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 Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Mallie3(not logged in)  On: September 18, 2005 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was so cute! Nice chapter I will be waiting here for the next please hurry! :)
 Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2005 10:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmm... Short, but nice, but short. oh, and fineally, something is happening between Vegeta and Bra, it was so weird when they didn't talk... oh well, update soon!
 Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: MLF(maccam)  On: September 18, 2005 06:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes closer for her and her family, and for trunks to move on is a good thing too. BUT when i read Bra and Vegeta i had tears in my eyes. how his little child has to reach out to him instead of the other way around. The way this chapter ened was perfect. I'll miss this story when it's done..*HUGS*
 Title: Dark ki
Reviewed By: Dark ki [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2005 03:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
short but, sweet.
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 18, 2005 03:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was a very sappy chapter, hopefully we won't be seeing anymore of nessa, i just don't like that girl. bra and vegeta were very sweet in this chapter, but hope for a longer one next time, but we did get 2 chapters last time. UPDATE SOON!
 Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: MF(maccam)  On: September 10, 2005 08:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad your writing again. i've missed this story. wow Trunks is going to NYC my hometown. he'll do fine there. I just hope the same for his parents, whats going to happen with Bra and her memory? and vegeta will he finally talk to Bra? can't wait to read more and your other story..please update soon...
 Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 10, 2005 02:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Argh! Don't stop there! Write more! I really love this story. Like I haven'y said that like 500 times before. Keep it up, and write more, as quickly as you can. You have many fans..! :P Oh, and btw, you seriously can't make Nesa and Trunks end up together... It just doesn't fit... She's been too big of a bitch, and I mean, she has a child with another man.. Maybe Trunks will meet someone new in America?
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: September 09, 2005 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
finally trunks got the divorce papers signed. these 2 chapters i guess delt with trunks growing up and accepting what he did, as well as vegeta and bulmas relationship yet again going through another bump on the road. Hope to see more of bra in the upcoming chapters.... update sooner!!!
 Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2005 04:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn i'm pissed cause we don't get updates no more and i missed two chapters, i was confuse at first with them, about the car accident it's like something is missing. I hope Bra gets her memory back and Trunks come home, and i hope that there will be a why for Vegeta to get that device out of his head..update soon. ^_^
 Title: luve it!
Reviewed By: free-sprit, to lazy to log in.  On: August 23, 2005 12:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! I just looove this story! It's my absolut favorite story. But everytime a problem is solved, there is a new one! And wow, we did not see that coming. That Bra thingy. I kinda figured out that is was a chip, that metalpiece in his head. Buut anyway, please just update!!!!! I love it keep it up!
 Reviewed By: Dark ki not login in  On: August 23, 2005 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i guess there was something to thatg chip after all.
 Reviewed By: t2i2n2a  On: August 23, 2005 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
hope vegeta and bra will make up in the next chapter, i love their relationship. finally we know what that metal piece in his head is and it gets even more interesting. please update sooner!
 Title: Wonderful, pls update
Reviewed By: JE  On: August 14, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
well i didnt see that one coming thats for sure. i wanna know where you're taking this, so update ASAP!!! lol PS: about time Bulma kicked that sorry biatch's ass. (ok so im talking about the last chapter, haha. i read both chapters today)
 Reviewed By: MajinRyoko  On: August 13, 2005 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I adore this fic, I do. I stayed up till like 4:30 in the morning to read it >.< I certainly hope theirs more :D
 Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 07, 2005 11:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah! Loved the altercation with Epeon but especially Vegeta's reaction to Bulma kicking *ss. LOL! On to next chapter... what a shocker!! Was not expecting that at all! What else can happen to the poor little family? Interested to see where this is going. :)
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