| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] |
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in On: May 27, 2006 17:54 PDT
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Yay. Goku got his tail back. Now he's fully intact. I'm glad that he and Chichi are working things out nicely. As for Vegeta...he cares more than he lets on. :) Ooh Trunks' Birthday I wonder hat he's going to get Bulma and Vegeta. I the role reversal is nice. I look forward to the next few chapters. :) Keep it up, and take your time!
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Reviewed By: anastasiavesperman On: May 27, 2006 17:53 PDT
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Yayzerama for new chappies! Hope you are taking good care of yourself and then all your health problems clear up soon. I think the Amek Dan is such an approriate way to celebrate a birthday!
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Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 13:48 PDT
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Oh i like the twist at the end of the chapter, kwel that it's a two parter. can't wait to read about trunks. I glad to hear that your feeling a little better. don't rush ok. we want you healthy and strong.take it easy.
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Title: Chapter 35
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 14:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, Vegeta cares, he can deny it all he wants but, i know the truth, haha XD ~ another cool chapter! ~ YAY! Goku's got his tail back! *starts waving her tail about* heehee n.n; ~ review ya next time ^-^
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: May 20, 2006 05:27 PDT
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What can I say but I still love this. The title of the chapter was just perfect, Ta!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 16, 2006 16:42 PDT
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Please make Vegeta regrow his tail. Also, this is good.
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Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 06:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Another great chapter! Everything is rolling so smoothly and Goku got is tail back!! Now it's Vegeta's turn right? lol Can't wait for another update!!
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Reviewed By: anastasiavesperman On: May 15, 2006 19:17 PDT
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I find this such a soothing fic to read. Things have been proceeding in such a natural way: everyone is in character, the pacing is great. Every time the email arrives to tell me that the next chapter is available, I'm right there, reading it. Fabulous work!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: May 15, 2006 16:09 PDT
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I'm so glad they're all getting their tails back! Well I hope they all do... I really liked Chi Chi in this chapter and the Goku and Vegeta interaction was greatt!
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: May 15, 2006 15:51 PDT
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Awesome chapter - I really like Vegeta's protectiveness of Goku. He's still gruff and growly, but watchful. It's good that they've rebuilt their friendship back to this comfortable level. Nice hints of what might happen with the scents and the tail(s). Really hope Vegeta decides to regenerate his - I think it would make him feel better about himself. It's so obvious Goku really does adore Chichi, even with her so-called faults. I think this baby is good for her as well.
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Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 09:55 PDT
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Wow that was different. So are we going to have saiyans running around with tails now? Question why cab't girl saiyans have tails??? I Love the way chichi and goku interact with each other. I really can't wait to read whats going to happen next. I hope you ll start to feel better real soon.
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: May 11, 2006 19:09 PDT
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I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in ages and I've meant to it just kept slipping my mind. I thought the last chapter was great. Goten relly makes me laugh and the way you write the relationship between him and Trunks is spot on. I was really glad to see some Krillen and Yamcha, especially Yamcha! There reactions were perfect! Really enjoyed the Yamcha and Bulma interaction too. Keep it up and I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: May 10, 2006 17:18 PDT
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I'm caught up to your latest chapter. Wow! You wrote everything so well!! Goten's reactions are so Vegetaesque. And Trunks is looking forward to seeing his new sibling. Everyone is handlilng the news well considering. Great job. I'll be gone for a while and I look forward to reading your next update when I get back. *hugs* Glad your surgery went well.
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Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh cool, back so soon? heh ~ great chapter, i was worried how Goku's friends would take it but they took it way better than i expected... but i always look for the unexpected with this, lol ~ well, hope your not in too much pain and can't wait to review the next one! ^-^
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 06:19 PDT
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Yes this was a great chapter. you put in a lot of detail into it. I'm glad that his freinds are taking the news well. It's funny to read a man's POV on pregnany. I'm glad your feeling better!!
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