fiction for...forever it seems but I'm always checking to see if you've updated and get excited when you have! So thank you very much for your wonderful style of writing and for the many laughs and "aww Vegeta"'s (he's one of my favorite characters and you do him splendid justice). And I love mammoth fanfictions anyway. You're doing a wonderful job and again, thank you for the entertainment. :D
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