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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rourinu On: July 16, 2010 17:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see you updating this again. It's one of my favorite DBZ fics and I was afraid you'd abandoned it for awhile there. Wonderful chapters, as always. I love how you've taken the time to develop and explore everyone's thoughts and emotions as far as the marriage goes. It's all so realistic and believable. I'm especially impressed with Vegeta's character. You've done an absolutely WONDERFUL job with him. The best I've ever seen. I eagerly await the next installment.
| Title: me again (audreymasi)
Reviewed By: audreytiphaine [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2010 00:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! it's me again... i just wanted to let you know that i read your story AGAIN. did you know that it's unbelievably long? but so, so good. ok. here's the thing. i've been looking at the posting dates... and. did i mention already that i think you're not only truly brave for keeping on with your idea for this fic for so long, but also that you're impressively persistent? usually, when people want to write yaoi, they do some backstory, a little build-up... and then jump straight in to 'and suddenly Goku realized that he had hidden feelings for Vegeta!' which always kind of ruins the story for me. you did amazing character-relationship construction. everything that's happened so far has been exquisitely directed. i just hope *like burning* that you don't ever give up on this story. this second read-through, i actually read your A/Ns at the end of each chapter, and all i can say is that i hope you're doing well since that surgery you mentioned, all that overtime, the colds, and the family stuff. it's all belated, i know. but it's the thought that counts, right? anyways... i'm sure there are tons of people following this story, but i wanted to let you know... whenever it is that you get that next chapter out, i don't care. as long as you keep enjoying your story and as long as you know that I will keep loving it. Sincerely, Audrey
| Reviewed By: audreymasi On: June 04, 2010 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dearest Bdegrees, This is my first time reviewing your work. and because i just finished reading your entire work on Unlikely Bond over the past few days, i'm afraid i won't be as comprehensive as i would like to be. Nonetheless, i'm going to give it a try! i should start at the beginning: i've been looking, for the past few weeks, for a good fanfic. now, i realize that a 'goog fanfic' is subject to personal preferences, however, i tend to look for certain things in DB fanfiction which i'm not usually able to find. things such as: maturity from the writer. likely scenarios. characters being in-character. people reacting the way people do. the DB universe being taken into account, with all its quirks and diversity. and of course, pairings that don't happen in the original manga, but that I feel could happen. i mean, that's why i read fanfic, essentially. to see something happen that doesn't in the original. but. i like it to be believable. i like the author to convince me. i tell you, you have thoroughly convinced me. because your story has all of the above. i'm sorry, i just don't think you can understand the depth of my incredulity and gratitude at having found your fic after having searched for it for so long... because i truly feel that i was searching for this fic. let me name a few more reasons: - i feel your portrayal of the characters, of their progression and change through the trials that you put them through, is just so spot on. perfect. - the accuracy and precision you employed when describing the situation are compelling; everything feels real, nothing feels rushed. you took the time to do things right. i applaud you. - your OCs. they... they don't bother me. especially the babies. they are amazing. i have only seen one other author who pull off adding a couple of kids to a big fic and make them believable, enjoyable, and not let them take away from the main characters. - you have an amazing take on Goku's outlook on life. i'm so glad you made him neither stupid, nor overly intelligent. - that you don't have angst for the sake of angst. the interaction between Vegeta and Goku feels conceivable (ha! pun intended!). - great, GREAT analysis of emotional reactions (as pertains to each character) without being either too mushy or going into convoluted details. As you can see, all i have for your work is high praise, and i'm left with being incredibly impressed that you can pull this off, no less keep writing after all these years (yes, i was paying attention to the dates at each chapter!). i should probably wrap this up, as i only have 1375 characters left to wrap up my review... i guess all i have left to say is that i absolutely adore this story, that i fervently hope that you will see it to the end that you have planned for it. very sincerely yours, audrey (gosh. i hope i didn't come off pompous. it's just... i VERY rarely come across a story that inspires me to actually leave a decent review that i wanted to make the effort. make no mistake, i am no writer, i can't really convey how i feel very well with words, but just so you know. you are amazing. OMG. ANOTHER THING I LIKED. that you didn't do any female-character bashing. and how you elaborated on Saiyan culture! AND THE MPREG. gosh, i should have started with that. i HATE mpreg. HATE HATE HATE it. but... you did it so right. i find that you were that much more convincing because of how you took into account the whole SAiyan female:male ratio. ok. stopping my review now... here's my email, just in case you want to respond: audreymasi@comcast.net
| Title: an update... yay!
