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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I am falling behind on my reviews. I loved the last three chapters. I like how Hitomu seems to be falling for Kagome. This will add confusion between Kagome and Inuyasha for a bit, and Inuyasha will get a taste of how Kagome felt when he went after Kikyou. I like Misery's appearance, I too am a fan of kodiaqkitten's piece. I can't wait to see Sesshomaru and who you have as his mate here. And I am getting curious as to the identity of the mysterious stranger that Sango heard and recognized but didn't inform the readers on. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I promise to try to do better with the reviews.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 01:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
InuYasha gets really snappy... I think someone needs to get laid! lol.
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune-not logged in On: June 08, 2008 04:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww crap, Hitomu's trying to get to Kagome now? bad puppy!*smacks with rolled up news paper* do you WANT to be what they serve to Inuyasha tomorrow or his new pelted rug? not a smart move with Inu's unstable Youkai when it comes to Kags, you know what i mean. (did i guess right then? or close? lol) Update when u can! -dessy
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 22:27 EDT
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Wow! This is really good. I love your writing style, it's really easy to get in to. You have a really well developed story going here. Though InuYasha does remind me slightly of one of those raving, psyco, burned-by-love lunatics(I'm fucking pissed as shit that she betrayed me and I'm going to make her life a living hell, but in the end I know we're meant to be together). Kind of odd, but I think I can get over it. Usually I don't like a lot of OCs, but so far your pulling it off really well. I can't wait to read more. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 21:50 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter! Just what did Hito mean when he said he would win the war through Kagome? Surely he doesn't think he can challenge Inuyasha and win??!! I guess I'll just have to wait until the next chapter...sigh!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 06:48 EDT
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one can never underestimate the stupidity of the male of the species... nor can they be properly portrayed in their true glory but you have come close. ~ salutations, ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i would be shitting myself being in Inuyasha's rage!! O.o im just scared thinking of it T_T awww im soo interested what ya going to do with the well lol :P and yea i think Sango and Miroku mihgt have to work on their third to make up for the second :D if Hitomu is going to fight for Kagome... HOLY CRAP!!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 20:29 EDT
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Thank you for bringing all your intresting characters out to play! I thought that Misery was a character that I'd read about recently. Every day I look forward to seeing a new chapter notice in my inbox. Thank you for all of the intresting chapters so far~keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry with another chapter!!! i cant wait to find out what happened to kagome and the well...
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Title: Wait...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha finally accepted that he and Kags are meant to be together. That´s good. All in all a very explanative chapter. Now about the well, you mentioned green eyes staring at Kagome as she came thru the well. Does it have to do with Shippou?
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 15:40 EDT
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Oh dear oh dear. XD Hitomu-no-baka is just like his father! I don't so much thinks he loves Kagome as he's trying to make Inuyasha come to a realization. I don't think he did any sealing. I have to wonder if the well gets destroyed in some way, that'd seal it right? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your fanfic!!!! i cant wait for another review=D so looking forward to the reason why kagome couldnt go hrough the well...and inuyasha!! omg i want inuXKag to resolve it allXD i hope kagome changes history or something so taht he wouldnt have had to be alone for all those years...eeekXP i cant wait...upload soon=D
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Title: I just keeps getting worse...
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me on the edge of my seat for this last part of the chapter, really Hitomu couldn´t have though of something other than that... I would have love to have seen Inuyasha´s face, oh the agony...i guess i will have to wait for the next chapter, maybe before my birthday? (june 6th) What happened when Kagome came through the well, did she unadvertedly seal the well thinking that Inuyasha would distract her coming for her before the time agreed? I am going to love seeing things work out between them, since I like the way you have developed the characters. It´s not the "everyday mushymush Inuyasha-mates-kagome-and-wow-they-had-twins" fic. AND I LIKE IT! Love your writing style, I wish the chapters would be a little longer. Maybe give us a flashback of what happened the day she came through the well, explaining what happened to the time-space quantum-thingy? Yes I know, im ranting...GOod fic, I hope to see more of it soon. :)
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Reviewed By: anonymous... On: June 04, 2008 18:02 EDT
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NICE!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! InuYash is so going to to EXPLODE!! And Hitomu is so dead, or maybe InuYash will blame it all on Kagome... Oh the suspence is killing me! I can't wait for your next Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Jinn Ryu On: June 04, 2008 11:12 EDT
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The email's koyoukai@hotmail.com Another fantastic chappie!(And updated so quickly, too!) I'm really excited for the next one. InuYasha's going to have a fit, and I wouldn't miss it for the world! Plus maybe they'll get some interaction
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