| "Finding Peace" Reviews/Comments [ 325 ] |
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Title: CH69
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged On: August 09, 2007 11:46 CDT
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That was a beautiful chapter, I liked the metaphorical use of demons/dementia to explore Vegeta's inner psyche
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Title: ch65
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged On: August 09, 2007 06:37 CDT
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Oh my gosh, these last couple of sentences really struck, me especially Vegeta's response so poignant and tragic. "But he never won. That should give you some pride that he stole back." "He won." Vegeta sighed turning his back, "If he hadn't I wouldn't need to be here."
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Title: ch51
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy not logged On: August 05, 2007 09:43 CDT
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I really liked the altercation with Bulma and Vegeta towards the end, the heavy silence was so strong between them,and when Vegeta said: ""I am so sick of talking." " That really struck me, it must be tough on him to be doing so much and not feeling any improvement, doing things which he would not normally do, I can understand why he reacted the way he did, I do feel for Bulma though, but I guess because Vegeta is not used to someone acting selflessly for his benefit that he can not help but respond with suspicion and doubt towards that person.
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Title: Ch47
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 02:01 CDT
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Wow, I weren't expecting that, I can't believe Nesa did that, she fooled me, twice lol. The first half of this chapter is very fast paced, a lot happened in one chapter, it kind of gave the impression that the story was concluding, it definitely picked up more towards the end. I really feel sorry for Trunks, though, he's been through tooo much. I thought it was a bit wrong for Bulma to tell everybody else about Nesa's child without telling her son first, I'd imagine it would be embarassing for Trunks finding out something like that, and knowing everyone else discussed it before hand.
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Title: ch46
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 01:40 CDT
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I read this story a while ago, but left off at this chapter I'm not too sure about it,I guess I didn't understand why Bulma would test Vegeta like that, maybe if something like this happened earlier during the the android or cell times, but after all they been through, the therapy meetings, cancer, it seems like such a dramtic and fast U-turn in their relationship. The way Bulma lashed into Trunks when he doubted Vegeta's love was quite harsh, and yet Trunks only doubted because he didn't know Vegeta's whole story; Bulma seems a bit hypocritical here to be doubting when she does know his story. It seems quite cruel considering how fragile Vegeta is at the moment.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. The amount of detail in the characters personalities, the settings, etc. is amazing. I just wanted to give you kudos on what you're doing. I cannot wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 09:47 CDT
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Awesome. Love it. Looking forward to your next update. :):) Soon hopefully. ;)
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Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 14:44 CDT
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Poor Trunks and Vegeta. Hopefully Trunks will get the Medicine(sry if spelled wrong). he needs and get back home. Please Update soon! Pretty Please! Awesome Fic!
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 11:17 CDT
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goody goody - love it, looking very much forward to the next chapter. :)
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! U Updated! luv this fic! and i luv to read it over and over again! update soon!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 09:48 CDT
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such a struggle. good writting.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 05:28 CDT
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Love it. Looking veru mych forward to the next chapter.... ! :)
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Reviewed By: miky_stardust [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the story was so beautiful that I really couldn't take my eyes off the screen ^^. I liked this chapter, especially the first part in which Vegeta talks to Trunks. Right now I'm so curios on what will happen... Please, update soon! ps: sorry, I know my english sucks, but I'm italian ç__ç
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ananita [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry for not reviewing before, I love, really love this fic and I think you're doing a great work with this "epilogue" I can't stop thanking you enough for taking my suggestion and doing this! I love it, be good and update soon ok? Thank you!! You make me enjoy reading!
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Reviewed By: miky_stardust [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... I read 76 chapters in less than two days... It's really an excellent fic, one of the best I've ever read! ^^
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