| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
Title: OMG
Reviewed By: FirstTimer06 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 05:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely agree with Orchideater, I love this story and it made my day to get that email that you had updated the story. I love, love, love it please keep 'em coming.
|
Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 00:14 PST
Comment/Review:
LOVE!!! See, I told you you could do it. Now just keep doing it. >:D Excellent chapter, and such a nice big meaty one too to sate our appetites after that long wait. I really enjoyed it. At last we get the consummation between Trunks and Goten, and you did a great job with it. I thought it was perfectly done for their characters and for the story- I have no complaints! It was sweet and funny just like the boys, with such an enviable sort of comfortable, easy passion between them. In contrast, I see Goku and Vegeta going at it like rabid wolves for their first time. Wonderful smexy gravity room battle which I have reread several times, oh yes. Vegeta getting worried about his reactions and cutting the fight short because of them was so great. Sounds like now that the situation has been revealed to him and "permission" given, his forbidden thoughts for Goku are quickly starting to snowball. I still don't know whether to be suspicious of Daikkon or not. I have some ideas of how he might plan to cause trouble if he was gonna, but I'll have to wait and see what he does in further chapters before the seeds of suspicion can be planted. Anyway, now what I want is for Vegeta to change his mind and let Goku come with him so they can be alone (Daikkon doesn't count) on that ship and have lots and lots of hot episodes of sexual tension on the long journey. Go, get going! What, afraid of being alone with the third class, princey? XD Keep it up, B, you're doing great.
|
Title: Chapter 77
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: January 03, 2010 14:13 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you finally updated and what a great chapter this was! I check almost every week or so. I like how things are progressing here and hooray for Trunks and Goten! Good chapter as usual and I await the next!
|
Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 11:15 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY! I was getting so worried this story was dead. :( Happy late holidays to us to see an update! And I'm glad to see Vegeta starting to ponder if maybe, just maybe the attraction isn't only on Goku's end...even though I'm bias towards that couple. Loved this chapter. I don't want to be pushy but I hope it's not to far between this one and the next. But real life does have a way of getting in the way of things so it's understandable. :D
|
Title: ch76
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 06:04 PST
Comment/Review:
wow B, I'm so glad you updated, this was definitely a welcome new years treat :-) I am completely fascinated by the development between Vegeta and Goku and I am eager to see how it will come to fruition. Is Vegeta begining to realise another aspect towards his feelings for Goku, and what does this mean for the family dynamic, especially since Chi Chi and Bulma seem accepting of it? Also I wonder if the dragon balls will come in to function by making the women have the same lifespan/aging as a saiyan, I can't remember if they were activated in your universe.
|
Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 00:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally another chapter! this story is awesome an i was begginning to loose hope that another chapter would emerge. this one was sweet in it's own little way. i think i just have a twisted mind though. well hope to see another chapter sooner than it took for this one.
|
Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 00:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally another chapter! this story is awesome an i was begginning to loose hope that another chapter would emerge. this one was sweet in it's own little way. i think i just have a twisted mind though. well hope to see another chapter sooner than it took for this one.
|
Title: ahhhhh!
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this tory is really cool you know? good twist and turns in the plot. i can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens next. i hope you get to update soon
|
Title: OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 17:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 60 is my fav just cause of TRunks and Goten. that was an awsom way to write there actuacly realizing that they did infact love each other just perfect perfect perfect. i look forward to keep reading. 10 on everything!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: TheInfamousV [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not gernerally a reviewer, but I want more!
|
Reviewed By: Shampgn On: August 11, 2009 18:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh, I adore this story so much! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Nothing else really needs to be said - all the reviewers seem to be in agreement with the excellent quality of this fanfic.
|
Title: EEEKKKK!!!
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 21:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! Mpreg is nothing new to me. This story keeps my attention and at times cracks me up. my family thinks im crazy these days. I agree with Goku for keeping the baby. i am only on like Chapter 26 or 25. but i would react the same way as Vegeta if i were him. so you could say i agree with both Saiyans. Casn't wait to read more!!!!
|
Title: Yep
Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 13:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for over a year... have I ever even reveiwed? "Bonks self on the head" Don't Know, but if I haven't, then it's about time. LOVE it. This lastest chapter was especially touching. You have really outdone yourself. The story is so complex and intruiging, have never and will never read another quite like it, nor have I ever enjoyed a Male pregnant tale as much as this one. As always, can never get enough, and am looking forward to more. :) Excellent work.
|
Reviewed By: Iuvenes On: July 15, 2009 20:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job on this - the dialogue thing I mentioned on the Salon is still a bit annoying, and there's a bit of domesticity overload, but I'm really enjoying the story, and I hope you will continue to update it. I have a high appreciation in general for authors who don't take the cheap, easy ways to get rid of the wives to write mansex.
|
Reviewed By: FirstTimer06 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 09:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMB I can't wait to c what happened I love this story I would have to say this is my fav LOL this stroy gets me all Getty n excited
|
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
