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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 08:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol... that's WAY too long... and most people really cant just give up driving for that long... GREAT chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* whats wrong with The Green Mile?? it isnt that bad :P n'awww that would have been one of the cutest sights... Kagome sitting in Inuyasha lap ^___^ oooo Ki is Kikyo?? oo god help us if thats true... i can just see Shippo, a human, fat... LOL!! pieces are set?? and now the blood comes... right?? :D with much love and get well!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh if I am right on who this new aide to Naraku is you are sneaky. Was she a miko at some point in her life? I am not surprised that Kagome sensed Inuyasha around before he showed up. Her getting hurt was the surest way to bring him out into the open. I wonder what he thinks of her little tirade just before he appeared though. I love the way your OCs interact so well with the canon characters in such believable ways. The kids act like you would think their kids would act. And I loved the comment about Shippou getting too many sweets as a kid. Kagome's memories of her friends should show them in a new light to their descendants. It was a touching well written scene. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh if I am right on who this new aide to Naraku is you are sneaky. Was she a miko at some point in her life? I am not surprised that Kagome sensed Inuyasha around before he showed up. Her getting hurt was the surest way to bring him out into the open. I wonder what he thinks of her little tirade just before he appeared though. I love the way your OCs interact so well with the canon characters in such believable ways. The kids act like you would think their kids would act. And I loved the comment about Shippou getting too many sweets as a kid. Kagome's memories of her friends should show them in a new light to their descendants. It was a touching well written scene. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 23:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i can remember the OCs you entered in the chapter :P oo Inuyasha is trying to get of the house to Kagome *giggles* and its kinda hard to see Sesshoumaru talktive person... well demon XD i was getting all excited towards the end XD cant wait :P and what my doctor always says to me.. watch something that you will remember for a while... so watch all the comdeys you can.. laughter is the best cure :D
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 04:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
doctors are expensive... My friend just got recently diagnosed with some more allergies (other that milk, which the knew from last time, beer (which explains why she had like only half a can and threw up... ) and the medication that she has just been put on is making her nauseous... (I just spent the weekend with her...) At least with Epilepsy usually once you get the right medication going, every thing is alright (as long as you remember to take it...) are you allowed to drive? (one thing that makes it very hard, depending on how server, the limits of what (eg buses, trucks are some of the things my dad is not allowed to drive due to his epilepsy) On to other things this chapter was great... all your characters were great... Sesshoumaru's had some time to "mellow out..." which is some thin that really needed to be done to work with InuYasha and not be stressed over the hills...
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 08:11 EDT
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what i like most about this story is how you keep it packed with a full range of emotions, yet still manage to give it the edge of humor. it's not an easy thing to do. but having found that balance, you've made this one of the most pleasant and easy reads i've ever found. i love all your oc's. you've given them enough life through your words that i care every bit as much about them as i do about the previously known characters. i thought it was very cleaver to use kagome's letters in this chapter to work in little bits of knowledge. it was such a natural tool in the story setting. i'm glad that i could be a small inspiration for such a wonderful story.
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Title: something to help you feel better
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 06:00 EDT
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i9. photobucket. com/albums/a55/ginduf/chaps. jpg ♥remove the spaces after the dots! ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 00:08 EDT
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one wonders who all reads her correspondence to her mother, one would hope there is someone who censers the location and names of anyone she is with. espionage 101, even hints as to the location of an operative is to be kept strictly confidential. all correspondence and contact is to be rerouted just as a hacker would bounce to many different i.p.addresses all over the world to confuse trackers because even i can trace an i.p.address and get a general location (city). i'm sure someone who actually knows what they're doing can find out a whole lot more. ♠ it's good that she's learning what she's supposed to, if she could only find a way to use her obsession with golden eyes to her advantage. i'm attempting to alter a picture of a man with chaps into someone familiar for you, i do have one of yasha in motorcycle leathers in my deviantART gallery if you're interested. he looks good in leather. ♥ truly a pleasure ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the plotting and planning going on by all sides. I am surprised that Kouga and Ayami weren't told about Kagome earlier, they were her friends, sorta. I knew Inuyasha wasn't going to quietly sit by and have Kagome half a world away now that they are reunited and he has had proof that she never deserted him. I like this new inu, she sounds like she would make life interesting for Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. I hope things work out for Sarah and Dai. She sounds as if she is very smitten with him. I can't wait to see what happens next and what this new incarnation of Naraku is capable of doing. She seems to care about Naraku, as hard as that seems.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this is going. I also like how you are hinting that Kagome's center is inuyasha even though she is not acceping it yet. It does make sense since he is the center of her world and she is his. I am looking foward to the next part.
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 10:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always get so excited when I see you have updated. And I can't help but read every chapter several times. I just love this story! Love it to bits! But most recently after reading this chapter I have come to love Dai..I just love his character. And boy do I ever look foward to his next appearances in the story. I LOVE HIM! Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 17:48 EDT
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sorry you were sick, so glad things are getting better for you. happy you updated! ♣ seems like the chaos and problems are only just beginning. one can only wonder what insanity kagome's presence is going to do to her stay in america. i'm not much of an artist so i won't attempt it but i can just imagine what kouga would look like in leather chaps... always wanted to see the boys in kilts too. *opens tab to devientART to search for yash and kouga in chaps or kilt* i'll share if i find anything. ♥ a delight! &hearts ginny
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 07:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would HATE to be on the receiving end of Kagome's anger.. *cringes* but ooo are you alright?? ive gotten out of hospital a month ago :D nearly fighting fit :D and n'awww i can sooo see Inuyasha flying to Kagome ^_______^
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 20:54 EDT
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Loved the new chapter! I really hope InuYasha finds a way to sneak over to America to get kagome back lol that would be funny :D
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