| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: April 09, 2006 07:20 PDT
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Happy 30th! And I was happy too. Nice. Can I take Vegeta home now! Keep up the good work, because it is very very good.
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Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: April 07, 2006 09:28 PDT
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"CLAPS" Wonderful chapter, finally we get to see whats really inside the Prince. It's about time that he gets the peace he so desperately needs. please keep writing this great story.
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Reviewed By: anstia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 03:21 PDT
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Wow. I think that you're outputting quality in your quanity. I really like the way that your dealing with the details of Vegeta dealing with himself - great work!
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Reviewed By: ddict606 (not logged in) On: April 07, 2006 02:55 PDT
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30 chapters good for you. I was so glad to see Piccolo and you kept him in character. That's your greatest skill, characterization, everyones perfect. Loved the B/V interaction too!
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Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 16:42 PDT
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Woo, it's been a while since I've been on but I've finally caught up. It was great to read the new chapters you had up! My brain was getting so fried with all the papers I had to write. I loved Vegeta and Goku's arguement/conversation in the last chapter! Keep up the great work! And no rush on the update. Get plenty of rest since you're working all that overtime!!
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Reviewed By: PG On: April 02, 2006 09:12 PDT
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I didn't cry like your other reader. (There's just something in my eye.) This story is getting really intense emotionaly. I'm glad everyone is finally coming to accept the situation and deal with it. I'm looking forward to Goku's pregnancey. No worries that your going to make him girlie. You've really done an outstanding job with this original tale. Keep up the great work. I look forward to seeing this to the end. ;D
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Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: April 02, 2006 08:35 PDT
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WOW!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: March 31, 2006 21:01 PST
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Great chapter. You reveal Goten's feelings and the others' feelings also in a way the draws the reader in. Great job. I wonder what is around the proverbial corner. Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 28, 2006 08:57 PST
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AH, i cried...
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Title: from DBZ fanfic salon
Reviewed By: ~daisy On: March 27, 2006 08:56 PST
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The chapter was fantastic and seeing as it delt with the more indepth feelings and regrets of each character is very interesting to the reader and only makes you want to be able to get to the next chapter all that much sooner... Sorry I haven't reviewed for every chapter, but I've been having trouble with mm.org letting me submit reviews for some reason...
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: March 27, 2006 03:09 PST
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Oh man this just gets better and better. Thank you, I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: anastasiavesperman On: March 26, 2006 23:01 PST
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Oooh, I'm just loving this story! The characters might be writing themselves, but from the excellent flow of the story you also have a great handle over them and the tale itself. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 26, 2006 20:31 PST
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I loved it! I think the pace is really great and so is the character interaction. You give time to each character and their individual relationships and how they differ. Keep it up! Thanks
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: March 22, 2006 03:38 PST
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Your bosses are horrible, but we all gotta work, dammit. Still I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work Love it!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 18:33 PST
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The hear to heart talks are so well done and descriptive! I like the way everyone's point of view is portrayed. If the baby 'goes away' I think that tensions will be even greater between Goku and Vegeta. Would Goku forgive himself and/or Vegeta if that happpened? It's hard to say. Both are deeply wounded by recent events and both blame themselves for some things. Their life on earth has caused them both to rely on each other weather they realize it or not. I wonder if Daikkon is a sleeper... I hope not. Keep up the great work.
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