| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 11:10 EDT
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LOL! I feel so loved! Great chapter, always good to have a chapter that builds the story! Really wondering who the bad guy is.... I have a few thoughts, but am waiting to find out! Can't wait for Shippo and Sesshy to make an appearance... and of course Missy! As for my updates, you'll have to wait. I fly to Hawaii for a week tomorrow. *Hides as objects are thrown* Will get back at it when I get home!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2008 06:07 EDT
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phuk the paradox... if using quantum geometry and loop quantum gravity theory in time travel her memory of meeting the 'pack' will be retained even if she goes back and changes history (red dwarf/dr. who/star trek/sci-fi geek) so i don't think it would matter if she were to go back... she's already changed a whole bunch of history since she first fell down the well, what's wrong with changing it a bit more? . . . one hopes that the shrine and grounds are under 'pack' surveillance since the bad guys know of kagome and it would probably be best if she were tailed on her way to and from school for her protection. . . i am enjoying this story and please excuse my insane rambling. i don't really care how long your chapters are as long as you update and i think that you update pretty consistently and frequently enough that i don't have to read the previous chapter to reacquaint myself with the story. i think you are doing an excellent job and it is a wonderful story. ~ salutations, ginny
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Title: longer hapters
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 19:47 EDT
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please write longer chapters ...and just toknow...how often will you update_
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:47 EDT
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i would be like, "if the well's going to close then i want to go back now, take me back home so i can get my pack..." and if they didn't i would start walking. . . very emotional there, roller coaster of emotions. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: Inu_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 21:19 EDT
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PLEASE don't stop writing this is one of the best stories i have ever gotten a chance to read. I am drawn in and cant get out :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone has some pent up anger... (or not so pent up...) Another wonderful chapter...
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am enjoying this fic tremendously!! I'm wondering why the well closed...surely there is a logical explanation. I love the interaction between all the characters. Your story is very good...it leaves the reader with so many options as to what may or may not happen. I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 14:21 EDT
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hmm why would they tell kagome that she's not going back before she even tries? now they're going to stop her from going back and inuyasha will have blamed kagome for what they did or will something else happen?
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 14:05 EDT
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Maybe it is just that I can relate more to Inuyasha than to Kagome but I really don't understand everybody jumping on the "oh poor Kagome, they doubted her loyalty" bandwagon. Like she is the one who was seriously injured by knowing for all of five minutes that things got screwed up. They had 500 YEARS to dwell on why she would betray them, which is how it was viewed. And Inuyasha saw the woman he loved once again turn on him just when he was about to get closer to her. Can you say repeating history? So OF COURSE he thought it was because she didn't want to be with him! His childhood was filled with neglect and abuse, the fact that he even opened his heart to her in the first place is a miracle, so his reaction is completely understandable, while she is acting like the spoiled teenager that she is. Sorry, didn't mean to rant. Ummm... I really like your story please keep writing so I don't feel guilty for ranting.
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Reviewed By: Mela9898 On: May 30, 2008 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I am one those people who have been reading and not review which I know is bad but I really do like you story, and I cant wait to see where you take it has so much potential!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 11:47 EDT
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AH! I just want to know what happened SO BAD! But at the same time I don't want to know too soon... UGH! I'm so conflicted! Update soon!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: cubangreekchik [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I check to see if you update constantly! I am dying to know what's going to happen! Gah!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki first of all... the grammar isnt that bad, but i do love this ^^ i really wanted.. more like needed to give Inuyasha a slap!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 08:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So something/someone else sealed the well and Inuyasha gets proven wrong by Shippo. Now I am wondering if it was Miroku to prevent Kagome coming back and changing the past. I am sorry to hear about Kohaku, Rin and their family, though it was a nice way to tie into the young Kagome. I hope Inuyasha gets over his fury at Kagome quickly and they get back together soon. Another thing I am curious about is the identity of Sesshomaru's mate. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, poor Kags! Ack, poor all of them for having to go through such a confusion like that! I really feel for them. Surprised Kags made it that far with out breaking down sooner and just kicking Inu in the balls in frustration. lol, I dont think that would go over too well, but it is amusing none the less to think about, to me at least, but i do feel sorry for Inu as well as the rest of the pack. Keep at it, there's no way this story's boring, most of us are just lazy reviews. lol I'll start reviewing every chap i read from now on (is pledging) -Dessy
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