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| "Unlikely Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 466 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 › » ] | Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 19, 2006 17:12 PST
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Gohan's reaction was perfect, like I always say great characterization. I think telling Gohan would of been the hardest for Goku but he was so understanding and I love him! I love the Bulma and Goku relationship, she really is like his older sister and that puts her in a hard situation. I'm kinda angry at Vegeta but totally understand him and I hope Bulma does comfort him because he's hurting too! Even though you say you have wirters block its as good as ever so don't stress! Thanks
| Reviewed By: spendragon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 12:37 PST
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Love this story, really. its unique(sp?) update soon, your on my favs!
| Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:31 PST
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I'm so far behind on reviewing...let's see if I can catch up. Ch24 - I really feel bad for Vegeta - he doesn't know how to acknowledge or deal with his pain. He talks so much with his fists - if he hurts everyone else has to as well. Nice fight scene - that always seems hard to write. I hope Super Saiyan doesn't have any negative impact on the baby."I told him I was keeping...it...and he got angry." I don't know if Goku would refer to the baby as 'it' - Vegeta would, though. Ch25 - "Trunks watched wearily" wearily or warily - is he tired or concerned? Trunks seems rather passive - I guess he has been disappointed or hurt one time too many. Vegeta just stumbles through emotions so awkwardly - when he displays anything besides rage he just seems to scream out hurt and anguish. Trunks realizes Vegeta was raped as well in this - does anyone else? Does Bulma? She feels bad for him, but does she acknowledge to herself what was really done to Vegeta? "But now, here he sat. Soon to be the owner of one child per broken goal." I love this line - Vegeta is so unwilling or unable to accept the good in his life. He has been hurt so much that nothing else feels right. It isn't that I support Vegeta's viewpoint, it is that Goku seems to be unwilling to acknowledge it and how much this will change everyone's lives - it is his decision, but with far-reaching impact. For example, Chichi is being accepting, but how does she really feel about all of this? Ch26 - Interesting that the sons reactions are swapped from what you would expect. Vegeta is so defeated and overwhelmed by events he can't react to them anymore. You can feel how much he hurts at who he is, what he's done, and how helpless he feels. "It was so much easier to handle guilt when he felt the punishing sting of pain." He really is punishing himself, unable to let himself enjoy the good things. Bulma has to be frustrated as well - how can you help a person who won't let you? Guilty Vegeta feels quite different, but I wonder how long this will last. I'm glad he is finally able to communicate with Trunks.Trunks' speech pattern is a little more formal than I would expect, since neither Vegeta or Bulma seem to speak that way, but I guess he is well-read. I can't wait until the next chapter. It is so rare to find a story that shows how something like rape effects everyone, not just the primary victim. The maturity levle of this is amazing. I wonder how Gohan will react to it. I can't help but think Daikkon is still hiding something, or has other motives.
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:13 PST
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Well done! I thought the way you showed how Vegeta's character is evolving. Same with everyone. I don't see Goten and Trunks getting together, unless there is a bioligical reason for it. Like what is happening to Goku. However the idea has possibly been planted,due to recent disoveries. On that note I think Goten's view of 'the child' will change for the better, as he realizes that he is no longer the 'little one' of his family anymore. I'll say it again. Well done!
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 11, 2006 14:33 PST
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I love Vegeta and Trunks! Poor Goten, I like that he kinda sided with Vegeta over his Dad. It showed how he might still not see Goku as his Dad 100%, since the whole dead for 7 years deal. Bulma's I love Goku and you speech was perfect, so her. I just hope it dones't get too freaky and complicated, but there's no chance of it not, isn't there? Thanks
| Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: March 11, 2006 03:51 PST
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Writers block can be a bitch sometimes, but sometimes what you fight with the hardest coems out so well. Just wanted to mention that you are the second only author that had gotten me to like ChiChi in a fan fic (Can you guess who the other is, I have mentioned her before?) Trunks and Goten, oh yeah just right! Can't wait for more.
