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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2008 08:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAAAAWAAAAAAA I JUST finished rereading this... I REALLY don't want to wait for a new chapter.... (no school, no work, no homework even to pass the time... and no LOVELY stories like yours either really....) Will be TTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIISSSSSSSSSS (spread out arms) happy when you "publish" an other WONDERFUL chapter of this story.... I cant WAIT to see where this all goes... and if Miroku maintains a son after the next chapter.... lol
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 04:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dateing you're best friends son is like dating you're nephew...It's just soooo wrong on sooooo many levels. The pairing is still INU/KAG right? Other than that you have made another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: tumblegirl91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is no way you could write this better! This is so far one of my favorite inuyasha fanfics. This chapter was amazing and the story is so original. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 22:24 EST
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i don't know, putting myself into kagome's shoes-- sango and miroku may be old but it would still be my best friends' kid, i mean that would be like a date with my nephew (my nephews and niece are older and the same age as me) and that would just be weird *squick-shivers*. ♥ yasha and kagome they are still dealing with the same premise- make a face and give a look and the other one can read my mind... they say the definition of insanity is to repeat an action over and over expecting a different result. lesson in stupidity and frustration. ♥ i will read most things that you write because you amuse me. but when you start adding babies and kids or dominating a story with obscure characters and OCs i may lose interest. ♥ so happy you liked that video, i thought it fitting. ♥ happy little chapter of misinformations and miscommunications. if those elements weren't there it wouldn't be 'inuyasha' ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 20:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time on this wonderful story! But great job with the new chapters. Its sad Kagome didnt make it in the pack yet but its cool they still think of her as a member and yay sota is doing better which is awesome! so keep up all the great work! :D
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 15:02 EST
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I'd read it! Sequel? DAI! Yeah! XDD I'm so curious about this Ki thing. I just don't understand it. WHAT IS SHE. WHO IS SHE. I gotta know. But I know you'll reveal all when necessary... and Hitomu is sure walking on some dangerous ground.. Overall I loved it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 05:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I am glad that Souta is getting better and the rest of Kagome's family have pretty much recovered from the attack. Inuyasha and Kagome don't seem to catch a break do they. Ki's reaction to Kagome's overture towards friendship was great. The gesture is something I would have expected from Kagome along with Inuyasha's reaction to her presence. He will do anything to protect her. He is going to go through the roof when he finds out about the confrontation. It was good to see Kagome's old friends and her classmates standing up for her, they realize how sweet she is even if she hasn't been there much the last year. I am curious as to what Hitomu is up to, apparently with Sango's contrivance. Are they trying to make Inuyasha jealous or give Kagome a safe taste of what she was missing when she was gone or trying to help her see that Inuyasha is her "one" or some mixture of all the above? I know I have to wait and see later what is happening. It doesn't surprise me that Kagome is feeling the differences between her friends and herself because of the time that passed that they experienced but she didn't. I hope she gets over it though and realize that they love her as she is. I think the idea of sequels and other stories set in this universe is a good one as long as they are of this quality. It might be interesting to see Inuyasha dealing with 500 years of thinking Kagome had betrayed him while Miroku and Sango didn't or were unsure and Shippo knowing she wouldn't have. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: phalon (nsi) On: December 02, 2008 23:25 EST
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Another great chapter. I love this chapter, full of tons of angst! :D I can't wait to read more, especially the upcoming war and how all things are made well between Inu Yasha and Kagome. :)
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Title: one shots from the past
Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 22:07 EST
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I think it would be interesting to see one of Inuyasha's trysts. Lots of ways that can go (not in a pervy way)
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 20:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying Sango so much: she was so very much a country girl in canon, and you have done a believable job of growing her into a modern mature woman. Actually, that applies to Miroku, Inu, and the rest of the Sengoku Jedai gang. It makes Kags's reactions very plausible. And yes, I'd love to see sequels.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 15:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I know I would feel uncomfortable and out of place...Kagome probably feels that she just doesn't belong with them enymore. I don't feel that Ki is completely evil.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 15:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I with Kagome was he think about her when he had his one night stands or when he ran off to Kikyo? I think she feels out of place and her only safe haven is with her family because she is just Kagome and for one moment he should let her be a teenager since they all grew up and left her behind. Anyways again great chapter and read ya next time.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 10:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I am hopping they will fix up there problem at lest for one night of star gazing to help move foward some. Please add more soon. As to a one shot during the 500 years one I would love to see in inu by him self eating a instant raman for the first time on since the ones she brought back to him with the emotional bagag it would give.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 07:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo im kinda starting to like Ki ^_____^ and yay Souta has opened his eyes!! and yea you kinda got me thinking as to why Kagome didnt told them about Ki at her school... hmm... anyways sequels, i would love to read ^__^ and i would love to see the moment where Sesshy met his mate ^___^
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 06:36 EST
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the questioning of the maturity difference is a valid point. she is still just a 15 year old girl. while they may have been on the same level in the past, 500 years had to age you. now sango and miroku's son is the same age as kagome. it would not be natural for her not to look at them as being in the same generation as her parents. it's a mighty big obstacle that you've put in their way! i love the part you have ki playing. the wounded soul, who refuses to acknowledge it. as for the side story, back story, or whatever it will be, i would love to read about what went on. i think shippou's story alone would be enough to provide many story lines. great chapter, as usual.
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