| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry to hear about your troubles, especially your health problems. I hope you get the right meds to lessen the seizures. Good luck with that hurricane dodging you have been doing. On to review: It was good to see Kagome in action showing her displeasure over leaving her families both human and demon. Sango has a right to be upset too since she hardly got to spend any time with Kagome before she was sent away. It might be interesting to see everyone's reaction if Kagome flirts a little with Kouga's son. But that might hurt Inuyasha too much if his mate gives an appearance of possibly preferring another. I was surprised that Kagome didn't give Sesshomaru a jolt of purification when he laid down the edict that she had to leave. I hope something can be done to make the time fly for Inuyasha and Kagome so they can be together. I look forward to see what you come up with next and what Naraku does while they wait to be together.
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 17:27 EDT
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Great chapter.Also, a seizure? Behind the wheel of your car...that must have sucked...
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 05:17 EDT
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i love dai. he seems to have all kouga's good points and a few more on top of those. it will certainly keep inuyasha's anger and jealousy levels up. i've always liked ginta and hakkaku. they never fail to make me laugh. i'm so glad that you included them. the level of testosterone in this story makes me laugh. i know it can only lead to trouble. thank you so much for taking the time to post this amidst all the real life problems.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 23:54 EDT
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This is still going very strong. I do wish they did not have to be seperated and I am thinking about all the loop holes that may help them get together (like she was already consided a sister to the wolfs from the past to the fact that her ring is already almost a talasman.) One thing that did botehr me was why has she not used her healing to help her famliy heal faster? I am sorry I am responding a day late after the post but I though it was best to reread the other chapeters. It is also good to know you are getting better. I can not wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 23:06 EDT
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Lovely chappy! I'm excited to see who Inuyasha's visitor is and hoping that Kagome singes Sesshoumaru's mokomoko or something. I sure as hell would have... (But then again I'm just plain mean!) Love the building of tension between the characters and very interested to see how this comes out. Great work and glad that you've made it through the past few weeks. Toodles for now!
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: September 16, 2008 17:24 EDT
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Another great chapter. I was so glad to see that you had updated. Yay! I look forword to updates in the future. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 11:15 EDT
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If I were Kagome, I'd tell them all to shove it up their ass. Maybe when she's alpha female, she can punish them all, or at least inflict some pain. Inuyasha's rejection of her made me want to drop him in the pits of hell. Bastard. I'd dump them all....I'm sorry to hear about your illness and seizure. I've found that getting sick always sets off my seizures. Sucks. Hope you are over it now. Great chapter. Can't wait to see Kouga! I wonder if he can have more than two mates? Heheh. I'm evil. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! Before my dad first when in to find out if he had epilepsy, he went threw a normal busy intersection and landed on the paddock next to it.. Dai sound Kool!
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Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 00:45 EDT
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^___^ I love the chapter and I can't wait to see who made Yasha smile... Is this an acquaintance pray tell? Keep up the good work, the story is wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 03:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story!! I love the plot its so different then other stories I have read!!! keep up the great work..and update soon!!!:D:D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 23:41 EDT
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♥ hope you're better and everything else is all settled for you and i'm glad you're back! ♥ sincerely, ginny
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a very good Fanfic! One of the best i've ever read on here actually. Great job and please update.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving the story. I like how they have changed with time but at the same time are still the same. I also like how you have made Kagome more powerfull but at the same time have not made her into god mode. Also how the pack as leared and decibes how difrent way of talking to Inu means so much in the pack law. My only problem so far is you are putting so many road blocks between inu and Kagome. Please so not make her wait so long to be with him. Let them get by with a loop whole like saying the ring means she was part of the pack from the past when the age was much lower or something. Please keep adding more.
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: August 14, 2008 18:26 EDT
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Hey GREAT story I can't wait for an update... SOON hopefuly,... Please... Pretty please???
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: July 25, 2008 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story has everything a good story should. The characters are right, the plots well thought out and totally hooking. Please update as soon as the plot bunnies come back. Please!
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