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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 06:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of your fics and this is great. I love your writing style and how expressive you are, not to mention that you also have a great story idea. I'm going to love reading the next chapter. I'm so glad you're still continuing this.
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Title: blahh..
Reviewed By: tranny On: March 26, 2007 01:21 PDT
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oh my gosh. i should either congratulate you for leaving me once again feeling regret that i finished this chapter too quickly and now i have to wait for another month and probably a half until you update again >:[ ORR i should just throw an angry fit at my keyboard and jam out a whole bunch of #@%!&$! (hee i'd never do that at you! =P ) into this comment because you've definitely left the chapter ending at one of the most heartwarming parts of this story! i was wishing and hoping over and over again that this chapter wouldn't end and then i scroll down and see the stupid mediaminer frame and my heart just sank..ahh! this story is great.. i absolutely love it.. and i absolutely adore you and your abilities to write so well .. the last two paragraphs of the story was very touching.. i listened to the song as i was reading through the last part and i could have sworn i bulma sitting in that same room with poor vegeta. great chapter :] all i can say is that it was very very touching! it's also very sad. i have no doubts that your writing can make me shed tears. good job :D update soon !!
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Reviewed By: anonalley On: March 25, 2007 13:34 PDT
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Well yeah. She isnt the woman she used to be. But love makes us blind as bats. I hope she'll find her peace and tell Vegeta to get lost. Because you see eventually we all get our sight back, it only takes a little time and some harsh treatment. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 04:51 PDT
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do I even need to say how great this chappie was?? I do?? okay...it was GREAT!:P so..well done and please continue...I'm just dying to know if Vegeta will forgive Bulma..someday..sometime..I hope!! and I agree with pisq...we look forward to the make up lemon..there is gonna be one..right?? oh well..you'll sort it out just right..I'm sure...well..I wish you much inspiration with this fic but also luck in your life! kissies EV
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Reviewed By: The_Enforcer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 21:49 PDT
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Greetings, Hey! What took so long! Lol. I can't wait to see more, I love your story. I'm glad that they both finally got pissed. I hope Bulma and Vegeta can fix things. And when is Bulma going to finally get knocked up? hmmmmm? heheheh ugh it's so sad that there having such a hard time but the make-up sex should be great *coughs* sorry ehhh. Okay anyways You'd better get more out soon *waves kendo stick at you* or else. I love your story please please get more out soooon. -The Enforcer
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 24, 2007 20:14 PDT
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'ello, so I enjoyed it, quite spectacular, especially since this chapter really shows the differences in their characters... It's good... can't wait to see what happens next...
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: cera [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing style is absolutely wonderful in this fic. You rarely see Vegeta portrayed so accurately. As always,I will wait (patiently) for the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 13:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im dying to know whats going to happen next!! update
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Title: Truey sad..
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 04:33 PDT
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Wow, I think i have to agree with you. Bulma is not herself, but then again neither is vegeta. Makes me wonder whats next for these two. sweet song.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my fucking god. i looove this update. it was worth the wait. this chapter was perfectly done. from every action and word they said/did or didn't. brilliant. please update soon!!!! again!!!! i need to know how they will part!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 17:54 PDT
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It never ceases to amaze me with the intricate plot lines woven into this fic. Everything is so high-powered and raw...gripping me in everytime I read it. Despite all the emotions Veggie displayed..never once did I find it out of character. I think you have an amazing understanding of these characters and how their psyches function. I love it!!! I'm really glad you're sticking with this fic...update soon ^_^.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: March 23, 2007 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm so emotional! Yeah we needed angry Vegeta back, the make up sex shall be awesome! But I need to see an angry Bulma as well!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 08:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter, hopefully Veggie will forgive her if she can replace his tail. Though something tells me lots and lots of sex will follow. *lol* I can't wait to see what you bring out next.
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: YEAH! On: February 14, 2007 21:44 PST
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Oh wow! Im so glad that yo updated. It has been awile since you have posted your last chapter. I was so excited to come to this story and actualy see a new chapter! YESS! Anyways I really want to know what Vegetas reaction is going to be. Will he be angry b/c of the reminder or will he be glad? And what's in store for Bulma? Im really happy that Vegeta is starting to feel, well, something towards Bulma. Maybe this is a sign that he can forgive her. This was a really good chapter and I cant believe that you left it at a major cliffhanger!?! AHHHHH! Seriously though I really cant wait for you to update! So PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PRETTY PLEASE! :)
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Reviewed By: tranny On: February 12, 2007 02:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read many v/b dbz fanfics in the past on both mediaminer.org and fanfic.net but i have to say that this story is one of the most well constructed, well written story that i have ever read. i swear i think someone needs to start thinking of publishing fanfics as actual books because i think the style of writing you have can surely be ranked as good, if not even better than romance books that i see published in the book store. since chapter one, you've described the characters of both bulma and vegeta in very descriptive ways that's left me understanding and able to make a real life connection with every ounce of emotion, changes and struggles that these two characters go through. i mean the scenes you write, from v/b's small arguments throughout their journey in space to the lustful tensions that builds up between them are so meaningful and well organized that i could literally see their relationship and emotions progress inch by inch in my mind. i've read many stories and not all of them give me that feeling and sense of connection to the characters but your writing on the other hand are so vivid that i've actually felt the intensity that happens throughout every event in this story. great job :D. i love the plot. i love how vegeta is portrayed in this story, i love his personality and the way he reacts to life and bulma in this story. you've made him very attractive and real..never once did i find him ooc. please keep updating! a lot of authors left me so disappointed because they'd abandon the story halfway but i'm so glad that you've committed to finishing this story after all these years of writing it. please update soon!!
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