| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: prairie-inu On: May 12, 2008 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent read. I am looking forward to more chapters
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 01:15 EDT
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sweet story left me all warm and tingling. . . i wonder what takahashi-sama has in store for the group once they get kagome out of the meidou that byakuya hit her with before he disintegrated. i guess naraku thinks he's gonna get some kagome/kikyo soul lovin' on the other side? . . i'm looking forward to the continuation of your story. i shall be in eager anticipation. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 22:31 EDT
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So far this story has potential. I like it and want to see where it is going, but I'm sorry I got to nitpick one little point. Ch 2 says she's not in high school yet, prolog says that she shattered the jewel the first time 2 years ago making her 17. Has she failed school every year since meeting Inuyasha and got held back two or three times? That's the only way I can figure that makes sense as to how she could not be in high school yet.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 07:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at the last Chapter I was so saying exactly what InuYasha was saying ("What?") Keep on with the good work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 22:09 EDT
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I like where you're going with this story. Look forward to seeing more. I particularly like how you set it late in the manga. Cool.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 18:41 EDT
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aw so cute! now inuyasha has to tell everyone about sess's offer.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 19:24 EDT
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hmmm what does Sesshomaru mean exactly by making Inuyasha his 'beta'? Does that mean like . . . dunno, heir or something? Commanding officer or something. Hmmm . . . I wonder. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 13:50 EDT
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good opening, cant wait to see more. Update soon
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