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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best futuristic stories, EVER! Oh dear, Hitomu is so dead! I really just love the story and how it's going, there's just so much you can do with this story and I can't wait for what happens next in the tale. Everything is coming together really well.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA i couldnt stop laughing!! to think the last people you want to see that is them... i think Hitomu is in hell of trouble, Kagome yelling, and Inuyasha getiin sat... its going to be great to see the next chapter :P
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Better grab the shovel and start digging, poor Hitomu is not long for the world! Inu could bring WacDonalds down on their heads if he uses the Kaze No Kizu on Hitomu. *snickering* But in Hitomu's defence, look who his father is. The boy doesn't stand a ghost of chance of not turning out a letcherous as his daddy. *giggling* Hmmmm....wonder who Ken's mysterious benefactor is? Are you going to give us a hint or are you going to leave us in the dark a bit longer? *wink*
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whistles low* Oh, this is not gonna settle well with Inu. Hehe... *rubs hand together* Wonder who's gonna catch hell first? Lol. Great chap. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god.. why do you hate Hitomu????? InuYasha is going to kill him...
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 18:11 EDT
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So the plot thickens!! Poor Kagome, she just can't seem to catch a break. Inuyasha will probably be even more self righteous in his anger now. Please tell me that it all works out in the end. All this angst is getting to me. I guess I will just have to wait and see how it works out...sigh!
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iyaaaaaaaaa! what the hell! did he have to kiss her? lol, i gues it was the best he could come up with at the moment, ne? man! I'm curious about this whole "Kag's not returning" -Is it that Kag's gets kidnapped when she was suposed to go back and she never went back because the pack of her time period saved her and she ends up just staying with them anyways? is that why she doesnt go back? or is the well sealed buy the bad guys as well?? EEEEEEEEEEkkk! I'm too damned curious about all this! Update plz when you can! -Dessy
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 16:54 EDT
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I Just read CHapter 10 and OMG! THAT WAS GOOD! I'm going to go read CHapter 11 now- Tootles!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 15:43 EDT
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OOOHHH OOOHHH OOOHHH juicy!!! I know that life has a way of pushing it's way in but don't leave us hungry viewers hanging for toooo long!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 15:31 EDT
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i actually had to hide my face when i read that. and in walks yasha... i waited to compose myself to write this and i'm still flabbergasted. i can't help but wonder what in the world!? and from the manga/anime canon (not counting the movie), that was her first kiss. she should compose herself and then slug him! AHH! . . . seems like sango and the rest of them need kagome around. they don't seem as grounded without her. judging from my reactions to this story i have become emotionally invested. ~ truly a delight, ginny
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miroku's son kissing Kagome...priceless!!! and right in front of Inuyasha no less....how funny is that!!! how is poor Kags gonna talk her way outta that one? And Miroku must be gushing with fatherly pride!!! This was yet another great chappie dear. I felt every ounce of tension in the beginning, and laughed my a** off throughout the end....keep em comin hun!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (school) On: June 01, 2008 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Chapter is great. I think that Kagome is going to try and go down the well but end up being in her own time and then cryig.... and porbaly geting hurt... (at least scraped knees or some thing with that skirt)
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Reviewed By: Jinn Ryu On: June 01, 2008 18:32 EDT
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You're so good to us! Thank you for updating your wonderful story! I love the instinctive references in the plot; they're my favorite part, and I'm always on the lookout for stories that include them. Do you know of any others? Again, thank you so much!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 18:27 EDT
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Loved this chapter...I'm a sucker for internal struggles with these characters!!! and back story is totally nessecary for a good fic....so don't stress about it!! I really love the references to the whole time paradox...it makes my brain hurt too!! I eagerly await the next installment! (btw...It's great that Misery will be popping in on this fic! I love kodaqkitten's fic, and she's one of my fave OC's!)
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 12:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Background is always good!!! Inu's sides better help him get his head out of his a**! And quick! Kags will end up 'sit'ing him till doomsday if he doesn't wise up! Oh....Sango's using weapons from a friend of Ship-dips....Missy!!!! *SQUUUEEEEEE* I'm doing my best inspire kodiaqkitten's plot bunnies ('cause she does the same for my art bunnies!). *wink*
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