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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 23:06 PST
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Wow, an update so fast- just like old times! So it was completely one-sided and Vegeta didn't feel anything? That's no fun... Maybe he's just brutally repressing himself as usual. I was rather annoyed at Bulma this chapter: She treats Goku like a little kid and I feel like she didn't take his feelings seriously at all, just assumed what they were before he could even really say anything and brushed him off. I loved how once Chichi got over the shock of it all, she was actually trying to get a confession of feelings out of Vegeta as her way of defending Goku's honor. Chichi is coffee-obsessed. She's made enough pots in this fic to caffeinate an army. X) Happy ficcaversary!!
| Title: 75
Reviewed By: Yuikey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 20:11 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first thing I like to say is Gratz on the 3-year anniversary of Unlikely Bond (^_^). I still say this one the best Dragon ball z story out there. This chapter was awesome the argument between Chi Chi and Vegata was prefect you can feel the emotion between the two. I also love the part when Bulma try to make Goku understand that she never believe that he would try to steal her husband. That was funny :) Poor Chi Chi you can feel the sadness off Chi Chi when she watched Goku and Vegata with the babies. I think it just hit her that they becoming prefect family and she feel she not be in it. That was some awesome writing right there. I have to say I really enjoy this chapter and I can't wait to read more. (^_^) Have a happy thanksgiving.
| Title: 75
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 18:43 PST
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It can't be unrequited? (repeatedly tells herself that all is not as it seems); I think the end was very telling, especially when Goku said that he wanted 'something' from Vegeta. I can't wait to see what else you have in store, and just what is Bulla doing with that book?
| Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 18:34 PST
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I suspected Goku only thought he cheated but was still surprised that Chichi thought that he should have feelings Vegeta. What an image I had of Chichi and Vegeta in the mud pit going at each other! Chuckled at Vegeta rephrasing his words but still keeping all the cuss words in, that was so like Vegeta. Such a cute moment when they were reading the story :) Oh, has Bulla stolen the binder? What will it say?
| Title: ch74 Crushed
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 17:55 PST
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My gosh B you have done it again, imagine my delight to see that you had updated this story I could not believe my luck, especially since I have been experiencing a dragonball z drought, I was like yaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyy an update, and what an update it was, man, are you trying to kill me with those Goku and Vegeta scenes, I don't know if I can handle much more, my heart can't take it, when Goku ponders his relationship with Vegeta I found it particularly moving, "Then how do you know which one of all of them is the one for you?!" Before he could reply, Goku's eyes landed on Chi Chi before automatically moving to the prince as well. It was in that moment that he briefly wondered if there was some sense to the ways of Saiyan relationships. Or maybe it was just a crush..." I was thinking woh is it gonna happen, and then that scene when they are in the cave I nearly died, and then their was the cliff hanger I couldn't belive it, you are teasing me B, but it makes me even more eager to read the next chapter (as if I needed any mor encouragement lol)I like the parallel you draw between Goku and Vegeta and Goten and Trunks, it is almost quite sad the way Goten and Trunks have that innocence in their relationship that allows them to be free with one another, yet it is not permitted for Goku and Vegeta, or at least I don't think it is. Even so, despite the odds against them, the moments they share seem almost like it was meant to be, the way you portray the growth and development of their bond leaves me rooting for them. The chemistry between them was so palpable, simmmering between them, my mouth was open I couln't believe it, it had been building up for a while now, the explosion seemed imminent. I can't wait to find out what happened. Although, I wonder how this will affect the rest of the family, especially with Goku's dramatic confession to Chi chi. Thank you again for updating. I hope you are feeling much better, and that everything is going well for you Bd
| Title: Chapter 75
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 17:23 PST
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This chapter made me like Daikkon for a brief second or two! Normally, I'm highly suspicious of him and whenever he appears, I experience a desire to get him alone in a harshly-lit room somewhere so I can find out what he's up to with his calm and benign manner... I mean, he has to be up to something, right? But when you wrote: He just hoped the human's distraction wouldn't affect her ability to cook... I suddenly liked him for a second. It was just such a Saiyan thought. I loved it. -- I also enjoyed the development of the understanding between Chi Chi and Vegeta, even though it descended into an argument at this point. I think it showed that they understand each other well enough to be able to disagree and to fight, even. And that small moment towards the end just confirmed that for me. -- It was a great chapter, B. Not boring at all. -- Oh, and happy three year anniversary!
| Reviewed By: damnrobot On: November 25, 2008 09:51 PST
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XD Good to see you updating again!! I love this fic, it just gets better and better! You can't find many authors who can keep a story going this long that is still so interesting and exciting! I can't wait to see what you have in store for our Saiyans next!!!! (and you are quite an evil, evil genius when it comes to the cliffhangers...)
