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Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 06:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you definitly must update, i need more! lool still loving this fic ^-^
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Reviewed By: Fyrbyrd On: April 18, 2006 05:28 PDT
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What can I say, but another good chapter, still enjoying this very very much
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Reviewed By: Chloe On: April 17, 2006 21:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well then, I must have just missed you the update last night, depending on what time zone you're in. I really enjoy this story and check it every couple days for updates, you're really good at keeping up with it. So anyhow, I think this is my second review, and I still love it. I hope Vegeta actually does do some parenting of this new baby, and proves Chi-Chi wrong. =P I'm really into the M/M so it's a little disappointing not to see it in this story at all, but I like where it's going anyway. Great story, keep up with it and I'll keep reading it!
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Reviewed By: ~daisy On: April 17, 2006 06:52 PDT
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I love that Chichi is being so overprotective and her reaction that Goku is in over his head is SO senseable. It's nice to see that Vegeta won't be taking any aggressive action against Goku for doing what he sees as right, but part of me see can't help but agree with Goku... By the way, I loved Piccolo trying to figure out what was wrong with Goku and his guess of some sort of parasite was ironically funny. Hope you are doing well. ~daisy
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 23:28 PDT
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Ch31-Glad that the Saiyans can spar again. Nice little touches that show they are both trying to be comfortable with each other again. This should go a long way towards that. I wonder if both Vegeta and Goku realize how Vegeta has changed - just his stopping Goku from crashing against the rocks was protective of him.Vegeta has shown throughout the story that he is protective when given the opportunity. Ache? Lower back? Tail? Goku really is going to be in for a shock as his pregnancy progresses, isn't he? Even now, he really has no concept of what this will mean.
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: April 16, 2006 23:17 PDT
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Ch30-I think Bulma knows more about how Goku feels about this than anyone else. He seems more open to her than he is even to Chichi. Chichi is comfort, but with Bulma he expresses his fears. Vegeta and Bulma work so well together - she understands him more than he realizes. "Fuck. You." she stated boldly. "That is what you will tell them. Fuck all of you. I am the Prince of Saiyans. And I am alive and well, and my children will carry out my legacy. All of my children...my son and daughter with my most beloved, genius earth woman." Oh yeah, she knows Vegeta - knows just what to say to get to him. This was a perfect speech.
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: April 16, 2006 22:36 PDT
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Ch29- I so understand Goku's reaction. He isn't sure exactly what Vegeta is going to do, and even thought he won't admit it he has to be afraid. He rarely loses his temper, but Vegeta is someone who can deal with it when it happens. It's good that he expresses his anger over what happened. Interesting that Vegeta acknowledges 'it' is a baby long before Goku does. The idea of a heartbeat forces Goku to accept what he hasn't really been facing - this is a life, not a 'problem'. This chapter actually made me ache for Goku. He really likes Vegeta and it hurts him the way the prince treats him - this is probably the first time he has gotten to express it.
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 21:43 PDT
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Ch28 - "I am well aware of what a monster I am without you reminding me!" It's sad that this is how Vegeta sees himself even now. And because that is what he thinks he is, that is how he tends to react. His trying to hurt Goku and the baby is probably the first time he has really analyzed his behavior enough to regret his actions. Brother moments! It's so rare to see the brothers together in a story and so in character. I like Goten's frustrated rage - it is very believable. Gohan is more analytical - I think he still holds that fear of getting angry and losing control. Goten's 'survivor guilt' is perfect - it's true, sometimes your characters take over and write themselves. It's nice to Chichi as a good mother and not a screaming harpy. She and Goten obviously have a good relationship although it seems she has resigned herself to his not being a scholar like his brother. I liked the exchange - "But, Mom," he smiled, taking her hand, "if I cut the hair, everyone will think I'm an aspiring scholar, like Gohan." "I don't think a haircut will perform miracles," she told him, dryly. "Not when you dress like one of those skating...boarding kids..."
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch27 - Gohan has always struck me as more mature than his father and you capture that nicely. He is probably the best person to get Goku to understand the impact of his decision - not to make him change his mind - he wouldn't do that, but to make Goku realize there are ramifications to others. Poor Vegeta - trapped in the little girl corner of the universe. :D That's kind of cruel of both Bulma and Vegeta to see spending time with their daughter as a form of punishment, especially since Bulla obviously senses it. I say it again - poor Vegeta. He is so emotionally shredded he isn't acting or thinking like himself...the surest sign is him actually wanting to be comforted by Bulma. I like the easy friendship between Bulma and Goku - they can be honest and confused with each other, acknowledging how difficult and awkward this is. With every chapter I just love this story more. It is so rare to find something so thoughtful and mature.
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: April 16, 2006 15:02 PDT
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It's starting to get a bit weird and uncomfortable for everyone with Goku showing, isn't it? No matter how cool you were with it a pregnant guy would freak you out! Keep going because I'm loving how all the relationships are unfolding and evolving. Thanks and Happy Easter
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Reviewed By: thehitchhiker (not logged in) On: April 16, 2006 14:32 PDT
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Yay! They're all back on track! Despite how well everyone seems to be dealing with this pregnancy (well...now, anyways) you keep mentioning things going "unexpectedly"....interesting..... oooh I love this! Can't wait for the next chapter! xx HH
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Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 07:14 PDT
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YaY! Another great chapter! I love the fact that Goku and Vegeta are getting along now minus the uncomfortable moments when Vegeta stopped Goku. Was he nervous at the close contact? Or did he just want to feel Goku up? *grins* sorry been reading to many lemons. Keep up the great work and I can't wait until you update again!
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Title: Unlikely Bond
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: April 16, 2006 05:23 PDT
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I'm glad to see that vegeta and goku are both trying to make the best out of a very bad situation. I really like chichi being the mother hen for goku. Have a great holiday!!!
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Title: JUST AMAZING!!
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 08:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, it took me about a month and a week to read all from 1-30 chapters and i'd like to say that this fic is amazing!! the story is really deep and the characters are actually in character, including Vegeta -(in most other fics Vegeta wouldn't really be in character as much as this story has him in... which is a real achievment ^^,)- and i'd also like to say that in this fic, Goten has to be my fav because of his atitude as a teenager plus his dry sense of humour and how blutant he is ^_^ (does that make sense??) anywayz, i think i've written enough (or too much ^-^;;) so i'll finish this up by saying, loving this fic and can't wait till you update again! ^-^ ttyl
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: April 12, 2006 11:07 PDT
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Wonderful chapters. You put a great deal of thought into them and this story. Great Job! I'm glad Vegeta and Goku/Kakarott have settled some things. I look forward to more. :)
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