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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 04:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe InuYasha should take Kagome out on a date... baka... lol
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: November 05, 2008 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shuts eyes tight and chants* I will not harm Ki. I will not harm Ki! I'm a Kikyo hater.. Why do you bring her back? This can't be good.. I'm just gonna wait here for the next exciting chapter..
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 15:47 EST
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Enjoying the story - but I guess I'm confused. Since Kags is not old enough to get a talisman means she also can't be part of the pack? Are the other under-aged members only members by family connections then? Anyway, cool unique story. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 15:53 EDT
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kikyo's not alive again!! one would think since her body would had disappeared in sparkles of light and kagome's soul piece that went to where the rest of kikyo's was waiting to be reincarnated. so he just went and pooped out another incarnation and inserted kikyo's memories? man, isn't she sick of coming back and isn't naraku a sick f#@%? she should zap naraku in the @$$ for it.-- it's like a funny short i saw on cartoon network-- 'the cat came back' ~plug the following code into youtube search: WNyqXsv4Ueo ♠ she has got to see that kagome spared her when she was as good as dead, she was allowed to escape. naraku's story may explain some of her memories but yash and kagome's actions will prove inconsistent with those explanations. ♦ AHH! i just can't believe you brought her back!! *falls over*
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 12:09 EDT
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Your story is fantastic. Inuyasha is the only anime show I like. I have read hundreds of fanfic, but I have to say, this one has got me pretty mad at old Inu. (Your writting skills are wonderful.) His automatic lack of trust in Kagome. Hating her for 500 years,for no actual reason, getting everyone elese to start doubting her as well. Treating her like dirt. Then telling her she is not a member of their pack. Only to find out he was the one who destroyed the well. OOOOH. I can see Ayame blurting out about Inuyashas prowlness in bed not knowing Kagome very well, but Sango!! I was sooo happy when Kagome finally lashed out at them. I hope she drills him a little more on just how many women. Sango made it sound like only a few, but Inuyasha implied more "all those bitches"??? I'm afraid if I was Kagome I would of told Inuyasha if you can't even tell me you love me, after everything he put her through recently, you can "Take your pack and Shove It"..... I can not wait to read more of your story. It has been awhile since I've been this excited about a fanfic. Thank you!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Ki the reincarnation of the more Kikyou part of Kagomes soul??? Great chapter by the way...
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great like always. This realy pickup my bad work day. I can not wait to see the next part. I like how the inu gang is considering her famliy even though the counsle is saying she can not be for years still. One thing how is her mom taking all this now that she is out of the hosipital that her baby is being keeped there and only visiting like when ehs was in the past.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 09:45 EDT
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Wow. You updated before I could review the previous chapter! Of which, was my favorite. I can't say why, but I loved it. And I'm going to miss Dai! *sniffles* XD Interesting putting Chiaki in school with Kagome. This certainly can't end well... Although I have my suspicions... And I almost feel like Kagome is going through that stage in her life that we all go through.. "Everyone is against me! I can never do things my way!...and now I wanna cry.." Of course, her's might be slightly elevated than most. XD Anyway, Both chapters were awesome and update soon!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 02:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for not making me sit on those sharp pointy things too long, they interfere with enjoying myself. I knew I was right about Kikyou being brought back. You are evil to resurrect her again, actually Naraku is the evil one for bringing her back again. I can't wait to hear how he truly pulled this stunt off and managed to turn the purity obsessed Kikyou into a youkai. It should be interesting as to how everyone is going to react when they realize who it is. Why am I suspicious of how well informed Naraku is? I suspect that he has a mole in the Council. I almost suspect the dragon but I think you are just making it appear that way because of past associations (Ryukotsusei) so I am not sure who is guilty (I hope not the cat for obvious reasons. *glances at user name* The fight was priceless, especially with Miroku and Sango siding with Inuyasha instead of their usual Kagome. I also got the giggles at picturing Inuyasha falling through the plane. I am not a big fan of the subjugation necklace, and I am glad that Kagome didn't use it, but the visual that you created gave me a case of the giggles. But I am wondering what is going on with Kagome because that did seem a little OOC for her. I am sure that you have an explanation, you are too good at keeping the characters in character to not have one. I am just going to go crazy wondering what twists are going through your wonderfully devious mind. I am not going back on the pins and needles waiting but I am curious as to what is coming next. *goes to find soft cushion to sit on*
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for me, i dont think it truely is Kikyo... just that maybe its someone else that Naraku made to think its their memories or something.. anyways hmm i dont like that Dragon lord dude either.. *grrs* but hmm i wonder whats with Kagomes' attitude..
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 00:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww..man...kikyo is BACK?! Please don't let this be another loooong love traingle between those three. I'm sure Inuyasha already knows he wants kagome. And I can't see kikyo being evil after she died for real in the manga...but of coure she wuld be pretty pissed being brought back as a demon not only that but as naraku spawn!! Of course I still don't like kikyo but, I do feel sorry for her.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me 2 days to finally get caught up with this story (stupid interuption-sp?) I really love it. Is that really Kikyo? I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: October 28, 2008 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh noes! Thx for the cliffy... *sighs* I really hope Kagome and Yasha make up! (Yasha needs to say 'I love you', I'm a hopeless romantic like Kagome..) I'll also make sure to kill every opposing person on The Council if I have to!! (lol)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you have all the other species represented and having an equal voice to Sesshomaru about youkai affairs. I really love that Shippou is equal to Sesshomaru, since as a child he was terrified of him. I truly believe that Kagome will be accepted by the others but it was good to see her being nervous over it and was facinating to see every one put in their two cents over what she should do to show off her powers without offending or terrifying the other clans. Is Kirara around to put her vote to the other cats about how good a friend Kagome could be to have. Kagome does have a soft spot for cats, look at Buyo. I am very curious as to why Inuyasha didn't respond to her declaration of love. Now would be a good time for Naraku to attack, it would cement Kagome's acceptance for sure, especially if she protected some of the others from harm. I am waiting on pins and needles for the next update, so please hurry because they are painful to sit on for long :-P
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can just imagan how hard that would be for her. She has never one to defend her self from verbal things only when it treatend her friends or herself. Then again it is treating her and her friends happyness as they may not be able to be togtehr if they say no. I woulder how they would all take it though as I could see inu willing to fight the whole console to keep her with her friends backing him.
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