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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: havenoclue [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 08:29 PDT
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It's one hell of a story and you're one hell of a writer! I've just find this story recently and spent 2 days to read all 73 chapter of it! I can't stop!!! Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Rownaseria On: July 20, 2008 02:36 PDT
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I just wanted to say that this was very fun and interesting to read (if long!) I really like how you actually came up with a situation that lead to babies besides oh! suddenly I'm inexplicably horny and oops, now someone's pregnant. (Sometimes it's done well and many times it's not.) I also like how the characters actually have to work through their issues and things don't just fix themselves. Also, the idea of one big family is such fun and the babies are so cute. I usually don't read mpreg fictions because they get very silly sometimes, but this is very good and I really enjoyed the way you wrote all the characters, so over all it was quite a good read. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: Izzygirl On: June 24, 2008 15:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have kept coming back to this story since i discovered it not too long after you started writing. I love it. The characters are well written and the plot is touching and exciting. I am so enamored of the relationship you are creating between Goku and Vegeta. I rarely find fics of this caliber and I wanted to congratulate you and say that you have a true fan and i always eagerly await your next chapter. =)
| Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 17:38 PDT
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I woke up today with thte desire to reread this story and was happy to find that there was a new chapter even. Whoot. I love this story and how things are going. I kinda feel a bit sorry for Pan though. Bulla the fashion designer who can kick her brothers butt. My favorite part though was "Tiny Bears Forest Friends." What a great way to end a chapter.
| Title: terrible two chapter 73
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 02:41 PDT
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Another great chapter B, man I thought that scene with Vegeta Goku and the twins was so sweet, I couldn't believe it when Vejiita said 'kiss mama'. I liked that we got to see more of Vegeta's vulnerable side, It's amazing how they each have grown and changed since the experience, it seems to have been a blessing in disguise, I wonder how far Goku and Vegeta's friendship will change, where will their relationship lead? This other side to Vegeta just makes me swoon, the way he gave everyone a good night kiss, his attempts to train the kids (lol I thought that was funny), and then the last scene where he read Ninji a story. I'm feeling a weird conflict about the Goten Trunks and Bra situation, on the one hand I am really happy about Goten and Trunks, yet another part of me still thinks Bra should be with Goten. Is that other saiyan ship still out there, I think she needs a saiyan man. And what's Daikkon up to? "research" indeed. lol I need to stop being hard on him. I am glad you're feeling better as well.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 01:27 PDT
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I wan joose too! Extreme cuteness in this chapter. I'm glad that the twins are older now-- they're even cuter as toddlers than as babies. Goku touched Vegeta's temple! In concern!! But Vegeta weaseled out of the kiss.^^'' That was some very skillful evasion/answering from both Veg and Goten. Thanks for the update, and hope you're feeling better soom.
| Title: My Favorite FanFic!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the last few chapters. You've taken the time to develop the characters, keep them IN character, yet allow them to change and grow. Most importantly, this is the first time I've ever liked ChiChi! And I love your sense of humor! Your story is a pleasure to read. Thank you for updating and continuing to share this quality fanfic. I look forward to the next installment.
| Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 15:43 PDT
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That was an extremely cute chapter, especially the way Vegeta avoided kissing Goku. The twins aren't old enough to know that they have unusual parents, and their innocent gestures and requests are so touching. Loved the last part where Vegeta was reading a bedtime story after Chichi had given him the wisdom of her experience with young Saiyans. Her and him are getting along so well almost to the point of kindred spirits. I never thought they could achieve that but you make everything so realistic and believable. Very in-character, and not just them, all characters. This is my favorite story at the moment and the one I look forward to updates from.
| Reviewed By: rdk On: May 05, 2008 11:43 PDT
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Well, done as usual my dear. And as usual, I so love your interaction between Vegeta and Chichi.
| Title: yay ch. 73!!
Reviewed By: Yuikey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 13:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I have to say right off the Bedtime scene was very cute lol (^_^) I love how Vegeta found a way to avoid kissing Goku that was funny to me. I love the conversation between Yamucha and Bulma it really dose show the friendship between the two. I hope Yamucha dose find someone soon. Another one coversation that really like was the one between Chi Chi and Vegata. All so the part where Vegata was reading the book to Ninji that was very nice and cute. Gosh characters in this story is so damn believable, it just amazing (^_^)
| Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: vegeta_swirl_girl On: May 04, 2008 06:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo, new chappy! Seriously, I belly-laughed a couple of times and I really love that mix of serious with a bit of light-heartedness. The kids are so real (love the goodnight 'kiss' scene, on a number of levels), and the characters so believable. Thanks so much. And of course impatient for more..!
| Reviewed By: Webtester01_not-logged-in On: May 03, 2008 21:11 PDT
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Wonderful chapter!!!!! The interactions between the parents and the twins was, for lack of a better word, adorable. Vegeta handled that other awkward moment very well. I'm sure there are plenty more to come. :D I wonder how the moon is affecting Kakarott and Vegeta now that the moon is full. ;) Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next update. i hope real life treats you well again.
| Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess_not logged in On: May 03, 2008 06:36 PDT
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So I haven't reviewed in ages, but... I still completely adore this story. I think some of my favorite characters interacting is Vegeta and Chichi. She understands him more than he'd like to admit but she's also aware how awkward and uncomfortable he can get. It's sad that he still questions himself and his identity as a Saiyan, but he is getting better about dealing with it. The bedtime kissing scene was cute and I wonder (hope) if at some point they will actually want to kiss at least as friends if not as lovers.
| Reviewed By: VegetaSwirlGirl On: March 09, 2008 22:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, every new chappie just blitzes the last. I sooo love this fic and the journey is so much fun I keep on rereading in-between updates (no pressure, ok?!). Keep it up!
| Title: Masterful Salvation!
Reviewed By: Kylee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 09:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bdegrees, I really, really enjoy reading "Unlikely Bond". I found out just previously that I am a Goku/Vegeta Yaoi/friendship fan, and you have come up with something new! Something original! Not just Vegeta taking what he wants, not them being unfaithful to their wives, not that fake, would-never-happen, out-there storyline that so many people have created; but you found it! You found a good way to make it work! You kept their character! You make me dreams come true! Originality! Originality! You found it! You are making it work! I really enjoy the relationship (whatever it might grow to) that Goku and Vegeta are developing, either close friendship, or, as hinted, something more; something better, possibly? Truthfully, the subtle things is what makes this chapter great. I want to read your story forever. I hardly use exclamation points, but, for you, I've used ten already. Instead of daydreaming about DBZ, I read your story. Why do you suppose? Well, because I like it so much. It makes me happy. I can't explain it completely (you have so many other reviewers who have done that), but I guess I stumbled upon this fan-fiction when I really needed it. If I could, I would use all 4,000 characters, but I need to come up with good, constructive criticism, wait, er, advice, no, suggestions for the story first. I bet 4,000 characters' worth of swooning wouldn't be a good use of space, or a good thing for your time. I sincerely like it, Kylee (note: part of my giddy behavior might be due to my virus; I'm so tired that I can't think...and I get a little dramatic, um, over exaggerated, you know, something like that, when I'm tired)
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