| Title: Chapter 74
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: November 23, 2008 13:21 PST
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Yep. I'm still reading and haven't abandoned this fic. How could I when your one of the very few fanfiction writers I've seen who actually KNOWS how to write and not disrespect the characters in any way! I'm really getting excited here! Something is finally starting to go on between our two favorite full blooded Saiya-jins now. I really hope your NOT one of those writers who likes a specific side with those two way more than the other. In my opinion, I think they'd like to take turns with who's seme and uke. It really shouldn't matter as long as they love each other. I like equality in a story and hope you do too because it works. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2008 23:09 PST
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OMG you're back! I had almost given this story up for lost. Great chapter, I loved it-- nice and long too. Have read the wrestling part about 10 times. Finally, after 3 years and 74 chapters, some real GV yaoi! Well, maybe. I am betting what Goku is calling unfaithful is his feelings for V or maybe a kiss. You wouldn't just NOT show us their first time together, right? And I don't think it could happen so easily anyway (though they are saiyans, you never know). V gave in with G on top of him remarkably fast, eee-hee-hee. I do hope that's foreshadowing. X3 Oh, and the babies are even cuter now that they're a little older now. Duh, Vegeta, of course wrestling is a good way for them to start out, they're only what, a year old. And it is much more suitable for their ages. Kids like to tussle anyway. Pan was likeable this chapter-- the part where Goku mentioned she wanted to marry Roshi when she was little because he gave her peppermints was so cute, a very "kid" thing to think. Great chappie, I feel like the story has some good forward momentum now. I am glad life is treating you better now and hope things stay well for you. Don't leave us another 5 months on a cliffhanger like that, it would be so cruel!^^
| Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 20:30 PST
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OMG you updated! Thank you. I thought you had abandoned this and was so sad as it is one of the best, most in character stories I have read. I'm so intrigued about what happened in the cave to make Goku say he was unfaithful to Chichi. Was he really, or just what Goku would think was unfaithful, i.e. carnal thoughts about another. I'm secretly hoping something more concrete has happened between them :) I hope 'real life' doesn't prevent you from updating soon.
| Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 13:11 PST
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I was so happy to see another chapter of this up! And it was wonderful! I myself as a Vegeta/Goku girl loved the progression on that front with Goku finally admiting to himself he felt something for the prince and the end of it!!! ""Chi Chi," Goku spoke, clenching his hands into fists at his sides. He continued, his voice nothing but a broken whisper. "... I was unfaithful."" I'm assuming being Goku he's meaning he thought about being with Vegeta or even the fact his body reacted to him but I'd be interested to see what happens if he meant it in the literal sense. The Trunks/Goten relationship continues to be adorable. I really, really love the way you write your Goten. He's such a brat but he's the type of guy you want to be friends with. And the growing babies are such cuties. I love that Ninji's showing off high intelligence and Vejita seems to be kinda whiney and apparently, based on Vegeta's reactions to him several times, has his mother's intelligence. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 74
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 00:00 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh I do believe that was somewhat of a cliff-hanger right there, B. And the wrestling in the cave! Ahhh!! Go back to that. Linger. I want more. The tension was absolutely beautiful. It's fantastic to see an update from you, especially one where so many subtle, pre-cursory-type twists occurred. Loved it.
| Reviewed By: Webtester01(Not_Logged_in) On: November 14, 2008 23:20 PST
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You did it again! You wrote another amazing chapter that is deep, adorable and features a cliff-hanger. I like the way you have the characters interact. It inspires me to get back to work on my other stories. Keep it up. I look forward to the next chatper.
| Title: 74 ch
Reviewed By: Great freakin story! On: November 14, 2008 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter and so glad you updated!I pretty much jump for joy when I saw you updated. This story really one my favorite. You just don't find good fanfics like this anymore. You really out done yourself.:) I keep asking myself how the hell can anybody write this damn good.lol I can't wait to see what happen next when the wives found out about Goku and Vegata getting closer.
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Reviewed By: sharkie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 15:48 PST
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It's been about six months since your last update :( It makes me sad Any chance I could get a heads up on whether this fic is going to be continued or if it's on a hiatus thingy? If this is a case of you not wanting to continue, not having the willpower (having lives), or just losing interest, here are some reasons why I'm saying PLEASE DON'T STOP IT THERE -You haven't bitchified the DBZ women This is awesome, I mean it's a fic where there is Mpreg (which I won't call realistic cause Mpreg just... isn't :P) and manages to keep a sort of family feel to it. In your fic you have an awareness that at the end of the Mpreg there is a baby and because of that there are problems and not just fun and games. IF a mpreg could be realistic, yours is as close as it comes. There is no hole sprouting out magically "OHHHEEMMGEEEHEEEGREEEWWAAAVAAAGINNAA", and goku didn't like... fart it out. So... yeah... this is one of those irratating reviews that is like... unintelligable. Innit? Point is, it's hard to keep to the point here. Your fic isn't a porny Mpreg, it's sweet. And I want the sweet fic to be updated, but yeah any chance I could just have an indication of whether you are planning on continuing it any time soon. The whole bizarre (still sweet) square going on between the two couples is partly what makes me love this fic so much. Some fics get tedious as they go one for ages, this one hasn't. You actually have me thinking "what do i want to happen." you know like, proper prompting questions. It's late, Ima stop ranting now. Sweatyscotty
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