| Reviewed By: Zack, the Sayajin On: March 08, 2006 20:44 PST
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Hey, people here are really siding with Vegeta o.O I don't think Goku doesn't knows how hard his decision would be on others, but while their opinions surely should be heard before making the decision, that ultimately stays with him, and him alone. He can't be blamed for the hardness of the situation, or the way other people views everything. Anyway, keep up with the good job, the fic is awesome.
| Reviewed By: Chloe On: March 08, 2006 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure, it's been done before, but never this well. I love this. Goku should convince Vegeta by mentioning how strong the baby will probably be... Anyways. This story is amazing! Mutilate that writer's block and keep on with this. And it's also great the you're pretty consistant with updates, always a plus. A huge one, in fact.
| Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 09:55 PST
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Another great chapter! I hope Vegeta will come to his senses and maybe start playing nice.He should probably talk to Goku, even though he has a hard time with words. Hope you can come out of your writers block soon!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
| Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: March 05, 2006 03:46 PST
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I don't agree like I said before I've been there! I got pregant when I thought I could not the father in another state, in no way able to help, and too afraid to tell him because of just what Vegeta did. Kill it! I can tell you the only time I got sick the entire time I was pregant was the day I had to make to decision whether or not to keep the baby! After being told I or the baby or both could die. It was not an easy deicison, but in the end this was a new life, a life inside that you cannot deny. My son only met his father this year and only because I pushed for it. You cannot really tell what you will do until faced with it. I do not regret my decision, even if my brat drives me insane at times. No I side with Goku sure I also understand Vegeta's anger too, what was done to them is wrong. But to attack Goku to kill the child is wrong too. The damage would do much deeper than the death of an unwanted child. Sorry couldn;t help the long rant! Would Vegeta really kill it if he were carrying it and it was his decision. Probably, that's the way he is. Goku loves life too much, he is not a killer and Vegeta should know that! Still I'm being a pain, keep up the good work, it's your story and I still like it very much.
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 (not logged in) On: March 04, 2006 15:34 PST
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I'm glad Vegeta and Trunks got that out of the way. I thought that Goten took the news well...for him anyway. Guilt is the heaviest of burdens. I wonder what Vegeta's next move will be. I suspect Goku will be in for some more surprises. I wonder if the other saiyans will come back to try and claim the child...or if they found someone else to be a child factory. I guess I'm getting ahead of myself. :D Keep up the great work! I too hate writers' block.
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 04, 2006 14:34 PST
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Trunks is pretty much the most reasonable person ever, isn't he? I love Goten too, what a perfect reaction! Vegeta needs to rationally talk this through with Goku and maybe everyone involved instead of brooding. Goku, oh poor Goku. He has the weight of the world o his shoulders right now. Hope the writers block goes even though your doing great with it. Thanks for the PM too! P.S I just really love this story... I'm rambling but i have to say I think it's great you've taken something as strange as this idea and turned it into suc h perfect story. I love see peoples ideas of how characters would react to this and that and this is exactly what you do!
| Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged On: March 01, 2006 19:15 PST
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I'm kinda getting frustrated with Goku. He doesn't seem to totally understand Vegeta. I kinda agree with Vegeta, Goku getting rid of the baby would erase most of the troubles... for Vegeta. But then I understand Goku because he donesn't want to hurt anyone and feels he responsble for the baby. I really just don't know what to think! But it was awesome!
| Reviewed By: Webtester01 (logged out) On: March 01, 2006 10:35 PST
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Wow. Looks like Vegeta and Trunks have a lot to work out. I hope Vegeta can overcome his self-hatred. Great chapter! I hope that the zygote is ok. Otherwise the emotional rift between Goku and Veget could get even wider.
| Reviewed By: fyrbyrd On: February 25, 2006 03:05 PST
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Arrrgh! And I thought Pixelgoddess was the Queen of Cliffhangers! Luckily I've got hanging equipment, just don;t leave me here too long!
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