| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 19:51 CDT
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You know i'm getting a nervous condition here. i don't know if i can take anymore of this. please don't let trunks die :( update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark ki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 04:23 CDT
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when will the evilness of your storyline stop! your tortures are . . . torturing. but, i'm glad she's now dead. Trunks shouldn't feel bad.
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Reviewed By: NJNlolo On: October 03, 2005 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How much crap are you planning to do to these people?
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Reviewed By: LunaticPandora On: September 30, 2005 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You whoremuffin! What an evil cliffhanger! You must update soon! I love your story, in case you couldnt tell ;)
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Reviewed By: GetaGirl 247 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.....You must update ASAP!!!! Please don't let anyone die. I don't think my poor little heart could take it. New chappie, now!!!!!
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 30, 2005 14:40 CDT
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man epeon doesn't giv eup does she, it was a complete surprise to see her again. bra is getting back to her cute self and i can see a conclusion slowly coming, it seems that the stories are all wrapping up soon. UPDATE SOON!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See...now you've done it! A clifthanger?!? I swear I'm going to have fits and kick and scream in the middle of the floor until the next chapter. I don't know how I'm gonna wait until its posted, but I supect that it'll be hell until you update. What a wonderfully grabbing chapter.
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Reviewed By: free-sprit not logged in On: September 30, 2005 09:38 CDT
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Gods, how I hate you. How can you stop here? that's just soo not fair! *screams* You better update soon, or I'll..... I dunno.. I'l cry? something like that I guess. Just please, come on, update
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell - not signed in On: September 30, 2005 09:22 CDT
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HOLY CRAP!!!!
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: mlf (maccam) On: September 30, 2005 07:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Holds my breath until i read another chapter (don't wait to long) ;)
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Reviewed By: Dark KI (notloggedin On: September 30, 2005 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evil bitch! Vegeta break her neck!
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Reviewed By: anonymous reader On: September 20, 2005 23:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed reading what you've written on this fic because it's very different from anything I've read before. I particularly enjoyed the way you did the counseling visits because some people cannot pull it off without making it very...OOC. You did very well in that aspect. I'd love to read more of that. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 21:29 CDT
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I don't understand why you think that this chapter was bad, to me it was great. how she broke down and explain how she feels to him wow, and than how he couldn't feel the same, very powerful chapter in my book. please keep writing *HUGS*
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: September 19, 2005 14:24 CDT
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it never ends with the drama, when one problem is solved another one arises. i like that bra is slowly getting her memory back and that vegeta is once back to the shrink, since this is what the story is all about. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 10:28 CDT
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nice, and longer then the last one. I like the conversations between Vegeta and Dr. Nine. Niiice chapter, love the story update soon!
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