| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: Finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:27 CDT
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you keep Surprising me with every chapter. sad to read them suffer but i know that they hopefully will come out of it soon...please update soon ...maria
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Title: Geeze, from Bad to Worse for our favorite Tough Guy...
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, Vegeta can never catch a break huh? From the moment I read up on that piece of metal in his head, I started thinking "there is no way he'd opt for surgery." Glad to see I have some insight. Bulma will have to talk herself blue in the face to get him unconscious - at the mercy of drugs and human doctors he don't trust, much less can stand, and on an operating table to remove that metal. I can't wait to see how you accomplish that one. As far as Trunks and Nessa…well I hope it's over. There's too much to forgive. Well, I think there's too much. Maybe a heart like Trunks can forgive it all, but I'm doubtful. I guess we'll just have to wait and see this thing out. And last, but not least my little comment: You know - you continue to make my day. Not only are each chapter better and more interesting then the other, you also tend to update with gratifying quickness and I thank you. ~Kenya
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Reviewed By: Dark KI A.K.A. Lee On: April 12, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. once i started reading i couldn't stop. I started at three o'clock in the moring. i fell asleep at eight. got up at 3:30 and now it's 10:30. i finally got through all of it. I love the way you write. you should have more reviews than what you have but, no this site people don't seem to take the time to write one. that's the reason why to like writing on FF.net people seem to write them more. Oh. well people are reviewing and it not how many you get but, the value they hold. keep on writing how and how much you wish.
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Reviewed By: K On: April 11, 2005 20:14 CDT
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well what the eff just happened to Vegeta? well i hope you explain it in the next chapter. I can understand why Trunks is acting like that. I mean, i'm sure hes still hurting and in denial cuz of that biatch nesa screwed him up but oh well i dont know if theyre gonna get back together but i hope nesa does a lot of begging cuz that ho is just ugh! whatever just pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: aredhel On: April 11, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love this story!! you are a very good writer, i like the way you describe bulma and vegeta's relation ship and their life! keep writing , coz i can't wait the next chapter! I'm French and i read a lot of english fanfictions and this one is surely one of the best i read, i don't know when you are goind to finish it but if you could let it last a 'little' bit more that will be cool!!! (lol) KEEP WRITING!!! ;)
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: April 10, 2005 14:18 CDT
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trunks is messed up. wonder how hes going to deal with it especially that hes still only 17. vegeta's problems have arised again and its good to see that, but hopefully you clear up things between nessa and trunks (to stay together or to not stay together). update soon!
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Title: finding peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 11:39 CDT
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It's good to read your work and know that your back on track. I really feel bad for trunk and for nesa. What's going on with Vegeta and why can't he get a hold of his emotions...please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! all your chapters are great.. I can't wait to see how ever thing works out!!! and please a happy ending for all.
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Reviewed By: J On: April 03, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was awesome keep it up. although u misspelled some words and u didnt elaborate some parts and sort of just rushed things up like how Trunks got back with Nesa and how Vegeta did with the shrinks and how Bulma and Vegeta made up, things like those. try not to rush the story but all in all it was very entertaining and a good story. so i gotta say UPGRADE!
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Reviewed By: the batman On: April 03, 2005 18:11 CDT
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i took 2 weeks for that? lol in just kidding keep em coming
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Title: NESSA YOU BITCH!!!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, another wonderful chapter! A little short, but no matter, my eyes gobbled it up anyway. Man, I feel sorry for poor Trunks - to be played twice and in such a way. I hope he drops that evil wench like a hot rock and find him someone else to love. Update soon! ~Kenya
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Reviewed By: Yeah! On: April 03, 2005 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i fell in love with this story from the very beginning. theres so much going on, and all the drama..wow. i just dont know how to describe this fic. its frickin ..pssh i dont even know what word to use. all i have to say is that you are an excellent author. your are...man...just continue writing ok? YOU ROCk ...youre the best. i rest my case.
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Reviewed By: t2i2n2a On: April 02, 2005 20:40 CST
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the truth is finally out! what a bitch using the family and trunks like that. i hope vegeta teaches her a lesson or even better trunks! update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:24 CST
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I'm going to offer constructive criticism... I like the story and found it to be quite good... I'm a little concerned with your habit of getting off track with your stories... you try to make your stories to complicated and it causes your stories to be harder to follow... you are very talented but you are trying to do to much too soon... try to keep it simple and develop your skill that way... bc you are losing the flow of your stories by having too much going on around the central story and losing what's happening to your main characters in the process... you are very talented and have a lot of potential but take a step back and try to simplify things that way your writing can flourish more... it is a good story and you have a lot of potential
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Title: Finding Peace
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 19:06 CST
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I'm shocked, floored and upset. wow i didn't see that coming at all. Sad very sad for Trunks and nesa..It's a great chapter really and i love Vegeta in this..i really can't wait for an update...maria
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