| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark ki(not longin in because too lazy On: August 03, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are more evil to vegeta than i am. (i didn't know that what possiable.) poor bra-waly.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: August 03, 2005 02:06 CDT
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sooo not expecting that!!! vegeta is taking this harder than i would have thought, his little princess is now gone from him, how much more drama will this family go through? i actually expected vegeta to do more damage to trunks than just throwing to a wall, but i guess that was enough for him at that time. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: Frozenrabbit On: August 02, 2005 07:15 CDT
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Real gud :P. Youi going to wind it up soon? its huuuuuge. Really awesome tho
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Reviewed By: C-Jay Johnson On: August 01, 2005 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, I just wannna say how good I think your fanfic is and could you PPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE update sometime before thursday cause I'm going on vacation and I can't get hold of the internet wile I'm on vacation. So could you please update before then... pretty please!
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Reviewed By: megan1202 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have spent the past two days reading this fic nonstop and it's by far the best I've ever read. I've gotten so drawn into it, I'm almost going through withdrawls now that there are no more chapters to read through. I honestly cannot wait for you to update. Do you have a schedule? Are you planning to update soon? I was so taken with the fic I almost forgot it has to come to an end. :) Anyway, amazing story! Really really amazing!
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Title: Keep on Writing!
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please keep on writing! I love it when Vegeta does whatever Bra wants! And OMG! Epeon got her butt kicked by Bulma! The homerecker goes down!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 11:40 CDT
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OMG i love the fight scene.. it's about time bulma whiped her ASS!!!!!!.. I hope that they can work out whats going etween them soon... Of corse people are still reading your story it's a great story. can't wait for more...
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: July 27, 2005 01:04 CDT
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bra=cute! never expected that you would have brought epeon back to the story which was very surprising. though i would of wished to see more of what vegeta and bulma are going through in their minds during this "abstinance" stage. update soon!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: July 22, 2005 14:32 CDT
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ahk, she's bleeding!!.... way to go trunks! and bra how sweet she is, bad manners though
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 22:46 CDT
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Good for Trunks! I'm so glad he gave her the boot, and the fact that he kept his cool was great. I thought that scene was very well-done. As for B/V... poor Vegeta & poor Bulma. I was glad to see, though, that at least Vegeta didn't just take off. He seemed to show a spark of humanity in telling her it wasn't her fault. Still has a way to go in the compassion area, but you've shown that his character is evolving. Excellent.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 08:29 CDT
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Argh! How can you… I just… Aaargh! If things aren't getting better in the next chapter, I can't say what I might do… Oh, btw, love the way Trunks treated Nesa, that bitch, she deserves it. I don't know if I want them to end together, and I don't know if they are gonna end together, all I know is, I can't picture Trunks raising a 100 % human boy… Just doesn't fit…
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Title: I LOVE THIS FANFICTION!!!!
Reviewed By: Dbzbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I take this time to tell you that I ADORE this vegetaxbulma fanfiction ^__^ It's one of the BESTS ones I've read in a while. Last week I went on vacation and I printed HALF of this fanfiction and read it while driving out of state. I CANT seem to stop reading it!! Please continue this WONDERFUL story. I am currently drawing a mini comic on the "did I ever make it to second base" scene LOL I will post it on my site www.dbzbabe.deviantart.com ^.^ I hope it is all right if I make this little comic I might cut some dialogue otherwise it would take FOREVER to get it done, I am finished with the sketches already a total of 5 pages. Keep up the amazing work my friend, KEEP THE LEMON SCENES COMING!!!! VEGETA X BULMA FOREVER!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 04:30 CDT
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Wow i'm glad he finally told her how he felt. I feel bad for even though she did what she did to him. I hope in the future that they can work things out. I was lmao when i read that vegeta was watching "everybody loves Raymond" funny show. but i knew they still had problems, wondeful as always update soon..
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: July 17, 2005 04:08 CDT
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yes the response in trunks that i wanted, but i would have thought he would have completely left her. can't get vegeta aroused liek that without any anger especially refusing him after. i liked this chapter and hopefully it will be completed soon. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark reality [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like how you get to see the softer side of vegeta in this story, i also enjoyed how the you show us the memories that vegeta has. this seems like a great novel, you seemed to really get into it because you wrote over forty chapters. i have only read through the second chapter and plan on reading it to the end because i was really drawn in and want to see how it turns out.
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