| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
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Title: still love this story
Reviewed By: Still hoping On: August 16, 2015 00:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read this story in years and I just thought about two
days ago. I have say it still one the best dbz fanfic out there and
I hope one day update this amazing fic.
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Title: Please update soon
Reviewed By: Elmoz On: September 07, 2012 02:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enJoyed this story. You got nice styler of writing. Ease do update already. I'm looking forward to see how it ends. |
Title: Simply Amazing!
Reviewed By: albino-screeching [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2012 23:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
C'mon! You even got me back into writing fan fics. I haven't read a good GxV not TxG fic in so long.And they way you write is like you actually had an interview with Diakkon about Saiyans. I enjoyed this alot. and I wish you would continue--or atleast a part two, But if not, you left enough for the imagination. I have recommend this and posted this on every site I've encountered! You have really made my month! |
Reviewed By: Kritha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2012 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I loved it...I want more!!! |
Reviewed By: elmoz On: May 27, 2012 11:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter1: the way you write were very interesting and very clear to read. This chapter is already excited. I do hope you would continued updating a new chapter soon ( chapter 78) I really enjoyed reading it. |
Title: Hope you're still writing
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: May 25, 2012 11:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
I know you have a life and that life can sometimes get in the way, but I want to let you know that I still LOVE this story. I'm still waiting for the next update and hope you haven't forgotten everything. I hope all that's planned for it is still planned. |
Title: Still hopefull
Reviewed By: Wickedeve On: May 20, 2012 23:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After 2 years of waiting for an update, I'm worried that this is the end. there's so much more that could happen in this story, I'm dying to read more. :( |
Reviewed By: Shampgn On: March 12, 2012 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really is interesting and original. I still check up on it frequently to see if you've updated -- I have not forgotten Unlikely Bond! I so hope that you didn't drop the story because of writer's block, etcetera. (Part of me is worried about your health, like if you stopped writing because you were unwell or something. X| ) After you didn't update last year, I assumed it was because you were cooking up a storm of a chapter! Anyways, I love this story and thought you were really cool/devoted to write what you have. Still... I hope that wasn't the end! @u@ |
Reviewed By: Lazuli_91 On: February 28, 2012 07:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I abso-fucking-lutely hate your story!!! you know why? It's so damn fantastic, great and ginormous that everything you read after just seems like... complete crap!!! So, I have a strange hate/love for your fanfic. ^^ Furthermore, you are the one that got me started on Truten. I never liked the pairing but you made me love it with your characters. That's also one of your strong points. Character development!!! You make Vegeta look like the canon character on one side and on the other he appears 'human'. ^^ fantastic! And I love your Goten. ;) He's like one of my cousins. What else... Even if I adored your fanfic I regret reading it a bit. It's just, you appear to have abandoned the story and it's at one of the best points. So now I'm left wondering what would happen now. ;_; That's why I beg you (and normally I hate to do that because it's kind of pointless with fanfic authors) to continue. Don't abandon something so great when you're already so far along. PLEASE! Bye Lazuli |
Reviewed By: elmos On: February 23, 2012 04:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
have you finished this story or there's more to come which i hope you can continued soon. |
Reviewed By: moles On: February 23, 2012 04:51 PST
Comment/Review:
have you finished this story or there's more to come which i hope you can continued soon. |
Reviewed By: elmoas On: July 09, 2011 05:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I love the story. do you think you could write the update some more. pls that wold be great. thanks. |
Reviewed By: shasha On: May 18, 2011 19:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
Another thing I forgot to add is that I REALLY respect how you've managed to create a convincing relationship between Goku and Vegeta without bashing (or conveniently killing off ) their wives. Even better, you highlight the love that exists between the men and their wives in a way that actually complements the developing relationship of Goku and Vegeta. That's quite impressive. |
Reviewed By: shasha On: May 18, 2011 18:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've pretty much done the impossible three times over. 1. Got me to read a 70+ chapter story, something I've never had the patience to do. And I read through it in a mere matter of days. 2. Got me to enjoy a G/V fic. Even though I'm a complete stickler for canon and no G/V story has ever worked for me, but I've been hoping to find one that would. There's so much chemistry, tension, and POTENTIAL between Goku and Vegeta, I knew that someone could make it work if they put in the effort. Like some other reviews said, the problem with so many G/V fics (or, hell, fics in general) is they don't flesh out the story, opting to go almost straight to sex - which not believable or enjoyable in the least. With your story, however, the buildup towards their affection and attraction feels much more real and the moment when (if) they finally consummate their relationship will have much more payoff. 3. Gotten me to read and enjoy a a freakin' m-preg fic. Even the babies are enjoyable characters who I find myself caring about. I wish someone who could draw would make some Ninji/Vejita fanart, lol. I bookmarked this fic and am eagerly awaiting an update, so hopefully you haven't abandoned it. Well done! |
Reviewed By: abster On: May 18, 2011 10:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! I'm totally behind Goku on this one, though it's kinda weird for a guy to get pregnant. What Bulma and that Daikkon dude said sounded like an abortion to me!!! Not cool! I'm really lovin the book so far and can't wait til I read more and more! :D Great job!! |
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