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| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] | | Pages (22): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 23:00 EDT
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i'm not into the whole 'dominant male'/'submissive female' thing but if you put it that way...
| Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel so sorry for Inuyasha having to wait for Kagome some more. They deserve to be together. I do have to say that Kouga is a good choice of substitute protector for Kagome. I just hope Hitomu doesn't end up dead, he is becoming a favorite character. If he has to interfere with Inuyasha getting close to Kagome one more time I fear he won't survive the encounter. Congrats on the win, you deserve it.
| Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 09:14 EDT
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another bump in the road for our favorite pair? how long will the separation last? i loved your steamy scene. the emotional power you gave to a more mature inuyasha came through so well. it would be fun to read kagome's thoughts of the incident in more depth. it would be daunting for a 16 year old girl to come up against something like that. i can't wait to read the interaction between kagome and kouga. and inuyasha and kouga. the opportunities for dramatics and comedy between the two males are always fun to read. i'm glad you're bringing him into the story. your story deserves all the recognition it gets. thank you for this source of enjoyment.
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whine of disappointment, this was SUCH a great chapter!
| Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always good. Lime content was supurb. I'm sorry but even if Kouga is mated there's gonna be problems-a-brew'n. With Kags being near Kouga and Hito, Inu going to go balistic (not in a good way). Inu's youkai is very aggressive. I likey ALOT. I guess that's what happens after taking cold showers for 500 years. LOL
| Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 01:41 EDT
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Congrats on your wins!! I know the IYfanguild noms are underway, and your fic has been nom'd in a few catagories!! so good luck! Now on to the review! I do a little happy dance when i get the new chap alert in my inbox!!! this chapter was amazing!!! Poor Inu....so close.....Kagome's gotta be gnashing a few teeth in frustration as well. The citrusy section was great...and to have Hito be the one to interupt them (i'm truly amazed the boy is still concious!) was brilliant.....EVIL but brilliant! And now Inuyasha must be seperated from her again, while she runs about the countryside with both Hito and Koga??? you truly love to torture these two! I can't wait to see how this plays out....I have a sneaking suspicion our hanyou is going to go AWOL shortly after she leaves so he can "protect" Kagome from the ones he views as rivals!!! This ought to be interesting!!!!! I would really like to see more of Sango in this fic tho....you don't give her much attention for being a high ranking member of the pack......
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even if Koga is mated, i still think theres going to be trouble :P and we were sooo close with Inuyasha and Kagome :P and im surprised that Hitomu didnt died XD and congraz on your winnings :D
| Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 21:14 EDT
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excellent plot twist! I wasn't expecting that. Kagome submitting to koga is going to be...interesting.
| Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT.... Can't wait to see/hear Kagome's reaction ... not only to going to Koga's Pack, but what just happened between her and InuYasha (and PLEASE, PLEASE, let her give Miroku a piece--even small one-- of her mind about stopping her from going back early.. I still think he has some nerve --- hey, let InuYasha get wind of that too.) Well, I'll go so you can get back to your writing. Can't wait for the next chapters to come... Rhonda
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 06:29 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestincharacterfiction3rd1.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 06:03 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestdramafiction3rd2.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: S On: July 04, 2008 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story!!!!! One question.This is a inuyasha and kagome pairing right?
| Title: Love Pack Law
Reviewed By: rhmarie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story...I always get a thrill when I see that you have updated. Just a few thoughts.. I'm hoping that you have Kagome/InuYasha talk, one on one, about why he didn't tell her about Pack Law and what Sess proposed. If I were Kagome I would have a hard time dealing with the fact that he told/asked everyone else, before he even approached me. I'd feel like he was saying I wasn't pack back then - course then he'd have to explain, etc... Also... I think Miroku needs to have his butt kicked too. She wanted to go back before that Saturday and he said no, change time line. I'd be ticked off if I were Kagome, who did he think he was? I'd probably lash out saying stuff like... Seems you moved on, didn't seem to miss me too much if you didn't want things to change, InuYasha have time to grow up?? What we couldn't grow together, you thought I would hurt his growing? What if everything would have been better, easier, InuYasha could have dealt with insecurtiy issues already, etc... Then I'd probably say... For me, it's been a week, for you it's been 500yrs, and all of you are different and have different lives, had more experiences. I'm still 16 without lifes experiences. I'm not sure we can be pack or go back to what we once shared. I will always care about y'all, but I have to take some time and mourn the lose of my feudal family, for to me, they are gone and because of YOU I didn't go back when I could have. The fight would not have occurred if I had gone back and who knows but we may have already taken care of Naraku in the past if I had gone back. If I had known about Pack Law and how I would live to see my family again, I would not have worried about school or the well closing... I'd probably say something like that (feel free to have her have a conversation if you want -hint) I would just LOVE to see her show a mature side of herself cause all her feudal family, even InuYasha, has now outgrown her in maturity levels and she needs to catch up FAST if she wants to stand on her own feet. I do love this story and a good story to me captures my imagination -- the what if's, run thru my mind. What if... she were to leave and (for couple of chapters, covering 5 years or so) have interactions with others, maybe meet other Inu-youkai or other demons, become part of their world... how would InuYasha react, would the bonds still be there (course they would), would InuYasha want to beat Miroku over the head for not letting Kagome go back when she wanted? hmmm, the I wonders get me everytime. Course, if I were Kagome, when they told me I never returned thru the well, it closed and I never came back, I'd have had to go straight home, pack a ton of suitcases and jump right back in... I'm sure she is going to have the "If only I had not listened to Miroku" thoughts. ANYWAY... Thanks for writing and sharing your world with us, update as quickly and often as you can so my mind doesn't explode with "what ifs" and I can turn down the path you take the story and put to rest those what ifs and start others (haha)... hmmm, seems I'm long winded today, so I'll stop typing now and let you get back to work... hint/hint (sorry couldn't resist). Have a great day and thanks again.. Rhonda
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best line..."I know you've always wanted to change the world… I can't help but wish you would have just gone into medicine instead…" Kagome needs to help InuYasha break down those wall he has up.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo were getting a limey next... cant wait :P and awwww Inuyasha let something slip out :P i love how that happens :P and i think im alright with the pack laws soo far ^___^ hasnt confused me yet :P
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