| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
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Reviewed By: clary On: May 05, 2007 17:26 PDT
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i'll keep it short and sweet- its great. loving it. update!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: April 27, 2007 10:05 PDT
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I like how they worked things out and how yous showed a window into their feelings on the matter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: akajazzy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 06:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I am diggin this fic! Plz update soon! I wanna see how the whole Trunks/Goten thing is gonna turn out (I mean I kinda saw that coming but it still took me by surprise)
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Reviewed By: akajazzy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 06:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I am diggin this fic! Plz update soon! I wanna see how the whole Trunks/Goten thing is gonna turn out (I mean I kinda saw that coming but it still took me by surprise)
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Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 18:34 PDT
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Hello there. Just wanted to let you know I'm really, really enjoying your story. So far, I've only made it to chapter 42 but I'm working my way through. I had read up to chapter 8 forever ago at Pixelgoddess' site and gave up waiting for more and actually thought to Google your story and see if it was archived somewhere. I'm so glad I did! As a huge Vegeta/Goku girl though, I do have to ask: are you actually going to have them together together in your story? I'm guessing not since you went to such lengths to stress the relationships between both men and their wives (which I actually like the way you characterized both and that surprises me because as a rule, I'm a rapid VxG girl and it kinda bugs me reading them with anyone else.) Inquiring minds do want to know. :D Either way, great story and I'll definitely keep reading. Can't wait to read more! Oh, and your pregnant Goku is adorable. I have coworkers right now that are pregnant and it's kinda funny seeing the little things they do that are in the story. Very cute.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 00:27 PDT
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Aw, the boys are so cute! Looks like they're handling the change in their relationship well so far (although it is just the beginning). Trunks was hilarious with his blushing and "that's inappropriate" comment when Goten mentioned the shower. The first day of family fusion seemed to go off without a hitch-- but you know what they say, fish and visitors smell in three days. X3
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Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: April 18, 2007 14:21 PDT
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Once again, totally awesome. I can't get enough! I love everything that's happening in this story and more. Till next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 01:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter if I do say so my self. I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Title: Chloe
Reviewed By: Vole [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 22:24 PDT
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I haven't left a review in ages, just thought I would. =) As always, the writing quality is above par, and your ideas are wonderful. The interaction between everyone is absolutely perfect, and great dialogue. The interaction between Chi Chi and Vegeta is always so interesting and dynamic, I would love to see more of that. Perhaps bring it back to the Vegeta/Goku/Chi Chi/Bulma level for a bit, it's been Goten and Trunks for quite a lot of the recent chapters, and it would be great to see what's happening with the adults now. Love this story, and SO glad I get email updates. No more checking it every day on my own! =P
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Reviewed By: Kurochan21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 21:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. Every thing's going like a well oiled machine...hope it stays that way. Thanks for this! I hope to read some more soon.
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Title: Chapter 61
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 01:24 PDT
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I love the way you're handing the whole Trunks and Goten situation and I'm so impatient to hear their talk in the next chapter. I'm glad you're not making it straightfoward for them and that you're letting them experience understandable uncertainties. Of course, I do hope they'll get over them too. :D --- I must admit, I'm wondering much the same thing as Vegeta towards the end of the chapter - things seem almost settled and calm... what's going to happen to upset that?
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 00:58 PDT
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So, the boys have actually taken the next big step in their relationship! Let the awkwardness begin. I have no problem with them as lovers, but I dunno, they were so great as best friends... hopefully they'll work through it and the whole "lover" aspect won't ruin their friendship. And if they progress further they'd better keep birth control in mind (urg, please don't make Goten pregnant next). I look forward to seeing how all that will develop, as well as the move-in. It seems to me that the big reason Bulma's so cheery about the move is because she gets to be in control. It was her idea, she gets to be the magnanimous hostess, everything's still on her turf, she's the one pulling all the strings- I get the feeling that if Chichi were the one suggesting the Briefs set up a capsule house out in the woods next to their house, she wouldn't be nearly so enthusiastic.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (logged off) On: April 10, 2007 11:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I reread chapter sixty and caught the little line you left for me. Thanks. And on chapter sixty-one, it is interesting to see the various response to the new situation. I think things will take a while to settle. Especially what happened between Goten and Trunks. :) Gotta run. I look forward to chapter sixty-two! :D Keep up the great work.
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Title: Chapter 61
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: April 07, 2007 14:19 PDT
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Geez! Nice chap! Can't wait for the next update. That cliffie was so evil! >_< .... ^_^
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Title: We Want UPDATES!!
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 10:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. One of the best I have ever seen. I'm looking forward to the next chapter so much.
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