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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: February 25, 2006 03:05 PST
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Arrrgh! And I thought Pixelgoddess was the Queen of Cliffhangers! Luckily I've got hanging equipment, just don;t leave me here too long!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: February 24, 2006 10:51 PST
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Well, that was rather predictable, but fun to read anyway. :-) Goku is being a bit selfish. To his recent behavior only underscores the likelyhood that he likes/loves Vegeta more than the others know, or that he would admit to himself. Vegeta... he's practically masochistic, punishing himself for things out of his control. He also has a choice to be involved in the child or not. I hope the overtime doesn't wear you out too much. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: February 23, 2006 19:41 PST
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Poor Goku and poor Vegeta. Vegeta's reaction (thinking Goku wanted to punish him) was not what I expected but fits perfectly, Bulma being understanding does too. I wish Goku would realise just how hard it would be on everyone. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: February 23, 2006 17:07 PST
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Well this can't be good - Goku is going to have to struggle to protect himself and the baby without hurting Vegeta as well. While the decision is perfectly Goku - Vegeta is right - he isn't considering how this will affect everyone else. Vegeta does have a tendency to twist things around to the worse possible interpretation. (Are you sure you posted the beta'd version? There are quite a few mistakes.)
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: February 19, 2006 19:55 PST
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Wonderful as usual. I wonder what everone else will think of Goku's decicion to keep the baby. I wonder how Chichi will treat Vegeta from now on. I'm glad the Chichi is being supportive. I wonder how Vegeta will react when he finds out that Goku kept the baby. I think that he will be secretly glad he did. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: hero4hire On: February 18, 2006 07:06 PST
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I checked in and was glad you finally added more to this story. It's going to be interesting to see how this lot deal with the baby on the way. Hope you get over the writer's block soon. (I know it's a bitch!)This chapter was really well written. Take Care Hero4Hire
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Reviewed By: 156132 On: February 15, 2006 17:49 PST
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Gah!!! Keep writing!!!!
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: February 12, 2006 16:56 PST
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I thought Goku would make that choice for two reasons: One, he treasures life. Two, he knew that he or Vegeta would regret the termination of the only other full blooded saiyan besides the new arrival. As always I really enjoy your writing. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 05:27 PST
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Another great chapter!! I'm glad Goku is going to keep this baby. Makes me wonder what it will look like. I'm sure Vegeta will get very angry when he realizes that Goku is not getting rid of it but I'm sure Chi Chi and Bulma will be supported...I hope. Can't wait for the next chapter. Take your time I know how writers block can be aggravting.
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Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: February 12, 2006 03:12 PST
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Having faced Goku's decision six years ago, I really really know how he feels. I have a little boy I am raising alone because I could not kill it. I hope Goku feels the same. This is really good, keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: February 11, 2006 19:54 PST
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I'm not suprised at Vegeta's reaction, but he should know by now what kind of person Goku is. More of a question is how everyone will react once they realize Goku will keep the baby. Is Vegeta going to become a danger to Goku? I doubt it, but things could get very uncomfortable. Is Bulma going to have to choose sides between Vegeta and Goku? They both have valid viewpoints - neither one is wrong. What will Chichi do now? I can't see her blaming Goku for the pregnancy, but will she support his choice? And who is headed his way? (Betting on Goten and Trunks...)
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Title: from DBZ salon
Reviewed By: ~daisy On: February 06, 2006 12:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As promised a review at MM. I'm REALLY enjoying your stoty so far, it seems very original and very true to character, which makes it that much more interesting. Keep up the good work, and you deserve every bit of praise you get on this story. I hope you update soon, but you're always good about not keeping your fans waiting anymore than a few days. Good job B!
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Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 13:40 PST
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Yay another great chapter! I think you are depicting the characters very well for what they have gone through and will be going through in future chapters. Nice job on the lemon scene. Hope to see another update soon. I want to see what happens when they realize what is actually up with Goku.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01(not logged in) On: February 05, 2006 09:56 PST
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Wonderful chapter. Goku's condition is clear by now. As for Vegeta, I think he suspects Kakarott condition as well. As for their mental states, I think the road to recovery is going to be a long one. I look forward to next your update next week.
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Reviewed By: hero4hire On: February 05, 2006 08:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you have a new chapter up! Keep up the great work! I'm not the biggest DBZ fan, but I love this story. Keep writing!
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