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Title: Ginia
Reviewed By: ginia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 18:47 PDT
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I am SO glad I came across this again! I read the current chapter - but of course I have missed MANY prev chaps that I may as well go back and read from the beginning of the fic again. what a shame - I get to read your great story again... Ginia SaiyanHideAway http://www.saiyanhideaway.us/
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Title: I'm an idiot and I admit it.
Reviewed By: Eim30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 14:51 PDT
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Completely ignore what I said about suspense. I'm just a complete idiot and didn't see the scroll down. I was so worried and thought there were only 20 chapters. (stupid, stupid, stupid!) I really need to pay more attention.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Eim30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So... when does the next chapter come. I luckily started reading when there were already 20 chapters. I can't stand the suspense. I have written a few of my own fanfics, but I haven't put any out into the open yet. Sorry to mention it, but you might want to read through them once or twice more for errors. If you need more help, I wouldn't mind.
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Reviewed By: Eim30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing. It's fine that the chapters are shorter. It just means that it is easier to stop for a moment if you need to quickly get something. It also means that there will be more chapters *please*. The only problem was the grammar. It was annoying, but you can still read through it. What do you mean when you say that you need a 'beta' reader. I don't have a clue what you mean by that... Anyway, you should keep writing because your story is beautiful. P.S. I only read to CH 14 so far. *cries*
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Reviewed By: GokuGirl On: March 13, 2009 09:41 PDT
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Still reading and I LOVED the chapter! Seriously I think your the best writer I've read from. ^_^ Cant wait to read more when you get more chapters done!
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Reviewed By: Nasanya On: March 11, 2009 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have really outdone any DBZ story I have ever read, as far as quality goes. This one will be one that tops the standards of fanfics for the genre. The character development between relationships that you normally wouldn't see is absolutely remarkable. I think you have a valid interaction, with this midnight relationship having been developed between Chichi and Vegeta. That's not one you usually see as a positive relationship, and yet, the reasons you have for pulling it together, absolutely stunning. Then, the interaction between Goku and Chichi as well, as them being that devoted to each other, I think a lot of writers turn her character to the more extreme personality that you can see as being sort of shrewed on the show. I love your characterization of her, and yet, I as much as I dislike her on the show, I think she is becoming one of my favorite characters in the story. That has to be a mark of achievement, I've never seen her better portrayed than how I see her in your story. I love it. The bit wit Vegeta putting on the ring, was surprisingly sweet to me. I think it's brought a whole new level to his character, and how he interacts with the others. I think we obviously know that at the moment he's struggling for lust between Goku and love for Bulma that he's definitely suffering. I honestly feel sorry for him. I don't think I've read a story with a Vegeta relationship that I've liked since reading Pixelgoddess' Quest, however long ago that was. I'm not really a fan for him as a character, but you have really shown a side in his and Bulma's relationship that's making me like him more as well. I really have enjoyed reading his reactions to his growing Saiyan family. I WAS still hoping for a bit of Truten moments here in this chapter though, being that they had hinted at a more serious commitment previously, I was hoping to see a development between them too, but the hinting at Goten never using his room was entertaining. XD
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Reviewed By: Marieka On: March 11, 2009 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes I'm still reading. Not very good at the review part but *shrugs* oh well. Wanted to let you know I loved it and will continue to read as long as you keep writing. I understand quite well that life interferes with other things we like to do. So what if it takes a bit longer... I'm not going anywhere ^_^ Can't wait to read s'more!
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 00:29 PDT
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So good to hear from you again! Loved the new chapter, loved it loved it loved it. Read it twice and probably will again. So much heavenly Goku appreciation (and even a GCC!), like gifts of fanservice just for me. *sigh* Thank you, Vejita, for that tidal wave. You read my mind. Heheh, I knew Vejita seemed more like a chibi Goku, even though he looks like Vegeta. That will appear more and more hilarious as he gets older. "Go poop?" Rotfl I laughed out loud. That is such a perfect little-kid thing to say. Potty time is serious business, after all. Seems like Daikon may have made his first move toward possible future evil. I was never especially suspicious of him, but suggesting a trip into space could definitely lead to trouble, whether he planned it or not. Great stuff from all the main characters this chappie, Goku, Bulma, Veg and Chichi. Chichi seemed to have come to a lot of revelations and achieved a lot of growth. I had to laugh at her thinking that Bulla was on the verge of complete delinquency until she had a hand in her upbringing. Oh, and of course you felt something in that cave with Goku, Vegeta, you huge denier! Appreciate the hot bod! XD Here's hoping life will give you a break and allow you lots of time for writing. ;)
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Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 15:51 PDT
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Things seem a bit awkward between Goku and Vegeta at the moment :( I hope Chi-chi's late night chat has helped. I got a bit emotional too when she did, she's come a long way to acknowledge her respect for Vegeta, regret how she stifled Goku for a while, and allow the possibility of them being together. Got slightly worried when she said they all should be Saiyans as I wouldn't want the Dragon to grant that. Hope you can update sooner as this is such a good story :)
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Reviewed By: lovecoma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 21:48 PST
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""Papa has... um... um..." "Go poop?" Vejita asked excitedly, as if his answer was correct. Goku gave a snort of amusement." I snorted right along with Goku at this. It's just such a typical little boy answer to what could possibly be wrong - if all else fails, must be bodily functions! :D I'm still LOVING the slow build between the 2 full-bloods and the graceful acceptance on the part of both wives. I'm really looking forward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: March 07, 2009 21:31 PST
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I'm at a loss for words on this one. The little ones are adorable! Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 05:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice chapter. I really like your interplay between Chichi and Vegeta - they understand each other more than Vegeta would like to admit. I'm glad Vegeta"s actually thinking about the possibility of being the patriarch of this Saiyan family. I wonder where you're going with the idea of Daikon going to get his things - am I getting a sense of foreboding? :P The women are being so wise and understanding. I keep wondering what kind of trauma will arise for Goku if/when things between him and Vegeta progress. Has he really dealt with the rape? I doubt it. And you made me read well written het sex again. :P
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Title: Chapter 76
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 02:18 PST
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There were some great moments in there, and some fascinating little glimpses of revelation as the various characters attempt to reconcile themselves to the inevitable changes in their lives. And I totally loved the moment when Vegeta had that flashback to being pinned down by Goku. It was so... full of potential. Hopefully life will allow you to get on with the important things, such as new chapters for us all! :D
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Andais Jacobs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 18:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
may i just say... WOW! this is by far the most well written, unique fanfic i've read in years! it took me almost a week to read all 75 chaps and i look forward to reading the rest. congrats on your 3 yr anniversary. and again, may i just say... WOW!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: MM.Org: Kylee On: November 30, 2008 14:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, you updated! This is by far the best fanfiction I've read for it content, characters, and originality! I'm loving every single chapter, and I'm so glad life hasn't stopped you from updating lately. This week not only marks three years of Unlikely Bond, but also two years of my loyal fandom *bows*. I'm so glad you're starting to lead the story in a direction that can not only lead to more drama, but lead to possible GxV romance! If I was Goku, I would ask for a kiss from Vegeta for Christmas...or another baby...
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