| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I bored? HELL, NO!!! This is way cool!! I've read alot of 'pack law' type stories and this is new spin on it. I'm really interested which path your going to take the Inu Crew on. Oh.....Inu so deserved that sit! I'm surprised she stopped at one. *grinning*
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 22:27 EDT
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keep up the good work. Just to let you know the last line has a mess up you might want to fix it really quick. but other then that there is no confusion, it reads smoothly. just like if you were saying it as you were writing it. Good job!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok...I'm curious to see how you twist this plot and make it so that Kags can't go through...there could be a bit more description to the characters and the surroundings, but overall I'm enjoying this fic! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:41 EDT
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I'm glad I added this to my favorites yesterday, major payoff today. Everyone seems in character and interesting plot, can't wait for more :)
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Title: Pack Law
Reviewed By: HayleyM425 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm...ABSOLUTELY LOVING IT! Keep it coming!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nope, not bore or confused, actually damned excited! :D Was wondering how that particular meeting was going to go and Id say it went swimmingly, lol. Liked that flashback on the airport scene, with Inu and Miroku awaiting the plane for the others but seeing a very small Kagome instead. Still brings to mind what had happened and/or what will happen when she goes back, or tries to. Most excellent chap! Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 17:51 EDT
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Damn! You really like leaving us on the edge of our seats! I love how Inuyasha hasn't even considered that perhaps he's the reason she never returned! Kagome might need to sit him into next year to vent the rage she'll be feeling! Loved it! Looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 23:47 EDT
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Ohhh, you're evil!!! leaving it on a cliff like that! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 15:17 EDT
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great last few chapters. Keep up the good work I can't wait to see what happened to seal up the well!! I want to see just what happens when inu sees kegs for the first time in years!!! WOW!! I wonder how many kids Sango and Mir have now!!! Update again soon please!
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Title: waiting
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 14:32 EDT
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um i know ypujust updated ..but how soon will you be updating?
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 17:30 EDT
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the question is... are they going to attempt to prevent the well from closing thus changing history or are they going to go on from the present? . . . one wants to see a happy yasha *hugs the puppy* . . . in eager anticipation...
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better. A lot of conjectures on what couldve happened. Most excellent! Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 06:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No the real problem is... I can picture it... SUV.... you are fantastic...
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 16:47 EDT
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well, Okay, I think this Hitamoto guy *did I spell his name right?* is like Miroku's son or something, and Sarah is Shippo's like . . .granddaughter maybe, Or maybe Hitamoto is like Miroku's grandson, damn I'm confused! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did Kagome seal the well to prevent Inuyasha from coming early or did something else happen that caused the well to seal? Or did someone else seal the well? If it was Kagome she is going to get yelled at by Inuyasha when he sees her next and if not hse is still going to get yelled at by Inuyasha for not noticing the well was sealed. I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
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