| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 20:03 EDT
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if you don't already know about it, there is a great site that has all kinds of facts on sengoku jidai and inuyasha, all of the research without the legwork: hagakureproductions[dot]tripod[dot]com/guides[dot]htm . . . are you going to have yasha ask higurashi-san for her daughter? interesting development with the jewel still broken in modern tokyo. in eager anticipation. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 17:07 EDT
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well, good. Miroku accepted, though I didn't doubt he would. And . . .was that guy going to say something like Uncle? I don't know where I got that from but i was just wondering. Love the chapter. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Dessy On: May 13, 2008 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the idea of this story! I really hope it's one that's the kind that keeps going in ur mind (as an author i mean, Sometimes, the story plot gets boring to the author and they just dont write it as well as they could...) If this was a one to ten, I'd give it a 100! d^_^b two thumbs up! please contiune to update and I cant wait to read the next chappy ^_^ -Dessy
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the fuck indeed. Great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 02:06 EDT
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love yash's explanation to sango and her reaction to his avoidance of admitting just why his proposal to kagome would be different. . . keh. >=D ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 22:13 EDT
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good so far keep up the good work can't wait until a new upload!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 20:00 EDT
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awesome, good to know he's told one of them at least. Wonder how he's gonna tell Kagome? And how is he supossed to explain it to Miroku? God, can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: prairie-inu On: May 12, 2008 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent read. I am looking forward to more chapters
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 01:15 EDT
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sweet story left me all warm and tingling. . . i wonder what takahashi-sama has in store for the group once they get kagome out of the meidou that byakuya hit her with before he disintegrated. i guess naraku thinks he's gonna get some kagome/kikyo soul lovin' on the other side? . . i'm looking forward to the continuation of your story. i shall be in eager anticipation. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 22:31 EDT
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So far this story has potential. I like it and want to see where it is going, but I'm sorry I got to nitpick one little point. Ch 2 says she's not in high school yet, prolog says that she shattered the jewel the first time 2 years ago making her 17. Has she failed school every year since meeting Inuyasha and got held back two or three times? That's the only way I can figure that makes sense as to how she could not be in high school yet.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 07:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
at the last Chapter I was so saying exactly what InuYasha was saying ("What?") Keep on with the good work!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 22:09 EDT
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I like where you're going with this story. Look forward to seeing more. I particularly like how you set it late in the manga. Cool.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 18:41 EDT
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aw so cute! now inuyasha has to tell everyone about sess's offer.
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 19:24 EDT
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hmmm what does Sesshomaru mean exactly by making Inuyasha his 'beta'? Does that mean like . . . dunno, heir or something? Commanding officer or something. Hmmm . . . I wonder. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 13:50 EDT
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good opening, cant wait to see more. Update soon
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