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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Reviewed By: Vole - not signed in On: January 06, 2007 00:49 PST
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Hey... As much as I loved Seven Minutes in Underworld... It doesn't mean you can continue to ignore this story! WAHHH! =P
| Reviewed By: clary_rox On: January 05, 2007 15:39 PST
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where's the update????!!! :'(
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: December 29, 2006 11:28 PST
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Wonderful couple of chapters!!! You obviously put a lot of thought into them. I'm glad the babies are ok. The second one sure is a armful. There could be some difficulties if the baby will only stop fussing when being held by Vegeta, or fed by Goku. Also Chichi seems to be handling things well. But having some experience holding babies, myself, they like to grab things with their tight grip. If she isn't careful, she could get a broken or bruised finger from such strong babies. Her list of concerns will probably include her aging faster than her husband. (Assuming saiyan lifespans are longer than a human's in your fic.) Well I'm babbling again. I really enjoyed your story and I look forward to the next update!
| Reviewed By: Spriggan Toadstool On: December 25, 2006 09:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! You have done a stupendous job with this story. It's SOOO hard to find a talented writer with an ORIGINAL, INTERESTING story these days. Great job. I too was hoping for another little princess for Vegeta(he seems to do well with little girls) but I like the twist on coloring! I also like the undetectable ki bit. We all remember Kakarot was a weak baby (and a screamer) and look at him now! I would love to see a future story about these twins, I think they would have an amazing chemistry together. Twins always have that special bond, almost like a 6th sense concerning each other! I hope it's at least entered your mind! Congrats on this story & good luck on future endeavors!!!
| Reviewed By: DHNightshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:30 PST
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This is a wonderful story, I found the story not a long time ago, and read all chapters and every week I am waiting for new chapters. I like the last on very much. Twins, twins with secrets. And I am happy, that the relationship between Vegeta and Kakarott are better. (I like them more as lovers, but okay, I like this story too.) Thank you for sharing, and your last comment, let me hoping for more chapters.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:03 PST
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Woohoo, a double Christmas present for Goku and Vegeta (even though it's spring/summer there)! I'm so glad it was boys. Goku has boys. That's... just the way it is! :p I love how Goku trapped Veggie in his own loophole as far as the naming is concerned. Lol He did say he could name any subsequent children or pets whatever he wanted. Chichi's going to love that one, a kid who's both named after Vegeta and looks just like him. Apparently Goku must have changed his mind about the name "Ninji," he didn't seem thrilled about it at first. A blond non-supersaiyan, hm? Interesting. Maybe he's leucistic (that's a less extreme form of albinism- the eyes are normal). Anyway, that's what I'm pretending right now. Chichi was thinking that the noisy child had Vegeta's temperment, but actually Goku was the screamer when he was an infant. Of course probably neither of them could know that. It would be hilarious if they ended up with a little Vegeta look-alike that acts just like Goku. The quiet one seems more like Vegeta to me, all sulky and brooding. It's cute how they already have their own personalities, and the no detectable ki thing from the first one is a mystery.
| Reviewed By: Rourinu On: December 24, 2006 11:27 PST
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Weee!! Babies are finally born! You handled the 'birthing' perfectly too! Most people just have a C-section to remove the baby from a male, but though there was a cut, the rest was like a natural childbirth. Excellent!
| Title: Chapter 54! YAY!
Reviewed By: Vole [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 06:57 PST
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I am so happy to have stayed up long enough to read this this morning! Thank you for writing such an amazing story! I have been looking forward to this chapter all week, and it definatly lived up to my expectations. I want to know more! Why is the baby blond? Why doesn't the dark haired one have a ki? Can Vegeta fix it? Did the other one take away it's ki? I have no idea! I'm just so excited! I'll be checking back again every day again, so you better get the next one up quick! =P JK, take your time on it and make it perfect like always, but I still can't wait for the next chapter! -Chloe
| Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 01:21 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Waaaaah twins!!! And even though this is what we've all been waiting for, you still give us a delightful mystery in why one seems to be hiding their ki and why the other is blond! I must admit, I kept expecting Daikkon to sneak in and steal them away when no-one was looking, so I'm glad to hear you'll be explaining a bit more about him soon. There's something being held back there. :D Happy one year anniversary, too.
| Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 21:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story since several chapters back! It's so great, even though, Vegeta and Kakarotto arn't really together. I can't wait for the next chapter to come up! I have this stroy in my favorites and check it a few times a day to see if it's been updated ( I know, I'm pathetic!) Have a happy holiday! Neko-Chan @----%----.
| Reviewed By: schokolade On: December 22, 2006 01:18 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
right, so i found this fic a few days ago and it got me hooked. I only gave you a 9 for spelling and grammar because occasionally there are some typos...I know I'm being quite picky, but hey. it's a 10 anyway^^. I adore Vegeta in this one. Normally you only get the standard "Oh-Kakkarott I hate you but oh-no you are in heat" descriptions, which are horrible to say the least. so just imagine my happiness when I found your fic^^. I don't really understand Daikkon but it seems that he always knows more than he lets on...quite interesting. my favorite line: "how can i not love you for it, man" right, see ya next chapter^^
| Title: I finnally reviewed, Canyabelieveit?
Reviewed By: DamnRobot On: December 20, 2006 11:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just got to say, I loved this story from the begining. I've been reading for almost a year now and I'm still hooked. I love the way you write for each of the characters, and I especially love how you manage to include EVERYONE. Even Dende and Oolong and Tien have made appearances! This is a brilliant epic and you are a goddess for writting it! Keep it up! ~DR
| Title: chap 53 act 1
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: December 19, 2006 16:22 PST
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I'm a little puzzled over why Daikkon did not tell them of the risk of leaving an expecting saiyan unattended during labour, I mean I thought he would have told them regardless because no matter what he would want Goku to be safe, I didn't think Daikkon would jeopardize the health of Goku and the baby by not telling them something as important as that his reason for keeping it secret did not fit with the way I see his character, he's fiercely loyal to the Vegeta household I just can't see him doing something like that. I liked that Chi Chi and Vegeta aired their frustrations to each other, it seems to be going a long way to helping bridge the divide between tem, at least for the sake of the baby. And the moment when Vegeta found Goku in the cave was so beautiful and when he said 'how could i not love you for it' that was fantastic, and the way you portray Vegeta is remarkable. I really enjoy your interpretation of his character. I can't even imagine how the birth will be like, I can't wait. I really liked the meaning of Vegeta which you chose, and although Vegeta does not want the child to be named after him I think it would be nice to name the baby Vegeta, but of course it's up to you, you have such interesting meanings for the saiyan names i'm sure it will have a good one.
| Reviewed By: Vole [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 18:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best epics I have ever read. I applaud. I've reviewed before as "Chloe", but that's not all that important. I am so glad that Vegeta is going to a direct part of the birth, I was hoping that would happen somehow. I check this story whenever I come online and am ecstatic whenever I see an update. (Actually, it seems I need to hunt the updates myself, seeing as mediaminer is messed up and doesn't show them itself...) I was also wondering if perhaps there would be some way you could alert me to when you have updated, so I wouldn't be left wondering if there really was one and mediaminer isn't showing it. Anyway, keep up the amazing writing on this story, I am literally enthralled by it. I can't wait to see what other wonderful ideas you might have. And THANK YOU for keeping Vegeta so in character, along with everyone else. I hope to see an update soon! -Chloe
| Title: Act 1
Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: December 18, 2006 02:39 PST
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Ahhhh! Cliffhanger! Seriously don't do that! Lol! Awesome chapter though. It gets more and more interesting as the story goes on. You a very good writer. Now. Get the next one up as soon as you can. I'm begging you! Nah it's okay. Take your time. I can wait... o_o;; I think.....^_^;;
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