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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: May 08, 2006 06:11 PDT
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oh my, I agree with Goten that is one image I'd rather not have haunt me. Still a wonderful job, thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 02:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your welcome, you deserve all the praise you get for this and more! :D ~ this chapter (and probably the next one) was waht i was dreading and gettig a little excited about, the time to tell everyone about the 'situation' *giggles* ~ but i loved the conversation between Vegeta and Bulla, very well thought out with Bulla's reaction to the news even though she wasn't told 'everthing'... i'm dreading that part too when she gets to that age... if Vegeta decides to tell her... ~ anywayz, brill as ever and i hope the sugery go's well! ^-^
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Title: Lover of the Lavender-haired Demi Super Saiyan!
Reviewed By: IlovTrunks16 On: May 01, 2006 17:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, B, that I think you're fic is awesome! But I couldn't help myself, I had to say it here, too!!! ^_^ I love it, it's so very orignal and your conception of the DBZ characters is wonderful! ^_^ can't wait for your update when you get back from the hospital! *Let's all hope you don't share the same fear of needles as Goku! Lol *
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Reviewed By: ~daisy On: May 01, 2006 12:31 PDT
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I'm SO SO SO sorry I've be SO busy lately.... I did find the time to sit down and read the last three chapters though... I'm surprised that you didn't detail a conversation between Gh/Gk and that Pic had practially figured it out. I love Bulla's reasoning, so sweet and innocent, but all too understanding. I can't help but think that the reactions seem so real. You gotta love Goten, though. His feelings on this first seemed to be shaky, but he's coming to terms of sharing a brother with his best friend. And I'm glad for Vegeta coming areoung too. That has eased up a lot of the anxiety that was being caused by a rift in that relationship... You've detailed his changes in character very well. Good job... ~daisy
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Reviewed By: Macha On: April 30, 2006 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was recommended to me by Pixelgoddess, and I am certainly glad she sent me in this direction! First off, for the critizism part. There were a couple of 'Bulma' s in the place of 'Bulla' s for this chapter. Now on to the much better part! I love the real life reality colliding with the fanfiction. Typical expecting parent topics with Goku...FUN! I am glad Vegeta is seemingly 'okay' with the situation now. I would hate to have to think of you having to write Vegeta/Goku battles for the rest of the fic. The angst and drama you are already having to write are more than enough! I am glad Chichi is taking this well. I can't imagine how else she would have taken this. I can't see her telling Goku he had to have an abortion, but I can readily imagine her saying she was out of there. I am glad that wasn't her decision. Goten's reactions are awesome! They have a real quality to them that I love. Bulla is so cute...in that age bracket sort of way (personally, I'd probably have duct taped and left her some where, but she's not my brat... *grins*) Goku is doing his an excellent job of 'rollin' with the punches'. I liked how you changed pronouns from 'it' to 'he' for this chapter. It seems as though Vegeta's message has sort of gotten through...yeah, REAL reallity has yet to strike yet. I don't envy Goku having to tell the rest of his friends. Will there be more angst and drama...or will everyone be surprisingly okay with this? And how will Goku react if they are NOT okay with this? Hm...Waiting impatiently for the next update. (Selfishly) GET WELL SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 07:57 PDT
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Gosh were to begin, just to read how excited Goku is now puts a smile on my face. I love how chichi is with this story, she isn't yelling and screaming like her normal pain in the A$$ self. I love how you make Vegeta almost "human" Bra is the highlight of this story I say this cause, to see what vegeta would do for her first off and then to read how much he truely loves this child is a treat. In RL. I hope everything goes well with your surgey Good luck and take care. Thank you for another great chapter. Maria
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Title: world ruler
Reviewed By: RichFair On: April 30, 2006 07:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know that I've just found this story. Like your other reader, (with the exeption of a few snack breaks), I throughly enjoyed this original, well written, and very entertaining story in one long session. It was well worth the read. Please keep going with this. I'm dying to know what the child is going to be like, not to mention reading about how Goku and Vegeta are going to handle this. Great characterizations! Great job! I also wanted to wish you good luck on your surgery and hope you get to feeling better soon. RMF
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: April 30, 2006 06:26 PDT
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Loved the bit with Bulla, wonderful. Hope all is well with you, get well soon.
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Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 19:34 PDT
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Another great chapter! You're doing so great on this story! I loved the scene with Bulla and Vegeta. The famous "where do babies come from?" Great job! Can't wait for another update and good luck with your surgery!
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Reviewed By: Rourinu On: April 29, 2006 18:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! My eyes hurt! I just read this entire story in one sitting.... But that just goes to show you how very good it is! I don't come across DBZ stories written with skills such as yours, which is why I haven't dabbled in the fandom in awhile, but I'm glad a checked back and found your fic! I look forward to the next chapter... and the one after that, ect...ect... Good luck with your surgery and I hope to read more from you soon!
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Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 05:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really don't know what to say... i loved the fic but 'cause i've never been pregnant myself, it's a bit harder for me to give a good review on this chapter... but reading some of the other reviews you got, i guess you've captured the essence of being pregnant and when reality hits that there is a living being inside of you. so i congratulate you on that ^-^... and i liked the bit of Vegeta being on the other side of the door... it shows he still cares ^_~
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: April 22, 2006 06:41 PDT
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Oh man you are taking me back six and a half years here. The bump the first heartbeat! My son was later so active that the only time I got terrified was the time he was asleep in the day time and I didn't feel him. Scared the shit out of me. Loved the bit with the presence on the other side of the door. Loving this still thank you
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Title: (Maccam)
Reviewed By: Unlikely Bond On: April 21, 2006 20:01 PDT
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This chapter brought tears to my eyes. I remember the first hearing the sound of my first child's heart beat, and to me it was very real. you've Captured the beginnings of acceptance of what it means to have life inside of you. Wonderfully writen. I can't wait for more. I love how vegeta in some small way was still apart of it..
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: April 21, 2006 19:50 PDT
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Sounds like Goku is being slapped in the face with reality. There are obviously many facets of pregnancy he has never considered, the least of which is growing larger. Sweet - nice touch of Vegeta evesdropping on the exam. Apparently he wanted to hear the heartbeat for himself.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 10:19 PDT
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I'm glad things are returning to normal considering the circumstances. Vegeta is revealing more of his protective side. :) I wonder how Vegeta would react to Goku/Kakarott getting his tail back... assuming it happens. Keep up the great work.
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