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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 06:28 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestincharacterfiction1st2.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Title: FEUDAL ASSOCIATION
Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 05:49 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestiykagromace2nd.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyed your commentary on the mating habits of demons. I liked Sess and Kagura smirking when Kagome brought up marking. Sess was in almost canon form trying to determine whether they intended to mate by forcing Inuyasha to bring his youkai into play to protect his relationship with Kagome (staying connected w/her in front of Sess, trying to get her pregnant to discourage a potentional rival and having her retain his scent in front of Sess.) Miroku is much more honorable about Sango than she expected him to be.(Not having sex w/student)I am glad in their case that they are waiting just as I am glad that you made I/K not wait.
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Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 02:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_O Well that chapter was definately interesting. I'm not really into yaoi though. I liked the rest though. I just can't wait to see where this is headed. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad that Inuyasha and Kagome dodged the baby bullet that they weren't quite ready for. But, that whole situation revealed a lot about Inuyasha's insecurities. He truly is afraid that someone will try to take Kagome away from him; that was emphatically proven when he instinctively tried to get her pregnant to keep her with him. It was so desperate and sad. And, even though Sesshoumaru told them that she wasn't pregnant, Kagome probably should still move up her wedding date. Inuyasha seems to really need that committment and security from her, even if he hasn't said it out loud. In this case, his actions have spoken much louder than his words. on a lighter note, Sesshoumaru, to be such a good businessman, is sorely lacking in TACT. From the way he just busted into his brother's house without warning to the way that he denied his true relationship with Kagura, Sessh was batting a thousand when it came to NOT being smooth, lol. But that probably won't be too much of a problem after a while. Kagura will make him sick of the couch eventually, lol. Good update, and I look forward to reading the next one.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this introduction of the band of seven in and the way that you eliminated the first one. Also I liked the handling of the mating mark, I am not always fond of the idea of biting to mark your mate. The discussion on how Kagome accepts Inuyasha so much that her aura has claimed him runs true to the original and is well done. The interaction with Inuyasha and Sesshomaru is interesting, they seem to at least like one another. I know earlier you brought that out but it seems to be coming out more as the story progresses. Miroku being awkward explaining to Sango why he stopped and her response was great character development. And Sango's telling him about the rumors that he didn't know about was great. I am eagerly awaiting the next update.
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 00:58 EDT
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Nice Lemons... My favorite part was the kissing scene between Sango and Miroku. 'i can wait a LittLe Longer' ooh, Looks Like things are Looking up for the both of them. *sQueaL* So romantic! Mmmm... Kagura and Sesshoumaru? Not so bad, in fact it's a nice pairing... is there going to be a Lemon about the two of them? Can't wait wait for the next chappie! Oh, and congratuLations by the way!
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 06:06 EDT
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i just can't stay away... When's the next chappie? i reaLLy, reaLLy, reaLLy want to know! By the way, have you written other AU's?
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: June 25, 2008 19:31 EDT
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!!! Miroku makes his move! The line sounds corny, but I just know the poor sap actually means it (since if he was planning to dazzle her with a line, I know he could have done better than that!). Now I'm wondering if the next chapter opens with a wandering hand and a subsequent SLAP! And two thumbs up for more Inu-demon (who seems to be a bit of a hentai - but hey, animal lust, right?). Loved how Sesshomaru knew he was riling up Inuyasha's demon side, but seemed amused if anything. I will now re-lurk, but eagerly await the next installment!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 03:23 EDT
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i got so excited after reading your stories! i forgot to Leave a review after every chapter! And i'm gonna make it up now! WhiLe i DiD expect Kikyou and Naraku to end up together, i never expected that BOTH Sesshoumaru and Kagura saw Inu/Kag's raunchy sex scene! i'd die of embarrassment if i ever step into Kagome's shoes right now! The sex scenes from the past two chapters are very exciting! i reaLLy Like the rush feeLing! i can't wait to read about Sango's reaction from the kiss Miroku gave her. i reaLLy don't think it's earLy, in fact i'd be okay if they have a sex scene in the next chapter! Anyway, thanks for writing beautifuL stories and goodLuck again!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 03:23 EDT
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wah! FinaLLy! After deciding not to open my internet accounts for about a month and a haLf! At Last! i was abLe to read new chapters of my favorite story by my fave author! Thank you so much for updating! i reaLLy Loved aLL of the story! i'm so excited for the next chapter! Again, update soon! Godspeed and i hope aLL those nominated creations of yours wouLd win!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 02:17 EDT
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haha you just had to use that line. Not as beautiful as you didntyou. And poor Kagome.. well her soon to be -in laws. Just saw it all. lol. Though i would like to know why he transformed.. got me wonderingnow.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 02:16 EDT
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haha you just had to use that line. Not as beautiful as you didntyou. And poor Kagome.. well her soon to be -in laws. Just saw it all. lol. Though i would like to know why he transformed.. got me wonderingnow.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit to extreme curiosity as to what information Sesshomaru had to impart that was so important that Inuyasha and Kagome had to be interrupted at such a personal time. Demon Inuyasha's reaction to the audience was funny, he was making sure everyone knew without a doubt that Kagome is his mate and he would fight for her. The switch to Miroku and Sango was good too. It was a nice development of their relationship. I am looking forward to what happens next.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 09:32 EDT
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Yay, Miroku kissed Sango.Okay so I couldn't wait to read more and had to chedk on what you had here. I am estatic to find that you are still working on this. I can't wait until you add more. While I 'm waiting for more of this story I may just check out some of your other works on this site. Do you have any suggestions on any other authors by the way. I am currently into Inu/Kag and Sess/Kag fictions. I have even discovered a doujinshi called 'Raindrops' by Youkai Yume on devientArt. If you have any suggestions please let me know. ~Darknessdawns Darknessdawns13@yahoo.com
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