| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark ki a.k.a lee On: May 25, 2005 23:38 CDT
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paragraphs would have made it easier but, i love it anyway.
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Reviewed By: Trisha (not logged in) On: May 25, 2005 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL well that was fun. cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: May 25, 2005 13:26 CDT
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yay... they resovled this fight! haha that girl is sucha slut hitting on vegeta knowing he came in with bulma. ooo.. cant wait for the conversation betweem the briefs and the in-laws. update soon!
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Reviewed By: anja On: May 18, 2005 09:05 CDT
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Wow, stong words! They needed to be sud though: I understand both of them... I mean, It's not very Vegeta-ish to ask for help, and settle down and stuff like that, but he has done it anyway, it's probably buggin' him.. :P
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 06:18 CDT
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Wow very strong chapter. Those words needed to be said and i'm glad that she said them. I only hope that things will start to brighten up a bit and soon...I love the way you put it all together in this chapter..please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: Dark ki A.K.A. Lee On: May 17, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stand this! Please! Stop Vegeta's pain! heal him soon! it's making me cry! . . . . well, not really. but, still. is it the circle piece of metal. some kind of mental mapaultion from some outside force? hm? or is it a red hairing? (false clue.) only you know . . .or will know. I like the story write itself. i never know whats happens until o start writing the story. but, that's me. well, i'll leave it at that.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: May 17, 2005 23:06 CDT
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your back! i liked the chapter especially with the dispute between bulma and vegeta. eh.. the whoel nesa thing is getting a bit tire-some since its a BV fic. hopefully we'll see what that metal thing in vegeta's head is. update soon, missed this story so much!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 17, 2005 21:15 CDT
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ouch. those were some powerful words bulma!
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Reviewed By: Fergie On: May 09, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THIS FANFIC IS AMAZING! i love it i love it i love it. You have to update soon, not just for my sake but for everyone else's too. i mean i've never read anything like this...ever! you've taken a simple story line and completely transformed it. i can't wait to read the next chapter, so don't leave me hangin to long! well gotta go The paul o'grady show is about to start!
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Title: oi
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 03:39 CDT
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Okay, I just have ine more thing to say, thta metal thingy in Vegeta's head... Is it a chip..?? Come on!! Tell me! I'm going crazy here!!! It's probably a chip, And and, freeza wasthe one who out it there, and and now soemthing is happening with that chip, and and..* Keeps on babbleling* .... I love this story!! Get it done..! No, don't get it done! That would be... like sad. hehe.. I'm crazy, I seriusly need to get a life. Naaah, what am I supposed to use a life for..? hehe... get the next chapter up! please!!! *Puppy eyes*
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Title: oi
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 10:34 CDT
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This must be like the longest fic I've ever read. And I love every minute if it..! I simply love this fic! Keep it up, write 400 chapters. hehe.. well, mayby noy 400, but 350 then. :p
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 18:47 CDT
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I just found this story and it is excellent!! I really enjoy your writing style. I've read all the way through in a couple of days. I wish I would have stopped to write a couple of reviews so I could remember to tell you some specific parts that were especially good. But I generally print off the chapters to read at night and then my 2yo keeps me hopping all day long :) Anyway.... it is a great story and I am looking forward to reading more. Now that I'm caught up I will leave more reviews. Oh, just to comment on these last couple of chapters -- I was SO p*ssed when we found out that Nesa's child isn't Trunks'. I thought exactly what you had Bulma say. B*tch! It was a good twist, I wasn't expecting it. Oh, and yes I am waiting patiently for Epeon to get hers. She's another one. The whole thing with the MRI was amusing; most people don't like those things and I totally believe that if anyone had the power that Vegeta has not to mention claustrophobia, they would have blasted the thing to high heavens too. Ha ha.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: April 17, 2005 22:20 CDT
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that was a good chapter... its nice to see you get back to where you started again... It is a good story but it is also a very involved story... good job with that chapter
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: April 17, 2005 18:41 CDT
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ooo... thats interesting, the circle metal thing in his brain. hopefully thats what is triguring those flashes. hope trunks leaves nesa grr... and vegeta gets better. update soon!
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: April 17, 2005 18:31 CDT
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why do i feel like i am watchin X-files, this chappy ended with a scary high pitched noise, ans the theme music to x-files, seriously it was in my head.
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