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Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi) On: January 02, 2009 03:14 EST
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I think I have a really bad toothache from that ending. I hope things will get fixed on both sides. >_> Okay I know they will but that's besides the point! I love how even the Pack is confused on the youki in Kagome's system but something tells me Inuyasha is close, very close to the answer. I do feel sorry for Hitomu, kinda stuck in his father's position in regards to trying to help Inuyasha and Kagome... Though more Kagome than Inuyasha.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 01:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soverignty Great to see ya here, guess we got the same taste in fanfics for Inuyasha :) Any way here is my review, I have been reading this fanfic from chapter one, to chapter 20, it took me aout 4 hours, and I must say that this Fanfic is one of the Greatest that I have read, along with Goldendust's Daybreak fanfic, which I recommend people reading. Plus i am sorry for what has been happening to ya, I have played the dodging hurricanes game, as I am from the States, and live in Louisiana, I was there for Hurricane Katrina, but was not bad for where I was. Anyway, God Bless you for writing this fanfic, Lots of health to ya and I will be back, I have alot more to read......... and I cant wait *Grin*
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! (I am back in the modern world!!!! lol My friends place isn't that bad (she has one of those wireless USB internet things.... told her to get ADSL II but she doesn't use it that much... (so she doesn't have a lot of downloads on the plan... stupid internet in Australia...)) GREAT Chapter!!!! (so happy to have a new chapter waiting for me!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Happy New Year!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 06:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A new year and an update, yesh! Oh this story intrigues me. Kagome smells of Inu but they don't know why? And his youkai blood doesn't speak of her anymore? Odd. And just when they were getting to some truth telling here comes Gramps! Crap. Ah well. OK, Ive read the oneshot bout Inus' trysts, but if that's the case, how many has he really had then? Ah, you sneaky wench you, lol. Oh, and I did like the fight scene there, that was good. Thanks much for the New Years Update, and update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 03:02 EST
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PKkNH7cgFN4 ♠ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEpISVfUfQw ♣ everybody needs a clue!! ki needs to realize that a benevolent leader doesn't threaten to punish failure. kagome and inuyasha need to learn not to assume, but to ask each other for clarification. i could only find the following but cooperation is needed too! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=anNcJilRNNM ♥ good stuff!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just gets better and better! So Kagome smells like Inuyasha? But they haven't done enything...yet. Lol! Will we see a lemon soon? Something tells me we will have to wait a bit for the lemon. But that's okay I can wait. I really love this story!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as usual.Inuyasha is so stubborn and I have never imagined Kagome soo moody lol but cant wait to see what happens with Hitomu and Kagome on their way to see her faimly!I really didnt expect Mirokus daughter to be such a pervert too! lol that was so funny "the cursed hand" riggghhtt :D... Anyways Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 13:35 EST
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AIII!! As always absolutely wonderful update! I have a bad feeling about this....Why must InuYasha always allow his anger to get in the way of things? HOSHIT! This doesn't look good! NO ADULT SUPERVISION? What could go wrong?! I'm also wondering about the Youki in Kagome's powers... Interesting, is it not? I can only hope the next update shall answer my questions. LOVED IT ALL UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 09:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice work so far alike always. I do want to see Inuyahsa and her have a break though. It seems like everytime they take 1 step foward it is 2 steps back. Also a "Girls" night out to a spa or something may just do wounders for her. I did like alot how there is a small amount of demon seeping into her but I felt it is probly Inu more then the others areound her. That is becouse she is getting alittle of his mood swings. I hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi) On: December 29, 2008 03:25 EST
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Great chapter. :D Though someone needs osuwari some sense into Inuyasha. Especially if he doesn't look out he may jump to the assumption he already lost. I really like this and that the date didn't go over perfectly and the fact 'Gome isn't a hundred percent trusting of everyone. Proves that everything isn't perfect in modern times.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 11:11 EST
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Great chapter keep up the great work. Update when you can ok
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 03:07 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to wish you a belated Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. Second: on to review. I swear that Inuyasha is trying to deliberately sabotage his relationship with Kagome. He seems to be shoving her into Hitomu's arms. Is he testing her, Hitomu, himself or some combination of them all? Or is really that confused on how to deal with her? I love Miroku's daughter. The two of them double-teaming Kagome with being perverts and their spiritual powers. I almost think Kagome is pregnant with the changes happening to her but she can't be I don't think. But could she be becoming pack the same way Sango and Miroku did without Inuyasha giving her a talisman or is the ring he already gave her a talisman and neither are aware? I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 02:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another fantastic chapter....And Mirokus DAUGHTER is a pervert too???? Some GREAT lines too "So, what about that throw down at school? I'm sorry I missed it - chick fights are hot!" "Of course she wasn't spreading anything about magic wells and fighting youkai in the Sengoku Jidai… even she knows how dumb that would sound, even if it is the truth. ..... It didn't help her cause that she apparently approached Yuka, Ayumi and Eri first…" Hitomu spoke up, taking advantage of the lull in conversation. "If it wasn't a `chick fight', tell me why Tsukiyoshi said he had to stop her from slapping you." "You're not mad?" Kagome's bottom lip quivered as she tried to rein in her tears. "I'm sorry, Sango… and you too, Hitomu. I don't know why I'm so darn moody today. It seems like the smallest thing just gets me going." Hitomu scoffed. "That's easy; it's just that time of the month, right?" He yelped as Sango whacked him in the back of the head again. Kagome let out a sigh, hoping to impress on Sango just how put-upon she felt. By the way Sango tapped her foot, it wasn't working. "I think… I think Chiaki's connected to Kikyou somehow." Hitomu's eyes narrowed. "Kikyou? Isn't that- Wait. You're her reincarnation, aren't you?" At Kagome's nod, he continued, "If you're her reincarnation, then how could Ki be connected to her? And names notwithstanding, what makes you think they're connected?" Kagome worried her bottom lip, trying to figure out how to put her concerns into words. "Well… it's hard to say. I mean, I know I'm her reincarnation. The Shikon no Tama was inside me, and it was burned with Kikyou's body. That's not really arguable. But… it's just a feeling I have." She turned to Sango, sure she'd have more luck with somebody who'd witnessed the situation first-hand. "You know how she was brought back with part of my… er, her… our soul?" Sango nodded. "For a couple months afterward, I could feel it. When she was nearby, I knew. It was like there was a hole in me. After a while it went away. I still knew when she was around, but it wasn't really painful." Miroku chuckled, rubbing the back of his neck. "I have better self-preservation instincts than that, my dear Sango. You should know that by now." Sango nodded. "Ah, unwilling to venture into the snake's den?"
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 02:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN NOT KNOW HOW EXCITED I AM ABOUT HAVING A NEW CHAPTER UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Going to read now!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 01:55 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha you stupid idiot! He might as well put a big red bow on kagome and hand her over to hitomu! By the way Merry Christmas and happy New Year!
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