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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 22:42 PDT
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As i sit here 1:42 in the morning working a double shift, i'm tired and grumpy, I couldn't help but laugh. you have made my night and i that you so very much B. It's getting better and if you want to write 50 more chapters please do. you haven't let us down yet, and i thank you!
| Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 19:45 PDT
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I've been reading for a long while but couldn't review because I wasn't a member. So I finally joined, even though I don't really write, and reviewed. I was looking for more M/M-ish but its good anyway. The lack of lemons was a little disappointing, but then life just isn't sex, so its ok. I'm not into orgies or anything, but since Chichi's being so supportive why not have one big happy family. Bulma can't cook, but Chichi can. Maybe I just like the idea of Vegeta and Goku/Kakarotto too much? When will the bad guys be back? We all know thy're not gone. It would be nice to Daikkon kicking the @$$es of the people really responsible for his mothers death, even if he doesn't get to do the General in. It'll be nice to see more of Goku's saiyan side now that his tail is back. It was also great that you had him talking to it when it first came back. I'm thinking that Mal and his "family" would help Goku heal or at least get more comfortable with the idea. I've always thought that "Goku" was Kakarotto without the orders to kill everybody. That he is saiyan; what a saiyan would be if they hadn't grown up in that whole everything is beneath us environment. Maybe he could learn from Daikkon on the sly to impress his prince, because I think he does see Vegeta as his prince somewhere in his head. Speaking of which, I'd like to see how he deals with that whole "property" thing. Especially when the mood swings hit! Now don't sacrfice the quality or anything, but I check almost daily and the wait nearly kills me. TTFN!
| Reviewed By: Kiraboshi On: October 12, 2006 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, firstly I'll just say I'm only on chapter 12 right now. ^__^ But it's enjoyable to read. I admit, I was looking for lemon-y yaoi types when I was browsing Mediaminor, buuuut, this caught my interest even though it's not as hardcore as I was looking for. :D Grammar is okay, there are a few spelling errors, basically some verb-agreement issues, nothing frightening. xD Good though. When I have more time I'll continue reading.
| Reviewed By: SmittenKitten On: October 12, 2006 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, firstly I'll just say I'm only on chapter 12 right now. ^__^ But it's enjoyable to read. I admit, I was looking for lemon-y yaoi types when I was browsing Mediaminor, buuuut, this caught my interest even though it's not as hardcore as I was looking for. :D Grammar is okay, there are a few spelling errors, basically some verb-agreement issues, nothing frightening. xD Good though. When I have more time I'll continue reading.
| Reviewed By: Kiraboshi On: October 12, 2006 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, firstly I'll just say I'm only on chapter 12 right now. ^__^ But it's enjoyable to read. I admit, I was looking for lemon-y yaoi types when I was browsing Mediaminor, buuuut, this caught my interest even though it's not as hardcore as I was looking for. :D Grammar is okay, there are a few spelling errors, basically some verb-agreement issues, nothing frightening. xD Good though. When I have more time I'll continue reading.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 00:00 PDT
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I know Mal's name has to be a joke of some sort, but I'm... not getting it. >.< I know "mal de mer" is seasickness... Interesting how Goku was the one to feel Vegeta's injury through his bond, and not Bulma. And just which one was he warning off when he glared at them through the healing tank? I know I know, I'm inserting yaoi where there probably isn't any again- it's become involuntary. ;D Looking forward to the baby shower chappie!
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 01:30 PDT
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Damn, what's Goku complaining for? Having a baby who'll speed through the puking, crying, messing-itself stage would be a freaking godsend. Now, since it's a baby shower Goku will have to receive at least one pair of pinking shears. They're darling and lovely! (Sorry, that's a MST3K joke X3)
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 23:57 PDT
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I fear this baby shower for Goku. lol "Babies in terra cotta pots." XD Anne Geddes. Thank you for not making Yamcha and Krillan bastards in this fic, btw, don't know if I mentioned that before. Their reactions are just as I'd imagine them to be: uncomfortable about the whole thing, but trying to be supportive for Goku's sake. And good for Vegeta, trying to get along and keep his temper down.
| Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 09:04 PDT
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I'm really enjoy your writing more and more. I'm torn between bulma and yamcha. I feel that they both have a good point to there argument. I'm just happy that vegeta is feeling better about himself. I want more ASAP!
| Title: ch 44 -46
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy not logged on On: September 19, 2006 13:55 PDT
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Hey, I didn't review ch44 before as mediaminer wouldn't let me so I saved it on word. here it is: "ooh that was so wicked I really enjoyed that chapter, I can see the dramatic yet subtle changes in the relationship between Goku and Vegeta, Bulma and Vegeta and can't wait to see how it will progrss, their bonds seem to be growing stronger and its lovely to watch. lil bra is so cute when she is fighting she seemed so excited like a kid in a candy store 'daddy said i can hit you everywhere except your belly' lol poor goku. I wonder how Goku's Baby shower will be definitely an event not to be missed. Krillen's reaction was classic." I'm enjoying your latest chapters especially 46, i enjoy reading the dialogue between the characters, the exchange feels so natural. And Vegeta's metamorphosis I can't beleive it's him sometimes. The change really is quite dramtic, i'm not sure how I feel about it, sometimes I imagine he is how he would be in Bulma's dream and i think could this be real? I'm not sure how I feel about being confronted with the man Vegeta could be. It feels new, strange sometimes. I don't know how to explain it.
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 (logged out) On: August 27, 2006 18:16 PDT
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Well done! Another chapter is out. :) It is interesting to see how they are drawing closer together as the time for arrival closes in. Vegeta is finally letting go of some of his past and is moving forward; wondeful. I like your writting style. Somtimes what is not said is just as important. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 00:55 PDT
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Excellent chapter-- creative use of oozaru, and of a dream sequence. Apparently the dream was Vegeta's turning point (looks like it took a message from his own unconscious to get through to him). I'm so glad to see Veggie's finally coming around!^^ The scene between him and Goku was wonderfully done. And yes there was a lot of angst, but it was good angst, the believable and satisfying kind, not the kind that makes me want to roll my eyes and say 'cry me a river'. I'm looking forward to the next update. p.s. You write in a notebook and then type it up? Me too!!!
| Title: Wiping my tears away
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 19:51 PDT
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Wow again for another AWESOME chapter. all i can say is i can't wait to read more!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 15:42 PDT
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MM.org would not let me revew all week! Anyway... Wonderful chapters. The event that Bulma is planning would be quite the eye-opener for some people for sure. :) With Goku's mood swings in effect, I wonder how Vegeta will react if he make him cry. As much as no one would want that, it would be bound to happen I think. I wonder if Goten is considering other things, given the knowlege he now has about himself. Also, Bra sparring with Goku was a great scene. I anticipate your next chapter. :) Happy writing.
| Title: oujo
Reviewed By: dishgurl On: August 11, 2006 18:22 PDT
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ENCORE! brilliant work! I can't wait for the next chap. nether can anyone else... XD
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