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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: Gin Blossom On: June 21, 2008 23:59 EDT
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That was so mean!!!!! Now post the next chapter, please! Every single section left us hanging!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But, boy, did Kagome ever get a crash course in what it truly means to be mated to a demon....or a hanyou. I was blushing FOR her in this chapter, lol. There is something a bit sexy about Yasha's caveman behavior, though, embarrassment aside. It must be nice to be wanted that much. But, nevertheless, I'm sure that Kagome would have preferred that to be A LOT more private. Hopefully, Inuyasha won't be quite this bad when Kagome finally does mate with him officially. He still seems to be waiting for the other shoe to drop, poor guy. And Miroku and Sango's kiss was so sweet. I'm glad that they are starting to move forward. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Reviewed By: pewterwings On: June 21, 2008 22:39 EDT
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Wow! I did not expect Jankotsu to show up. Nice touch. Will you be explaining what set InuYasha off? And of course, I can't wait to see how Sango reacts to the kiss. Will she let herself get close?
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW You brought the band of seven! May I say... I don't like them! But I'm intrigued on what are you planning. Certainly you portrait them in a very scary way, I know... they are. But in your story, well, it's like more real... and that is scary. Now, I'm worried about Grandpa... Well nice scene between I/K... poor them... Sess had to appear... LOL Indeed you know how to break the mood, ne? And Sango and Miroku!! Finally a kiss! That Kirara :D she is a matchmaker!! LOL We'll see how things between these two will work, I imagine that -as normal relationships- it will have its ups and downs. Furthermore, was just a kiss... meaning a lot, but everything is too new for both of them and they still have to build their relationship and, break with their own insecurities and fears. So, yeah, a long way to go. But, really, a nice setting for this kiss... sort of innocent, and romantic... Well done. Thank you so much Cathy, this was a great -short :)- chapter, but I know you have a lot of things in RL going on, so thank you so much for having a bit of time to give us this wonderful chapter for an amazing story. Thank you so much :bows deeply: and thank you for sharing with us!!! :huggles:
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 06:19 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 06:15 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: Feudal Association On: June 19, 2008 05:25 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: Chapter Twenty One
Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 21:08 EDT
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I'm not surprised that Inuyasha doesn't really like these events. I get the feeling that before he was outed they were not his cup of tea, yet he went out of obligation in a lot of ways to appease his brother. Even though you've matured Inuyasha in the story, I still get the sense that he still wants Sesshomaru's approval. I do think it's interesting that he knows so much about his brother and what he's doing regardless of the rift they've just been through. It shows that he cares more than he's willing to admit. Leave it to Mama to set Sango straight. Even though she knows of Miroku's rep, she can tell that the man really likes Sango. Sango has such a hard time believing that anyone could find her sexually attractive and to have some one point out that's exactly what's happening embarrasses her. I just hope that she'll take her words to heart and come to the realization that Mama's right. Miroku's been slowly changing in the course of the story and I think he really wants to be presentable in character to her when the time comes for him to truly admit his feelings. I think Sango isn't willing to totally believe Mama because of that reputation, however, and I think it'll take time for her to see that Miroku's not just teasing her to get laid. The longer they have a relationship, romantic or otherwise, will help her to realize that. I just hope Miroku's as patient as he's been. I'm not surprised that Inuyasha was bothered by the comments of the rude party guests. He's used to being insulted, but he's never taken it well when Kagome or others in his company are. I think it's because he believes he deserves it while those associated with him don't---as wrong and misguided as that is. He should listen to Kagome. She's right. Those people probably don't realize that they're isolating not just him, but his brother alongside. And it doesn't matter what they think as long as those close to him care to stick with him. I'm not surprised that Sesshomaru is willing to trust his brother. I am kinda surprised that he hasn't learned Chinese himself, considering his age, but I suppose he never had a reason to do so as Inuyasha did. It's good to see him rely on his brother in such a delicate situation, and I think it'll certainly further their relationship all the more. Oh, and a human appearing Sesshomaru sounds just as hot and enticing. I can just see that hair long and black and in a nice pony tail. Uh oh, looks like Sango's getting herself into trouble and it's much harder to fight in a gown. Oh my, and now her dress has been ripped and her scar exposed. Poor Sango. It's so hard for her to let anyone know about what happened. It can't also be very helpful when you're trying to figure out if you're supposed to be with a man and can't feel attractive on account of it, either. I hope in time she'll let him see it and get past the embarrassment of something that is certainly not her fault. And the drunken fool that ripped it probably has no idea just how much trouble he's in now, does he? I'm curious to see how things progresses. Sango's in quite the predicament and there's no way for her to really get out of it without her friends at the very least discovering her secret. She has nothing to change into, and the only way home is with at least one of them. I just hope she'll trust them enough at some point. It should be interesting to see what happens from here.
| Title: Minoue coment
Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 09:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, its me again, Darknessdawns. I just had to read more of the story than you currently had posted at AFF. I'm currently at chapter 15. I love how you have written all the characters including Kouga. You really did a great job capturing the animosity between the Youkai and Hanyou's in his character. I even like how you gave Kikyou an enormous mean streak. I am sooo glad that Inuyasha and Kagome got together and their coupling is so well written too. You are one of the few authors I really enjoy reading citrus from. You always seem to capture their emotions so well in it and all the way through your work. Also your work never seems to be thrown together like so much of what we find now days. It truely shows that you definately know where your story is headed and are allowing us to come along. Thank you for writing such wonderful works, and weather or not anyone else lets you know I am glad you write. It definately makes my life a bit mor interesting and fun. Oh, and you should see the faces my husband gives me when I read a really good part and have to share ( like the part where Miroku place Inuyasha in the bed beside Kagome)or when I bust out laughing at something in the fic I'm reading and startle him. Your work and a few others Ican proudly say make my heart happy. By the way I loved the a/n to the almost flammer on AFF especially the last part of it. ;) ~Darknessdawns
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so welcome, and congratulations! You're up there! I know this gut wretch path between Kikyo and Naraku is going to be real interesting to say the least. I also know that the relationship between Miroku and Sango is going to be rocky. And I'm itching to see when and I know that Naraku is not only going to make Sango's life miserable over Kohaku, but Kagome and Inuyasha as well! Can't wait but I will. Peace always!A
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for the delay!! :lost U between S updates!: WOW Sango is really considering Miroku seriously (well, out loud)It's so good she has Kagome to open up and tell her worries. Poor girl, between her family history and her own experience... well, certainly she is so nervous and insecured. The second part, WoW WOW. Well, Kikyo is showing her true face and Naraku is just Naraku, using people... a lot. We must wait to see how things will develop, but worth the waiting. Excellent chapter!!! Ohhhh... I really miss you!!! Something is missing in LJ!!! :huggggsss:
| Reviewed By: Twrex On: May 21, 2008 10:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writting has improved over your earlier stories. You are doing very good and it is very easy to read. Kagome seems a bit weak in this story but I think it is in character to the plotline.
| Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, I usually HATE AU stories, but this one has me at the edge of my seat! I can't wait to read more!
| Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 13:38 EDT
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Hmph, bet Inu never did that for Kikyo.;) I do hate the double edged sword that deals with men and women differently concerning how many sexual partners they have had. It makes me sad to see Sango worrying about one previous partner when she is considering going out with a known womanizer.
| Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 13:37 EDT
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Hmph, bet Inu never did that for Kikyo.;) I do hate the double edged sword that deals with men and women differently concerning how many sexual partners they have had. It makes me sad to see Sango worrying about one previous partner when she is considering going out with a known womanizer.
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