Reviewed By: yossy lee On: May 26, 2010 02:22 PDT
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Oh I love this story! Read it during my stay in hospital for my cancer treatment. Now I'm healthy and I'm still reading it. Please please write more. And thanks for sharing this wonderful story. :)
| Reviewed By: Shampgn On: May 15, 2010 15:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out, as well as dreading the inevitable end! I'm curious as to what exactly Daikkon has planned for Vegeta and his family. He is well-intentioned, but at the same time he's making me nervous. The relationship between Bulma and Goku is sweet...Also, I am starting to get hopeful about Goku eventually getting his girl (in response to the "Nin and Veji book" scene and Act II). *crosses fingers* Of course, that will have to wait until Goku and Vegeta can actually get it together and be a couple. =_=U
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2010 23:29 PDT
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Yay, it's great to hear from you! I'm glad you're still hard at work on this story. Wow, so they really are going to have a four-person sharefest. Way back when Vegeta first mentioned saiyan extended families I wondered if it would come to this, and I see I was not disappointed. So now you've got me hoping for possible Goku x Bulma moments in the future, as well as GV. You're killin' me with the wait on this GV yaoi action! *wrings hands* It is eventually going to happen, right? I hope I hope. Goku's frustration at Vegeta making all the rules was understandable, and I wonder what he was up to when he asked if he could touch Vegeta. Gauging his level of resistance, maybe? He should tell Veg he can earn that extra half-vote in bed, ha-ha! Bulma had a camera set up at the very end, I get it. ;)
| Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged in On: May 08, 2010 10:24 PDT
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Wow, B you completely through a curve ball there, but I am definitely happy with the developments and they way you are showing their progression. You make the arrangement seem so natural as well, like it should be that way, I wonder how things wil progress in the future though, as there still seems to be a bit of uncertainty over what their roles are. I loved that last paragraph, Bulma still manages to catch even the Saiyan Prince off-guard-Bulma had to employ the surveillance cameras on demand strategy. The comedic timing was spot on as well, lol
| Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 18:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh cliff hangers are killers...AWESOME! chapter though! keep writing i love this story!
| Title: Chapter 78
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: May 03, 2010 23:50 PDT
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Once again, awesome chapter! I didn't expect them ALL to get married like that. At first I wasn't so sure if I liked that idea or not, but then I thought about it and thought that maybe it wouldn't be so bad. Love the twins! Until next chapter!
| Reviewed By: tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always pleased when another chapter appears, they cheer me up, and make me happy to see the developement of such a deep and complicated relationship between them all.
| Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Yuikey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2010 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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In the silence that followed, there came a faint click and the soft whir of mechanics. Vegeta's dark eyes darted around the room before turning accusingly to Bulma. "Woman," he growled, "what was that?" Bulma's tone was casual and light, and not the slightest bit guilty as she replied, sweetly. "What was what, dear?" OMG I wonder what Bulma is planing? I love the idea of all them being in equals and marrige to each other!! This story is so amazing I can't wait to see what happen next!!
| Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2010 17:53 PST
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Thank you for updating, I was worried that was it! Things seem a little awkward between Goku and Vegeta following Chi-Chi giving permission. Does Goku know she did? Hope they can spend some time together but why won't Vegeta let Goku come with him? Is he worried something might happen between them? Hope you get Vegeta to relent :) Nice to see Trunks and Goten comsumate their relationship.
| Reviewed By: Viandora On: January 12, 2010 10:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! I was anticipating the next chapter and feared you might have stopped writing. Your characters are lovingly created and I'd like to see them in an anime. I've grown fond of the twins and cannot wait to read more about them and their families growing ever closer. Thank you for writing such an amazing fiction.
| Reviewed By: Kylee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2010 16:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, was I happy to wake up and see your update. I love your ability to change the mood so drastically - from creating a warm, pleasant feeling in "It Takes Two" to the shabbiness of Chichi in this chapter. I appreciate this uncharacteristically fast development in the plot....I wonder what Vegeta was thinking would relieve the "sexual tension". I don't think you read your reviews, but I felt like writing anyway.
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 19:39 PST
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Wonderful chapter!! And it finally happened. :D Bulma and her perfectness...lol. I'm glad the four spouses had their chat. The little ones are adorabble.
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